Form 1 Set 10 English Writing Board by Wong Lok Lam (Rachel) https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09 en-us 2023-11-13 02:04:21 UTC 2024-05-01 08:29:24 UTC hello@padlet.com Ms Wong: Future of a Character llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2786584122 Question: Your designated character is writing a diary entry after the track meet. He/she reflects on his/her performance, talks about his/her plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what he/she will be like in 10 years (when they graduate high school). Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.


Example


Dear Diary,

Today was such a scary day! Seeing that the Big Bad Wolf could break into Grandma's home, I'm already __________ (head) to the hardware store to buy a stronger lock and security camera for Grandma. I'm ____________________ (set) up a comprehensive security system to protect Grandma. Later when I graduate from university, I __________ (be) a lawyer so I can imprison or punish animals and people who harm innocent people, and restore law and order to my town!

]]> 2023-11-13 02:06:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2786584122 November Vocabulary llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2790518374 Question: Apply at least 3 words from this month's list of vocabulary items to describe 1 character from any short story we have read this semester.


Example: Little Red Cap is gullible because she has little sense of caution when talking to strangers or understanding the bad intentions of strangers such as those from the sneaky and devious wolf. Nonetheless, she is an exuberant character who ventures far away to bring food, joy and laughter to her grandmother.

]]> 2023-11-15 08:43:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2790518374 Vocabulary Exercise sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791986681 The Fisherman from 'Fisherman and His Wife' was a cowardly man because he always listened to his wife's unreasonable requests.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791986681 Vocabulary Exercise sp20235821_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791987454 The Smart Alec is sneaky as he sneaked snuck in and eat ate the ice-cream.


]]> 2023-11-16 06:38:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791987454 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791987960 The main character in Smart Alec is a an extrovert and is exuberant. He is also proactive.


]]> 2023-11-16 06:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791987960 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791988207 The smart ice cream boy is too gullible, as he was being easily tricked into eating the whole tub of smart ice cream. He is introverted moreover the opposite meaning of extroverted, as he always bullies others and has no friends at all. He thinks he tops the class and is extremely pompous, as he thinks he's the best and always boasts and brags about his full marks.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791988207 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791988681 The main character in Smart ice cream is very hostile. He also boasted in front of his classmates, and thought he was the best. Fortunately, he learnt a lesson after eating a the wrong ice cream.


]]> 2023-11-16 06:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791988681 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791990043 The wife from 'Fisherman and His Wife' was a possessive woman because she gives gave demanding orders to her husband and forces forced him to do them.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:41:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791990043 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791990714 Betty Widdershins from the book A Pinch of Magic is a pioneering girl who is obsessed with the world map. She finds it extremely fascinating, and therefore, she is always keen on going on an adventure. Although her grandmother is hostile to her, she always shows an affectionate smile and is exuberant.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791990714 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791991802 The government in the Examination Day is patronizing as they killed innocent Dick.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791991802 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791992562 I think that Raymond might be a gullible boy since he isn't as smart as average people. This might make him be easily deceived and or tricked.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791992562 Vocabulary Exercise https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791993607 Little red cap is cowardly because when she saw Big Bad Wolf ate eating up her grandma, she was scared and couldn't do anything. Also she is gullible as she don't didn't have any sense of protecting herself. When you met meet some stranger asking you personal things, you are supposed to refuse to answer or go away. However, she's affable. She would talk to any stranger.

]]> 2023-11-16 06:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2791993607 Group 1: Squeaky llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635086 Question: Squeaky is writing a diary entry after the track meet. She reflects on her performance, talks about her plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what she will be like in 10 years (when she graduates from high school). Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:31:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635086 Group 2: Squeaky llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635263 Question: Squeaky is writing a diary entry after the track meet. She reflects on her performance, talks about her plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what she will be like in 10 years (when she graduates from high school). Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635263 Group 3: Raymond llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635423 Question: Raymond is writing a diary entry after the track meet. He reflects on his performance, talks about his plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what he will be like in 10 years. Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635423 Group 4: Raymond llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635543 Question: Raymond is writing a diary entry after the track meet. He reflects on his performance, talks about his plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what he will be like in 10 years. Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635543 Group 5: Gretchen llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635686 Question: Gretchen is writing a diary entry after the track meet. She reflects on her performance, talks about her plans and intentions for the new track season, and wonders what she will be like in 10 years (when she graduates from high school). Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635686 Group 6: Squeaky's Mom llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635938 Question: Squeaky's mom is writing a diary entry after the track meet. She reflects on her parenting, talks about her plans and intentions for her relationship with Squeaky, and wonders what kind of parent she will be like in 10 years (when Squeaky graduates from high school). Write at least 3 sentences using going to + Infinitive, will/shall + Infinitive, and/or present continuous.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2792635938 Raymond's Diary Entry https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793475049 Dear Diary,

I just finished the track meet, and I got second place. I am a bit disappointed. I am participating in another race next week. I am going to work harder and get first place. In 10 years, I will participate in the Olympic Games. I will make Squeaky proud!

