Excess Words Exercises 1-5 by

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:01:24 UTC

Tighten the language in the following sentences by eliminating fluff, glue, nominalizations, unneeded-its, etc.

1.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:02:22 UTC

The reading of the protocol might lead to the conclusion that no other participant of the limited liability company, nor any third party, acquired company shares.

2.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:03:52 UTC

Under the Joint Stock Companies Law, a monetary valuation of property contributed as payment for shares during the foundation of a company is carried out by agreement between its founders.

3.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:04:35 UTC

In the event that our client makes a purchase of over 30% of the shares of the company, it is clear that there is a necessity to obtain the permission of the existing shareholders for him to participate in voting the shares that are in addition to the 30%

4.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:05:21 UTC

It seems somewhat possible to allow our client's participation in voting for an amendment of the charter of the company, which would allow the charter to be amended in favor of authorizing shareholders to make a purchase of over 30% while retaining voting rights for their additional shares.

5.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:06:56 UTC

You have asked us to provide you with an opinion as to whether Company A can sell its shares to Company B prior to the re-registration of Company A.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:06:58 UTC

Tighten the language in the following sentences by eliminating fluff, glue, nominalizations, unneeded-its, etc.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:07:07 UTC

Tighten the language in the following sentences by eliminating fluff, glue, nominalizations, unneeded-its, etc.

mdent12 — 2022-12-05 11:07:17 UTC

Tighten the language in the following sentences by eliminating fluff, glue, nominalizations, unneeded-its, etc.

1.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:07:59 UTC

The protocol reading might assume that the limited liability company participant or any third party did not acquire company shares.

1.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:09:16 UTC

The protocol suggests that no one aquired company shares.

1.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:09:25 UTC

Under the protocol, seemingly, no one acquired the limited liability company's shares.

2.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:09:34 UTC

Under the Joint Stock Companies Law, during the company's foundation the founders may agree on monetary valuation of property contributed as payment for shares.

2.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:09:41 UTC

Under the Joint Stock Companies Law, at a company foundation its founders must agree on monetary valuation of property contributed as payment for shares.

2.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:09:49 UTC

Joint Stock Companies Law provides that founders should sign an agreement to pay a property value at the foundation

3.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:10:47 UTC

If our client purchases of over 30% of the company's shares, the client shall obtain the existing shareholders' permission to vote the shares exceeding the 30%

3.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:10:57 UTC

Before purchasing more than 30 per cent of the company shares, our client has to ensure that the existing shareholders agree on him voting the shares exceeding the 30 pre cent.

3.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:11:06 UTC

If our client purchases over 30% of the company's shares, the existing shareholders clearly should consent on his participation to vote the shares exceeding 30%

4.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:13 UTC

Probably, our Client may vote for the company's charter amendment, which would allow authorizing shareholders to make a purchase of over 30% while retaining voting rights for their additional shares.

4.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:21 UTC

Our client may participate in a vote to amend the company's charter to allow shareholders to acquire more than 30% of the shares while retaining voting rights for those additional shares.

4.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:31 UTC

Out client is allowed to vote for the company's charter amendment to authorize shareholders to purchase over 30% to retain voting rights for their additional shares

5.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:41 UTC

You have asked us to opine whether Company A can sell its shares to Company B prior to the Company A's re-registration.

5.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:49 UTC

You asked us whether Company A, before being re-registered, can sell its shares to Company B.

5.

mdent12 — 2023-04-10 14:19:57 UTC

Following your request, whether Company B can purchase Company A's shares before it's re-registration.