https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on en-us 2021-12-13 05:28:34 UTC 2021-12-20 02:53:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956153224 Glow: I really enjoyed the visuals of your presentation and think overall, you did a very good job on all of your slides presented. 
Grow: I would have made the sound on the video louder by maybe editing it, or spoken a little louder and close to the mic. Other than that, very well done!]]> 2021-12-20 02:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956153224 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956153787 Glow: I really like how you made your narration very personal and not robotic, that was the most enjoyable part of the presentation.
Grow: Maybe add in some more eye-catching colors next time ]]> 2021-12-20 02:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956153787 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956154008 Glow: I like how in depth you went with your entire presentation, visually and verbally. I think you went into detail quite a lot which gives the audience a lot of insight on the topic you are talking about. 
Grow: I would have used a lot less blocks of text in the presentation and would have stuck to something more like points or topics that you could expand on just verbally. ]]> 2021-12-20 02:23:47 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956154008 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956154261 Glow: I really liked how you structured your points by explaining them before reflecting on them in your personal life. I think that allowed the audience to tie all your points together very well. 
Grow: I really liked the presentation itself. I just didnt seem to be able to rewind or pause the video through the way you uploaded it onto blendspace. ]]> 2021-12-20 02:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956154261 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956158017 Glow: I really liked how all the slides were very detailed within the sway presentation. Very colorful and attention-grabbing. I like how you go into detail with everything that is presented in terms of the verbal presentation.
Grow: I would have just preferred if the mic quality was a little clearer and less texts on slides. ]]> 2021-12-20 02:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956158017 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956162844 Glow: I really liked all of the images used in the presentation, it was very clean looking and well organized.
Grow: Personally, I would not have placed a direct script on the slides themselves, or read them verbatim. Maybe next time try putting less chunks of writing in the presentation and more subtitles or direct points. ]]> 2021-12-20 02:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956162844 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956193063 Glow: I like how you introduced your topics by explaining what each one meant before going more in depth about them and how they are in your life. I also like how you didn't really have any long pieces of text in your slides.
Grow: I think this was a very good presentation and have no critiques on that itself. I was just not able to pause or rewind the video. ]]> 2021-12-20 02:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956193063 https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956195954 Glow: I liked this presentation so much! From the narration, to the color and images used, and the personal insight in all of the topics presented. I think its evident to see that you put a lot of time and effort into this presentation.
Grow: I would just have spoken a bit less robotically, it sounds slightly like you are reading off a paper, but other than that it was great!]]> 2021-12-20 02:53:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyhamberland1/teumtsz3y3ypb3on/wish/1956195954