]]> 2023-11-17 04:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793475049 group 1 squeaky sp20235191_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793477552 dear diary:

today i am going to think about my plans for the future and also write about my performance during the track meet.

i think that i did a good job during the track meet, i am going to ask gretchen to coach my brother and i think we are going to get along with each other.

after 10 years, i think i will become a very famous running coach and runner. i am going to study sports and medicine to help more people with intellectual disability.

this is the end of my dairy, good bye.

]]> 2023-11-17 04:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793477552 The diary entry of Gretchen From Kingston and Ethan https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793478035 Dear Diary,

After I have lost to Squeaky on the race track, I have some reflection on my performance. I figured that coaching Raymond is better for me. So I am going to coach Raymond in the future and make him a better runner . This is going to help him develop his potential or else he is going to be a kid with no passion and developed potential. After ten years when I graduate from high school, I will be a professional coach and open classes to help kids with running potential to develop their running skills.

]]> 2023-11-17 04:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793478035 Diary Entry https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793479295 Dear Diary,


After observing the track race Squeaky and Raymond participated in, I truly regret how I treated both of them. I noticed the potential Squeaky had in running, and I should have let her pursue her dreams as an athlete. I have decided to lift my requirements of fitting in Squeaky's gender qualities, and I am going to express deep support for her athletic endeavors. I am planning on sponsoring her training courses, hoping to shape her talents too! I will try my best to support her now, and forever.

]]> 2023-11-17 04:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793479295 Group 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793482260 Dear diary,

Today's track meet really got me thinking about my performances and my plans for the new track season. I think that I did well for the track event today, at least I got the first today. However, I think that I should try and improve my speed. I am going to the park tonight and improving my skills and abilities for the better. After the next season, I am going to retire from my running career and move on to coach Raymond on his running skills and try teaching him to home in in his running abilities. I think that I will either be a coach or an athlete when I grow up since I like sports from an early age. I think that I will try to coach people with disabilities because some of them might really have a great potential in sports but was hidden because of their abilities. I need to go and train now. Bye.

]]> 2023-11-17 04:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2793482260 Simple Present Tense and Progressive Aspect llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2802486852 Question:

You are writing a sports commentary for any sports game (including the May Day race in Raymond's Run). Write at least 3 sentences using simple present tense and present continuous. You may consider whether the action is planned / unplanned, permanent / temporary, complete / incomplete, etc.


Example:

Just a reminder to people watching this show for the first time, curling ___ (be) a game similar to lawn bowls but played on ice (Fact). As we can see in this match, both players ___ (slide) round stones across the ice rink! (Complete action occurring as we speak) Player A's stone ___ (get) more and more close to the center! (Temporary action) Player B ___ (block) and ___ (knock) out Player A's stone! Player A ___ (sweep) the ice to provide a path for the stone to travel (Complete action occurring as we speak). Come back after the advertisement break to find out who is going to win!


]]> 2023-11-25 15:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2802486852 HINO https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870892485 Hello, my name is Hino

Im ugly as a duck

Not very good at any subject

Only music.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870892485 SMILE sp20235191_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870893248 Sun is shining bright in the sky

Miles away we can hear the laugher of the children as they go to school

Illness and sadness all disappear

Love infiltrates the world like sunlight flickering through leaves

Everyone laughs and everyone smiles

]]> 2024-02-02 06:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870893248 TREE https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895500 Tallest in the park standing alone.

Rain falls on it as its only friend.

Even though it can only see the rain.

Every creature in the park is protected underneath.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895500 An acrostic poem: APPLE https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895575 Apple is a healthy fruit.

People loves them.

Pupils are encouraged to eat one every day.

Living without them is difficult.

Even the doctors who are scared of apples may like them!



]]> 2024-02-02 06:38:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895575 Tears https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895744 Tears are the fabric of human weakness,

Emotions he was told not to show

Ashamed of the liquid trickling down his cheek,

Rain falls on the floor with a soft "splash",

Seeking solace, his burdens slowly dissolve.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870895744 BEARS https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896428 By winter I go into hibernation

Escaping from the chilly season

All I do in winter is sleep

Running away from frigidness

Silence swirls around me as I go and dream


]]> 2024-02-02 06:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896428 Kevin: China https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896960 Communist guiding us,

Hello to people in the world!

In the large, brilliant country

No disappointing things to see

And China will welcome you!

]]> 2024-02-02 06:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896960 Numbers https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896993 New symbols come into my eyes,

undoing all my sums.

Math is all about that,

but my mind just won't work!

Eating my mind slowly.

Reading them in confusion.

Stupidly, dreamily, I fall into this swirl.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870896993 poem https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897189 Homework is what I have to do,
On my desk, it awaits, I feel so sad.

Math, essays, they never end,
Every day, it's child abuse, as my brain splits apart.

Working hard, I try my best,
On this academic torture
Reading, writing, studying all night,
Keeping my focus, with all my might


]]> 2024-02-02 06:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897189 Dolphin https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897882 Dancers dancing gracefully in the ocean,

Out to the sky and splash down to the sea,

Leaping, flipping, gliding gracefully,

People adore them and want them a lot,

Hovering around under the sea talking,

Indoors in the park and outside in the sea you see them a lot!

