https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8 What did you learn to do better as you wrote this text dependent analysis? What is still difficult for you? en-us 2018-01-19 12:46:04 UTC 2018-01-22 14:23:17 UTC hello@padlet.com jocelynwintermote https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222766966 I learned to use better transition words. What is the most difficult to me is coming up with a good conclusion.]]> 2018-01-19 13:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222766966 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222767065 I learned to always use the claim at the end of your introduction paragraph. It was a little easier due to us doing the TDA of Burmese Pythons beforehand. But it was difficult to word the first paragraph due to I not having a hook in the first place.]]> 2018-01-19 13:39:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222767065 aryannabryant https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222780757 I learned how to quote my evidence better and then paraphrase on it. it was still difficult to create a hook/claim.]]> 2018-01-19 14:11:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222780757 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781154 I learned to close read and how to organize a paper better then I did before.]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781154 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781375 I learned how to quote and paraphrase my evidence better ]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781375 cadendevlin https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781389 I learned that you should not just use quotes and to paraphrase.]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781389 jessicamilesky https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781436 One thing I learned that i should do better is to put in my sources and give credit to the author. It is still difficult to remember to use different words than the author used in the article.]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781436 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781511 This TDA helped me understand how to cite evidence out of an article and it helped me get a basic understanding of how to write a decent document using text dependent usage. It wasn't hard for me, even though sometimes it took me a while to search for specific evidence in an article, and once i got what i needed i went through this TDA like a breeze. Also, this TDA made an amazing way to help me in the making of how to paraphrase better than before.


]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781511 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781521 I learned how to find and collect evidence more officiant and find good evidence]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781521 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781553 I learned to use quotes and show where I got it from. ]]> 2018-01-19 14:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781553 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781582 I learned how to paraphrase better and i learned how  to write better. 

Doing the wrighting.]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781582 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781646 i learned better transition]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781646 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781681 I learned to have patience when writing a tda and to use signal words when quoting. ]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781681 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781738 it helped me find evidence and use quotes.]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781738 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781773 I learned to use quotes for any words i took directy from the text]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781773 rhiannaphillips https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781838 I learned that there needs to be more evidence to support your statement, and that signal words are important. With this I also was taught that multiple paragraphs help get the message out clearer]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781838 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781839 I learned to write a better introduction. This was a bit difficult.

]]> 2018-01-19 14:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222781839 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782178 I learned how to collect evidence better in this TDA and I am still struggling with what to write for my thesis statement and conclusion.]]> 2018-01-19 14:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782178 kelseypearson https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782508 I learned how to paraphrase and and cite my evidence better.]]> 2018-01-19 14:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782508 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782697 i learned how to properly cite evidence ]]> 2018-01-19 14:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782697 ssummerson https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782906 I learned that to paraphrase better. I am still struggling with writing a good hook.]]> 2018-01-19 14:15:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222782906 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222795332 just hva e a seaarch ]]> 2018-01-19 14:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222795332 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811389 This Burmese Python TDA taught me a multitude of new things that i can show improvement in. The first one of which was how it showed me to create an easier flow in my writing by adding the authors source and by paraphrasing. One of the other things I now know how to do better is how to correctly cite evidence while still keeping the reader informed and entertained. One of the last things I learned from this TDA is how to make it even easier to find evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 15:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811389 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811407 I learned how to get better evidence and write better. Writing paragraphs is still a little difficult though.]]> 2018-01-19 15:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811407 tiffanyduong https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811767 I learned to cite the articles used to make this TDA as well as their authors. Finding synonyms for certain words are difficult for me because I cannot use a thesaurus.]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811767 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811795 I learned how to paraphrase better.]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811795 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811849 I learned ]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222811849 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812004 I learned that you can be doing plagiarism when you are trying to paraphrase. I am still bad with citing evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812004 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812036 During this TDA I learned more about how to quote and paraphrase better.]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812036 sofiageorgino https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812081 I learn how to use signal word when i'm quoting something.]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812081 angelinacrisalli https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812104 I learned to give ]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812104 blairhoward1 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812125 I learned how to collect evidence and how to cite ]]> 2018-01-19 15:13:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812125 ssummerson https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812586 What I learned from the tda is how to cite evidence and how using evidence from the text to support my statement.]]> 2018-01-19 15:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812586 jacquelinemorrow https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812594 I learned how to make research easier by organizing the evidence next to the parts you want to add to your essay in your own words.]]> 2018-01-19 15:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222812594 emiliecapobianco https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222813222 I learned how to how to cite evidence better and I need help with writing.]]> 2018-01-19 15:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222813222 ssummerson https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222813677 I learned to cite evidence better while doing this TDA. I still have trouble with finding evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 15:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222813677 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815143 I learned that I'm much better at writing at YEA than last year.

