Show Don't Tell by https://padlet.com/lizzye_1994/tepb6r3iexwd30qg Which Sentence Do You Prefer and Why? en-us 2022-02-21 19:43:06 UTC 2022-02-22 11:25:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Sentence two because it is more descriptive https://padlet.com/lizzye_1994/tepb6r3iexwd30qg/wish/2060362478 2022-02-22 11:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lizzye_1994/tepb6r3iexwd30qg/wish/2060362478 https://padlet.com/lizzye_1994/tepb6r3iexwd30qg/wish/2060362872 Sentence 2- creates a better picture in my head

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