No one could hate these playful acrobats!


]]> 2024-02-02 06:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897882 Spring https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897901 Spring arrives as the cruel winter retreats from the land.

Pink flowers starts to bloom under the gentle breeze.

Rain started to pour as the plants drink and grow.

I watched as spring reclaimed its land when the trees put on their cloak.

Night came as the sea swallows the sun.

Gentle breeze blows in the evening moon.



]]> 2024-02-02 06:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870897901 Poem https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898045 Silent guardians of the night,

Twinkling with celestial light.

Awe-inspiring, a breathtaking sight,

Radiating hope, casting their might.

Stellar wonders, ever shining bright.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898045 BOOKS Acrostic poem https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898399 Bound volumes of wisdom and delight,

Offering tales, both dark and bright,

Opening minds to endless stages,

Keystones of knowledge, shining bright.

Soulful companions, filling life's blank pages.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898399 Kevin: China https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898416 Communist guiding us,

Hello to people in the world!

In the large, brilliant country

No disappointing things to see

And China will welcome you!

]]> 2024-02-02 06:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898416 Time https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898554 Look what you have done in the past

Imagine you are young running fast

Grew up from a kid in a blast

Height is increasing in aghast

Telling you that I'm in form one class

]]> 2024-02-02 06:43:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898554 Acrostic poem: desire https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898876 Desperate to succeed

eager to win

sometimes it is a monster

it will devour us

rest is forbidden

ending is always sad





]]> 2024-02-02 06:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870898876 SCHOOL https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899012 Students going to school

Creating pathway for their future

Hall filled with laughter

Opportunities waiting to be

]]> 2024-02-02 06:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899012 The Beach https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899506 Beneath my feet, a soft, yellow blanket.

Each wave rushes towards the shore, with a soft splashing sound.

Above me, seagulls fly peacefully.

Chilly breezes sweep by,

How wonderful is it here.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899506 Bird https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899736 Bird sings, bird chirps, and bird hoots

It is the most wonderful creature in the world

Round, fluffy body and beautiful wings

Dashes and glides through the sky

]]> 2024-02-02 06:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870899736 1F (17) Lauren Chan https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870902550 Fight for you unwaveringly,

Reliable and honest, a bond that never wears away,

In times of need, you're always there,

Every time when I feel blue, you lightened it with care.

Never judging, always accepting who I am,

Dedicated and loyal,

Supporting me and lifting me up.

]]> 2024-02-02 06:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870902550 HORROR Acrostic Poem https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870910900 Hiding under covers, scared of the dark,
Open your eyes, it's just a spark.
Running out with feeling of fear,

Remember it's make-believe, not real,
Overcome it bravely, there's nothing to jeer.
Only in stories, the horrors we feel.


]]> 2024-02-02 07:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2870910900 1F (13) Kyle Tse https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2874370822 Tracks are far and wide,

Racing along tracks, day and night.

Adventures are thrilling,

Incredible journeys.

Navigating in cities and towns,

Speeding through tunnels, turning around and around.

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I predict that, in the future, students must reference information from ChatGPT and other AI tools to complete their classwork and homework. This is because the International Baccalaureate (IB) program has already acknowledged and allowed the use of quotes from content created by ChatGPT.


However, students can't possibly rely on ChatGPT entirely for completing classwork and homework. This is because schools may change their learning tasks so that the tasks require AI literacy skills in which students verify and compile information generated by AI to complete their tasks.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904552575 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904560763 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904560763 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904560959 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904560959 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561086 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561086 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561229 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561229 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561353 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561353 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561514 What will the future of AI be like on academics and work? What are you certain will / won't happen? What do you speculate? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. Highlight the use of modal verbs.

]]> 2024-03-04 14:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904561514 Modal Verbs Extended Task 1 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904562467 What can different stakeholders do to address the issue of poor mental health amongst students in Hong Kong? Consider the resources, abilities, and obligations of these stakeholders. Use and highlight modal verbs and relevant expressions in your response.  


First, all government and aided primary and secondary schools in Hong Kong have school-based educational psychologists, who can provide counselling to students. To ensure that students obtain professional support from social workers or psychologists in a timely manner, schools must uphold their reporting mechanisms regarding referring suspected student suicide cases. Furthermore, schools should introduce social-emotional learning as part of the formal curriculum. With stronger emotional intelligence, students would be able to pay attention to and regulate their emotions.



]]> 2024-03-04 14:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904562467 Modal Verbs Extended Task 1 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904577623 What can different stakeholders do to address the issue of poor mental health amongst students in Hong Kong? Consider the resources, abilities, and obligations of these stakeholders. Use and highlight modal verbs and relevant expressions in your response.  


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]]> 2024-03-04 14:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904578540 Modal Verbs Extended Task 1 llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904578803 What can different stakeholders do to address the issue of poor mental health amongst students in Hong Kong? Consider the resources, abilities, and obligations of these stakeholders. Use and highlight modal verbs and relevant expressions in your response.  


