Alicia

Kevin

Madeline

Yi Hsiang

Concept:Family Ambition

Hi guys! =D

Location : Sheikka's house

Venue : Secret

Time : Undecided.

Day 1 : Discussion

Day 2 : Planning? Nah , Discussion

Day 3 : Pass up

Okay , faster discuss something!

2.We can add more details

3.We can add paint to the box for style

4.We can make our meeting more organised , instead of meetings that we don't focus on and play on our phone

5.We can make it more fun , motivate each other to make a better quality work and get good grades! :)

6.We can make it serious , meant for professionals only , to make us more serious about our work.

7.We can get a peaceful and quiet spot with nice scenery so that we will not feel depress or lazy about our work.

8.How about we make our story more interesting? So we can allow our readers (Mr Hosea Lee btw!) to continue read on and not feel bored about it.

9.How about making our story with actions? That shall make our readers think that the characters are cool! (Like when Hari arrived at Bombay , and the bus almost ran over him , then the bus driver is mad at them , and the policemen also make fun of Hari , telling us Hari is a easy target to pick on , like how the policemen taunted Hari and his other friend.)

10. We can choose to make a deeper and more complicated (not so , or readers (Mr Hosea Lee O_o) will just reduce our marks for complication , or like even they sort the parts of the story up , they still couldn't understand our story.

11.We can use the part 'Hopeless Drunk mens , dead drunk in the morning , what can they do for u?' (not very accurate) to tell that Mr De Silva hates drunktards , as they are useless , making it more easier for our readers to understand that Mr De Silva is actually mocking the drunktards (including his father) , not just saying about the drunktard's hopelessness.

12. Make the paper nicer for the readers , as they like nice handwriting. (kinda...)

13.We can write about how Hari wished to soar in the sky , instead of tied to earth in a way that the readers can understand better, Hari wished for freedom , the thing everyone yearns for , except FOR us the city peoples , we only thinks of electronic gadgets , we have completely forgotten about freedom!

This line can tell us! That we , the city people should act before its too late! We are arrogant enough! We have polluted the air , land and water! Just for our pleasure! Just to live leisurely! And just for fun! We arent behaving like humans anymore! We have to act now!

14. We can write about how Hari experienced and explored the city , Bombay , and how he thinks about them. Like example , 'I can teach u how to make money,for a small fee' He knows that the city is much more dangerous than his peaceful area , Thul , He thinks that all Bombay people are evil , inhuman and creepy.(Background is city , hahaha!)

15. We can write about how Thul is scary too! We cannot say that Thul is peaceful! The brother at the other door threatens to kill Pinto , Pinto died in the end! Telling us that Thul is dangerous! Hari has to stop thinking about Bombay ! Think about his area inhumanity!

Our Discussion ends here today!

Sheikka : Ideas for box

Madeline : Ideas for meetings

Alicia : Ideas for making story more interesting

Yi Hsiang : Ideas for readers to feel excited about the story

Kevin : Ideas for a good story

Regards ,

Kevin and his Lit team

Btw we alr passed up our diorama project , what to do now?

Regards,

Kevin and his Lit team