]]> 2018-01-19 15:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815143 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815761 2018-01-19 15:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815761 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815793 2018-01-19 15:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222815793 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222860964 I learned when writing my TDA essay on Burmese pythons that sometimes instead of using a quote paraphrasing is better. I still need help with how to transition from one sentence to another without repeating myself.]]> 2018-01-19 16:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222860964 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861024 I learned to source evidence better and collect evidence  but i'm still bad at siting evidence ]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861024 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861096 i learned that instead of plagiarism you can paraphrase  and informative TDA are easy to do eassys on

]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861096 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861253 I learned how to properly cite text and I don't find anything else hard or difficult. ]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861253 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861278 I learned how to cite my evidence. I still need help on how to give background information.]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861278 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861336 I learned to cite my evidence more and something that is still difficult for me to do is finding the right evidence to use ]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861336 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861350 When we started this TDA I learned how to paraphrase better. I still struggle to cite my evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 16:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861350 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861431 As we did this TDA it helped me get better when i paraphrase a quote and I learned how to properly cite my evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861431 ashtonmay https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861463 2018-01-19 16:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861463 deannahoffman https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861478 I learned how to write a good intro. One thing that I still need help on is writing a good conclusion. ]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861478 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861490 I learned how to cite better and how to write a better essay overall.]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861490 reagankidd https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861518 i learned a lot while i was writing this like citing eveidence and pharaphrase better and make sure i dont plagerise and lots of other things]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861518 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861599 This TDA helped me to paraphrase and use more descriptive words. I still struggle with citing evidence and finding evidence.]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861599 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861600 i learned how to explain my evidence  better but i think i need more help with my intro more.

]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861600 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861614 i learned to source my evidence better and to make a good hook ヽ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ﾉ]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861614 cameronwhitman https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861647 How to paraphrase better and ow to work by myself /:

]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861647 kaylamoseley https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861729 I learned how to cite my evidence  better  and I need to work in writing enough

]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861729 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861766 As I wrote this text dependent analysis I learned how to make a lot better of a body paragraph.]]> 2018-01-19 16:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861766 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861801 i learned all about the snakes that they can be as wide as a telephone pole and can be ]]> 2018-01-19 16:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861801 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861808 I learned how to cite the evidence better and to explain it. I still have trouble how to paraphrase still

]]> 2018-01-19 16:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222861808 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222862029 i learned how to site evidence]]> 2018-01-19 16:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222862029 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942141 Go over my sentences more and fix the problems that i get in my sentences.I need to start writing more towards the end and not rushing to get in done.]]> 2018-01-19 20:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942141 kaemonmagee https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942161 I learned how to write a claim. What was difficult was that if i had to do all of that my self.]]> 2018-01-19 20:16:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942161 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942184 It helped me get better at writing a TDA and putting quotes into an essay. Something that I am still having trouble with is sometimes still Plagarism.]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942184 nicholasguyer https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942187 I learned how easy it is for me to write  and while we are doing this story i have  learned so much about the Burmese Python and how cool it is and while doing this i learned so much about these pythons and this story is really interesting so far.

]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942187 tannerrosario https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942199 I learned that i needed to dig deeper in the article and think more on what i write.┌( ಠ‿ಠ)┘]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942199 jalenrenwick https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942250 I learned to write my conclusion I need to work on paraphrasing ]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942250 haydenminette https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942254 I learned to be more wordy, but we couldn't use some words like animals because it's considered "plagerizm", I mean really

]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942254 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942258 As i wrote this TDA i learned how to not plagarise.

]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942258 tylerbowser https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942296 i learned that you need to find as much evidence as you can]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942296 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942337 learned how to cite evidence]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942337 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942565 I learned how to make my evidence better and i need more help with conclusions.

]]> 2018-01-19 20:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942565 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942710

]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942710 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942716 i got better at writing a hook and i am still struggling with a conclusions]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942716 dylanmitchell https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942741 learned how not to do quotes better.]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942741 harliwatts https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942950 it helped me learn to paraphrase ]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942950 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942999 i learned how to properly site evidence from the ]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222942999 giannigonzales https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943059 I learned that i needed to dig deeper in the article]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943059 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943100 i need to reed the articl more and nothing]]> 2018-01-19 20:18:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943100 ryanlouth https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943133
it helped

]]> 2018-01-19 20:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943133 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943164 i got better at writing a hook.]]> 2018-01-19 20:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/222943164 https://padlet.com/ssummerson/timbv8vg7ey8/wish/223338249 YOU PEOPLE NEED A SNICKER

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