]]> 2024-03-04 14:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2904578803 ^_^ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905422596 In the future, AI must be replacing the employees of the big companies, as the efficiency of AL analyzing data will be better than human beings.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905422596 Task 2 Ethan https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905424920 The future of AI would be like an assistant. They will help students and adults on their work or academics. This will enhance their quality of work/homework. I'm certain that AI wouldn't control humans in the future.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905424920 task 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905426666 in the future, more people will use AI to find the answer instead of thinking on their own, However, AI mustn't replace teachers, because AI only gives you the answer, but it does not tell you why you are wrong, but teachers do.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:17:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905426666 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 Matthew https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905426850 I think the future of AI must be better than the current AI. It should give more precise and detailed answers to questions rather than give broad answers. It may even be able to express feeling to questions.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905426850 Task 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905429991 Students in the future will use proofreading software as an assistant to finish homework or write essays. But they might misuse ChatGPT so they will just copy everything from it. It can spot mistakes in the work, and students can correct their mistakes and improve the quality of the work in just a few clicks.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905429991 Modal Verbs Extended Task 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905435207 We predict in the future that AI-powered tutoring systems will be a lot more sophisticated, providing adaptable and user-friendly functions for academic projects. There are currently many AI tutors existing such as Thirdspace Learning, Duolingo Chatbot, and more. By conducting more experiments and research, students must take reference from AI chatbots for research and projects for a more convenient experience. As AI develops rapidly and offers targeted guidance, AI will continue to play a crucial role in everyone's lives.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905435207 task 1 (Ethan) https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905441974 Schools always employ more social workers when their students have poor mental health, but that's not gonna work because students probably do not want to share their personal secrets to them. So if that doesn't work, what will work? One solution is to bring the students to field trips or do exercise, as it is proved that it can relieve stress. And also, it does not need a lot of money.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905441974 Modal Verbs Extended Task 1 Matthew https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905443889 I think the poor mental health amongst students can be caused by different reasons. Stakeholders should give different helps to students with different methods. Firstly, they should give money to the students with poor mental health due to economic issues in the family. Secondly, they can also arrange some social workers to help the students with poor mental health due to low self esteem.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905443889 Task 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905444304 Some stakeholders such as the government can provide a hotline to the students to relieve their stress and find someone to talk to. The school may also feature social workers to talk with students and let them share their recent mental problems. Parents should also bring attention to the suicidal thoughts caused by stress.

]]> 2024-03-05 02:29:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905444304 Modal Verbs Extended Task 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2905446696 From the government's perspective, they can allocate funds and financial resources for schools to organize and enhance mental health services and activities. They can also establish helplines such as the new Mental Health Support Hotline and Shall We Talk to introduce and promote an easily accessible way for students to seek emotional assistance. Parents can also help by fostering open communication and encouraging discussions about mental health at home, creating a safe space for their children to express their feelings. Through the help from governments and parents, the mental health of Hong Kong students must improve a lot.

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    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654356     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654390

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654390     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654438

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654438     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654488

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654488     Introduction to Language Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654555

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654555     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654623

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654623     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654820

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654820     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654887

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654887     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654944

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:21:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953654944     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953655008

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953655008     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953655119

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-14 08:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2953655119     Introduction to Language in Advertisements llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957812561

  • Find an effective poster advertisement. Paste it on this post.

  • What is/are some language feature(s) (adjectives, verbs, emotive diction, literary devices, tone) used? 

    1. Imperatives and Parallelism: "Dream It, Do It."

    2. Encouraging Tone: "You can be anything"

  • Explain the connotation(s) behind your language feature(s). 

    1. Connotes women's success

    2. Connotes women's ability to rise up against challenges and obstacles

  • Who are the target audience of the ad? What should they think or feel when they see the ad? 

    1. Young to middle-aged females

    2. They would want to purchase Barbie collection t-shirts and other workwear created by Love Bonito

  • Write the same text from the ad but use honest, straight-forward English. 

    1. Buy our Barbie collection t-shirts and workwear and know more about the role of education in changing girls' lives around the world.

    • Source: https://www.marketing-interactive.com/asiaecommerceawards-2021-highlight-how-love-bonito-s-tie-up-with-barbie-became-a-hit


    ]]>     2024-04-17 02:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957812561     .. https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957932808 literary device: personification

    connotation: comfortable

    target audience: adults, they should think this ad as a joke

    1. The sunglasses should be on ur face

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957932808     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957934209 tone(happiness and enjoyment), compound adjective ( the adjective ' free‘ ’premium' connotes everything is worth a bite.

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957934209     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935187 CHEAP

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:33:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935187     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935473

  • the macbook is described with the adjectibe "the most interesting"

  • it is useful

  • ppl who wants a macbook they should feel interested and amazed

  • It has much stuff init

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935473     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935924 2.English

    3.Stimulates the appetite of people.

    4.All kinds of people. It wants to make the people who see it want to drink cola as they use the color-- red, which can make people want to eat.

    5.Original Coca 'Cola is delicious.

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957935924     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957936501 BLANC = WHITE

    PLUS = VERY

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957936501     The advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957936726

  • language feature: verb: "open"

    tone: light-hearted

    literary device: parallelism

    "open" : imperative

  • Connotation: happiness, relaxation, freshness

  • Target audience: All people. People will be relaxed and energetic when they see this ad.

  • Open a Coke, open happiness.

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957936726     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957937217

  • "embark on your adventure" - imperative

  • It encourages players to download the game and explore it idk

  • People who play games, excited and encouraged

  • "Download the game and explore."

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957937217     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957937638 2024-04-17 04:35:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957937638 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957938386 2024-04-17 04:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957938386 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957938503 2024-04-17 04:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957938503 sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957939715

  • Imperatives: 'Make the switch'

  • Connotes people's ability to make the change

  • 1 People who enjoy gaming

    2 They would want to purchase it

  • Buy our gaming console and make the change from low level gaming consoles to high level ones

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957939715     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957940413 2.crisp, refreshing, better than ever,

    3.natural, fresh

    4.Everyone, they may feel curious and try the new 7up

    5.It was already good before, but it is even better now.

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957940413     Coca-Cola Advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957941159

  • Coca-Cola Advertisement ( taste the feeling)

  • Imperatives, verbs

  • Feeling: the freshness and happiness of drinking coke

  • The general public

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957941159     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957942141 Slogan: 'i'm lovin' it'

    - happy and optimistic language connotes happiness and enjoyment of eating the burger

    Imperative: 'Get Yours Today!'

    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957942141     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957942246 Verbs

    Never Before connotes the new experience

    Gamers

    Play new experience


    ]]>     2024-04-17 04:39:21 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957942246     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957943085

  • adjective: extra, bright

    language: Latin and English

  • bright, whitening: fresh, clean, healthy

    Latin: prestige, classism

    English: Internationality, modernism

  • everyone; feel fresh, clean, effective

  • This toothpaste is effective for whitening your teeth. After using this toothpaste for 14days, you can feel your teeth become whiter and cleaner.

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957943085     1. https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957943304

  • Compound Adjectives (Simple/Simply)

  • Simple, basic but detailed.

  • Everyone (who needs stationary). They should feel interested towards the product.

  • buy this pen

    • ]]>     2024-04-17 04:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2957943304     Advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2958021269 Language feature: Encouraging tone

    Connation: Connotes that the drink is the most refreshing thing

    Target audience: Families

    What should they feel: Want to buy the product

    Same text in honest straightforward English: Buy the drink

    ]]>     2024-04-17 05:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2958021269     Feastables Ad https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2958291066 tone (enjoyment)

    Adjectives (new) connotes the new bars are worth giving a try.

    Targeted audience: the public

    ]]>     2024-04-17 09:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2958291066     Media Unit 2: Design a Name and Logo llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959764292

  • You are the owner of a business. 

  • Choose one of the following items to create a company for. 

  • Think of a suitable and creative company name that reflects your business: Helping hands

    • Makes use of alliteration for memorability

  • Next, design a company logo which must feature common elements of logos and your company name. Use https://www.graphicsprings.com/

  • Post your design on Padlet. 

    • ]]>     2024-04-18 05:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959764292     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959827068 I used shape and colour

    -Green, red and white to represent Italy

    -Use a big fat man to get your attention too( mr. Wrong )

    -I also used a round shape for your attention

    -it also sells a pizza ( triangle bread)

    -It also have a very memorable name as it used metaphor.

    -You can eat it with your mouth


    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959827068     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959829563 colour and symbol

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959829563     The advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959830269 Logo:

    Shape: Round and approachable

    Symbol: An orange(the symbol) tells what your company sells

    Company name:

    Alliteration: make the company name more memorable

    Organic means the oranges we sell are 100% organic without chemical added. It connotates freshness and organity


    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959830269     .. https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959831223 It uses composite names and shapes and colours

    It sells game engines

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:33:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959831223     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959832286 I used symbol of the harp to represent musical instruments. and btw the meaning of the word is "very fast" in italy so it means the ppl is fast at making the instruments lo and making a light mood

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959832286     Pizzalicious :) https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959835829

  • Company Name : Suggestive Word names- composite names (pizza + delicious to show my pizza is delicious )

  • Colors-red and green show vibrancy and happiness

  • Symbols- pizzas

    • ]]>     2024-04-18 06:36:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959835829     Matthew https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837105 alliteration, make chess countable to make it more memorable

    ,original,

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:36:59 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837105     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837236 2024-04-18 06:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837236 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837697

  • It conveys a sense of balance and elegance in clothing choices.

  • It suggests that the brand focuses on creating harmonious outfits that bring together different elements seamlessly.

  • It implies that wearing their clothes will result in a visually pleasing and stylish appearance.

  • Use of shaped and colours and descriptive names

    • ]]>     2024-04-18 06:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959837697     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959838136 I used the symbol of a camera

    I used blue, yellow and red, vibrant colours

    I used alliteration to make it easy to memorize

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959838136     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959839886 TokyoTastes

    My company sells Japanese Cuisine

    I used colours and synbols.



    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:38:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959839886     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959840047 2024-04-18 06:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959840047 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959842184 colours:pink show lovely and kind to make kids happy

    typography: the word fonts show welcome to the children

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959842184     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959842887 2024-04-18 06:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959842887 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959843285 Used symbolism and colours of the pizza

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:40:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959843285     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959843351 2024-04-18 06:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959843351 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959844431 Logo: I used symbol (coin, cards, poker) and colour (yellow-fun, black-power)

    Brand Name: Describing the adventure of gambling and it's also a name of a person who loves to gamble. Aventurine is also a kind of stone/jewel that brings luck to gambling.

    This is a brand for a gambling site/centre.


    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:41:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959844431     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959845469 Acronymic Names

    Uses symbols and colours


    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:42:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959845469     sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959848587 A delivery service

    The bird symbolizes delivery

    Associative name (suggests the way 'birds' will deliver goods)

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959848587     Flour Fusion https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959850770

  • Symbols: The croissant represents bread, which means it is a bakery

  • Alliteration: makes the company's name more memorable

  • Descriptive names: The name tells you exactly what the company does

    • ]]>     2024-04-18 06:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959850770     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959851478 A pizza shop

    Used colours and symbols

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959851478     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959863088 River Amazon + Portugese

    ]]>     2024-04-18 06:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2959863088     Magazine / Newspaper / Social Media Food Advertisement llwong2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2960383805

  • Company name: Via Tokyo

  • Product advertised: Matcha ice cream

  • Elements of TV advertisement used: NA

    • However, a metaphor was used to compare the restaurant to a "heaven".

  • Slogan: NA

  • Message: To visit Via Tokyo for desserts

  • Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? Yes! I love the flavour of matcha.

    • ]]>     2024-04-18 13:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2960383805     Task 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961338549 Slogan 1: Looking for a lifetime friend, travelling in a blink of an eye? This sport car is made for you.

    Slogan 2: Looking for a temporary home? Come here.

    Slogan 3: Realistic, precise, exquisite photos from our camera. You can take a photo of a beautiful moment.

    Slogan 4: As smooth as silk, as beautiful as natural wonders. Use our shampoo and get shiny hair.

    Slogan 5: Come here and get 14* in DSE, come here and get grade 7 in IB, come here and be successful.

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961338549     Student Union https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961340291

  • Group Name: Everest

  • Core Values: Excellence

  • Group Slogan: Hike the highest you can go!

    • ]]>     2024-04-19 04:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961340291     Task 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961343472 Slogan 1: Time is precious. Your car saves it.

    Slogan 2: Come and book a five star hotel. You deserve this.

    Slogan 3: Enlighten your pictures with a camera.

    Slogan 4: Smell better makes u better

    Slogan 5: COME AND GET UR COMPUTERS CHECKED

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961343472     Student Union https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961349460 Group name: Harmony

    Core values represented: Unity, Engagement, Advocacy

    Group Slogan: Synchronizing Strength, Inspiring Unity

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961349460     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961352807 2024-04-19 04:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961352807 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961353133 2024-04-19 04:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961353133 Task 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961353844 Group name: Exceedingly Excellent Era

    Core values represented: Academic excellence and integrity

    Group Slogan: 14* or grade 7 in your hands.

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961353844     sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961354132 Group name: Aether

    Core values: To guide students

    Group Slogan: The light to guide

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961354132     Activity 3 Student Union https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961354262 Group Name: Lucunda (Enjoyable in Latin)

    Core values: Enjoyable

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961354262     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961356761 name campus connect

    values: improve

    slogan: learn together, improve together

    ]]>     2024-04-19 04:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961356761     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961363902 2024-04-19 04:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961363902 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961437458 2024-04-19 05:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2961437458 The first food advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962535639

  • Company name: Pizza Hut

  • Product advertised: Italian taste pizza

  • Elements of TV advertisement used:

    • color: bright red --> to catch attention

    • animation: a car strolling down the street --> shows the speed of the delivering service

    • symbol: a car --> conveys the swiftness of the delivering service

    • shape of the logo: round --> easy to get in touch with/accessible

    • verb used: "call" --> imperative--> to make the audience act

    • connotation: "to your doorstep"

      --> shows the convenience of the delivering service

  • Slogan: Delivering the Italian taste to your doorstep

  • Message: Tells the audience that Pizza Hut is now selling the Italian taste pizza and will be delivered to your home in a quick speed.

  • My stance: I would like to buy it because the pizza looks attractive and the elements of the TV advertisements successfully attracted me to buy it.

    • ]]>     2024-04-20 04:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962535639     The second food advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962541021

  • Company name: Haribo

  • Product advertised: gummy bear candy

  • Elements of TV advertisement used:

    • color: bright red and yellow --> to catch attention

    • mascot: a bear --> to make the advertisement more abounding

    • font of the company name: round and smooth --> shows that the company is reachable and friendly

    • adverb: "unbearably" conveys the deliciousness of the candy is profoundly high and people who eat them will be addicted.

    • connotation: "delicious" --> adjective --> shows that the candy Haribo sells are yummy

    • shape: emphasis on "bear" in "unbearably" shows the shape of the candy is like a bear

  • Slogan: Unbearably delicious

  • Message: Tells the audience that the candy Haribo sells is immensely delicious and cannot be rejected.

  • My stance: I wouldn't like to buy the candy because the elements of TV advertisement are a bit dull. Despite the deliciousness of the candy, addicted to candy is detrimental to our physical health that may lead to diabetes.

    • ]]>     2024-04-20 04:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962541021     The third food advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962561144

  • Company name: McDonalds

  • Product advertised: Double Quarter Pounder with Cheese, Big Mac, Angus Deluxe Third Pounder

  • Elements of TV advertisement used:

    • color: red --> to catch attention

    • adjectives: "big "--> showing that the burgers McDonalds sells have a large portion of ingredients used, meaning that they are not stingy. "Beefy" --> showing that the burgers it sells are full of delicious beef. "Bliss" --> shows that after eating the burgers it sells, the customers will be full of happiness.

    • Alliteration: "big, beefy, bliss" repeated sound of letter "b".

  • Slogan: big, beefy, bliss

  • Message: Tells the audience that the burgers McDonalds sells are delicious and large. After eating their burger, customers will be in great joy.

  • My stance: I would like to buy the burgers. It is because the photos of the burgers look attractive and the adjectives in the slogan makes me have an urge to purchase them.

    • ]]>     2024-04-20 05:39:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962561144     TV Food Advertisements https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962585317 Company name: Frito-Lay

    Product advertised: Doritos

    Target Audience: Gen Z

    Elements of TV advertisement used:

    -music

    -call to action

    -Gimmicks

    Slogan: "Devour Doritos your way" It pokes fun at individual eating styles and urges consumers to ‘unleash the wild within’ as they share a pack with friends.

    Message: To promote Doritos to Gen Z audiences looking for the perfect ‘night in-in’.

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    Yes, because the Doritos seem appealing and I might get a chance to win £100 and a night in.


    ]]>     2024-04-20 06:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962585317     Magazine / Newspaper / Social Media Food Advertisements https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962610954 Company name: Subway

    Product advertised: Submarine Sandwiches

    Elements of TV advertisement used 

    -bright colors

    -Adjectives

    Slogan: Eat Fresh, Feel Good

    Message 

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    Yes, because it is suggested that the burgers taste fresh and worth trying.

    ]]>     2024-04-20 08:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2962610954     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970846532 colour of red to make excitement

    Weasel word:awesome

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970846532     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970847478 2024-04-26 06:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970847478 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849663 2024-04-26 06:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849663 Magazine / Newspaper / Social Media Food Advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849762

  • Company name: McDonalds

  • Product advertised: Sweet n’ Spicy crispy thighs

  • Elements of TV advertisement used: Star Power

  • Slogan: NA

  • Message: Visit McDonalds to try the new product

    • ]]>     2024-04-26 06:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849762     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849874 Mcdonalds . Uses a slogan and also uses red to catch attention and makes it memorable.

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:42:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970849874     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850190 They compare themselves to cigiratte and tells us to eat food that is good for our health. This use of slogans makes it memorable.

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850190     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850462 Star Power

    Mcdonald advertisement cross New jeans a really popular girl korean group telling us that their product is the best .

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850462     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850643 Company name: 茶一刻

    used a lemon to make it look fresher, also used a grass field and the background to make it look fresher

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850643     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850737 Facts and Figures

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850737     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850743 Use of adjectives, makes people think

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850743     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850794 Company name : Kitkat

    Product advertised : Chocolate

    Element used : Parallelism to increase memorability

    Slogan : "Have a break, have a Kit Kat"

    Message : "Eat Kit Kat in your free time"

    I would like to buy it because I like Kit Kat.

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970850794     https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970851387 2024-04-26 06:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970851387 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970852859 Alliteration

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970852859     Food advertisement 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970856172

  • Company: Haagen-Dazs

  • Product advertised: Salted Caramel Ice Cream

  • Slogan: 'The Ice Cream of Ice Creams'

    • It is memorable and it says that this ice cream is the best ice cream so people will want to buy it.

    Message: To buy the salted caramel ice cream

    The advertisement made me want to buy the product because it looks delicious.

    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970856172     Pepsi Magazine Advertisements https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970858342 Company name = Pepsico

    Product advertised: Pepsi

    Elements of magazine advertisements used:

    1. Star power (Blackpink)

    2. Adjectives (Bold Taste)

    3. Facts and Figures

    Slogan: "Bold Taste, No Calories"

    Yes, I want to buy the product because Persi is being advertised by Blackpink.


    ]]>     2024-04-26 06:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970858342     Food advertisement 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970925589

  • Company name: McDonalds

  • Product advertised: the agnus third pounder burger

  • Elements: 1. imperatives: 'Get Yours Today!'

    2. red background to catch people's attention

  • Slogan: 'i'm lovin' it'

    - happy and optimistic language connotes happiness and enjoyment of eating the burger

  • Message: To buy the agnus third pounder burger

  • Yes, the advertisement made me want to buy the burger because of the use of imperatives and its slogan.

    • ]]>     2024-04-26 07:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970925589     Food advertisement 3 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970937936

  • Company name: Haribo

  • Product advertised: Haribo gummies

  • Elements used:

    1. Cartoon Characters: the haribo bear

    2. Vibrant colours to catch people's attention

  • Slogan: 'Kids and grown-ups love it so, the happy world of Haribo' - tells people that it is very popular

  • Message: to buy the Haribo gummies

  • Yes, the advertisement made me want to buy the product because I want to try this gummy.

    • ]]>     2024-04-26 08:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970937936     Food advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970940121

    • Company name: Coca-Cola

    • Product advertised: Coca-Cola

    • Elements of TV advertisement used:

      • color: red --> catch attention

      • alliteration: Coca-Cola

      • water droplet: fresh

    • Slogan: "open a Coke, open happiness"

    • Message: Buy and drink coca cola to win happiness.

    • Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? Yes because it looks delicious and refreshing, and it can bring me happiness.


    ]]>     2024-04-26 08:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2970940121     Food advertisement 1 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971207891 Family Fun -- "Wholesome goodness your whole family can enjoy!"


    Weasel Words -- "Wholesome goodness"


    Ideal kids -- The child in the advertisement seems to be able to enjoy the best food --> "ideal"


    ]]>     2024-04-26 13:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971207891     Food advertisement 2 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971214342 Weasel Words -- "The World's No. 1 Biscuit"


    Cartoon characters -- The penguin on top of the tin might be appealing to young children

    ]]>     2024-04-26 13:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971214342     Food advertisement 3 https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971221690 Parallelism -- "Have a break, Have a kit kat"


    Imperative / Call to action -- "Have a break"


    Representation -- The red color of the background


    Jingles -- The slogan "Have a break, Have a Kit Kat"

    ]]>     2024-04-26 13:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971221690     Food advertisements (newspaper / magazine / social media / TV advertisement log https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971762776 Company name: Burger King

    Product advertised: Duetto Deluxe

    Elements of TV advertisement used: Bright colours, language

    Slogan (if applicable): Your way

    Message: Asking others to buy their product

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    No, because I don’t like it.

    ]]>     2024-04-27 02:36:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971762776     Food advertisements (newspaper / magazine / social media / TV advertisement log https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971764013 Company name: Dallas Farmers Market

    Product advertised: Carrots/ Fries

    Elements of TV advertisement used: Bright colours, weasel words

    Slogan (if applicable):

    Message: Ask others to buy their product 

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    No, because I don’t like it

    ]]>     2024-04-27 02:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971764013     TV advertisements https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971765891 Company name: Coca Cola

    Product advertised: Its drink

    Elements of TV advertisement used: Animation, story, humour, excitement,

    Slogan (if applicable): Real magic

    Message: Asking others to buy and drink their drinks

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    Yes, because its ad is good.

    ]]>     2024-04-27 02:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971765891     TV advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971767870 Company name: KFC

    Product advertised: Its food

    Elements of TV advertisement used: Call to action, facts and figures, family fun

    Slogan (if applicable): That’s “finger lickin’ good”

    Message: Asking others to order their product

    Did the ad make you want to buy the product? Why or why not? 

    Maybe, did provide some information about their quality of food.

     

    ]]>     2024-04-27 02:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971767870     McDonalds Advertisement https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971830151 Company Name : McDonalds

    Product advertised: Spicy Crispy Chicken Burger or Wrap

    Elements of ad used:

    1. Gimmicks: Premiums= free gift with purchase

    2. Star Power (New jeans)

    Message: Purchase a chicken burger or wrap to win a McD x Newjeans Special Gift.

    Yes, because audiences trust an accept the product.



    ]]>     2024-04-27 06:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971830151     TV advertisement: https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971834647 Company name : Innisfree

    Product Advertised: Green tea seed serum

    Elements of TV ad used:

    1. Star power: Wonyoung from ive

    2. Jingles: Does your skin feel dry everyday?

    3. Facts and figures: Moisture increased instantly by 710%

    4. Excitement : Boost up! Boost your hydration power now! Wow! Super Moist!

    Message: Power up your hydration health.

    Yes, audiences want to have healthy skin like wonyoung; convinces audiences to buy the product as it boost hydration health

    ]]>     2024-04-27 06:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2971834647     Food advertisement 1 sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976364804

  • Company name: Pizza Hut

  • Product advertised: Pizza

  • Elements used: Bright colours, humour

  • Message: 'See the Leaning Tower of Pizza!' -To get people interested in their pizza

  • The ad only contains humour and is not very persuasive. I would not be interested in their product based on this ad.

    • ]]>     2024-05-01 08:04:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976364804     Food advertisement 3 sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976368658

  • Company name: Nutella

  • Product advertised: Nutella

  • Elements used: Language

  • Message: 'Mornings Taste Better with Nutella' -That people will have a better morning if they eat Nutella

  • I would be interested in purchasing the product as it seems tasty based on the message.

    • ]]>     2024-05-01 08:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976368658     Food advertisement 2 sp20236391_ https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976381735

  • Company name: General Mills

  • Product advertised: Cereal

  • Elements used: Celebrities -TXT

  • No as the advertisement does not talk about the taste or health benefits, and cannot persuade the audience enough.

    • ]]>     2024-05-01 08:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llwong2/td83d562yak7oo09/wish/2976381735