Thesis Statements - Period 3 by Krista Earle https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py Share your thesis statement with the class. Remember a thesis is your Claim + two reasons. It is not a summary. en-us 2021-03-04 18:18:57 UTC 2021-04-17 23:35:14 UTC hello@padlet.com Scientists should genetically modify foods because they are stronger and healthier. 1000048859 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1282845600 2021-03-08 16:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1282845600 Ava Beeson https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1282952080 Scientists should not genetically modify food because it harms the environment and are very toxic for people's health.]]> 2021-03-08 16:18:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1282952080 Dylan Hebig 00701640541 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283403853 genetically modified plants and animals should stop being used because GMOs will upset the food chain, genetically modifying food can be very risky.

Do you have two of these?

]]> 2021-03-08 17:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283403853 gavin b https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283528348 genetically modified food should be used because it is more helthy and better to eat.

Work on your wording. For example: Scientists should genetically modify foods because they are healthier and a tastier option.]]> 2021-03-08 17:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283528348 Jonathan Tafoya | Against GMOs 10000613441_1 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283620208 Scientists should not genetically modify food because it harms Earth's ecosystem and fails to assist in decreasing levels of world hunger.]]> 2021-03-08 18:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283620208 Designer babies 10000552801_1 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283748066 Scientist should not continue the process of designer babies  

You need to add two reasons :)
Scientists should not genetically modify babies because of the increase in loss of life and it limits diversity. ]]> 2021-03-08 18:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283748066 taliyah tinner https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283768640 designer babies
Designer babies are a good thing because if the mom or dad and even someone in the family has health issues you can get your baby geneticly modifyed so that the chances of the baby have health issues are a small chance .

This looks like just oe reason. Try this: Scientists should genetically modify babies because it prevents genetic diseases and increase the chances of a successful life.  OR look at the other examples we went over like increased life span.]]> 2021-03-08 18:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283768640 For GMOs 1000055279_1_1 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283804106 Scientists should genetically modify food because GMO foods are just as safe and healthy as any other conventional crop and genetically modified foods can boost crop output. ]]> 2021-03-08 18:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283804106 Against Designer Babies Cole Fuller https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283821146 Scientists should not genetically modify babies because traits are too complex to alter safely, and genetic engineering can lead to new weapon technology.]]> 2021-03-08 18:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283821146 Olivia Miller [ For GM Foods ] https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283874747 Scientists should genetically modify food because they can boost crop output and are safe and healthy.]]> 2021-03-08 18:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283874747 Ryan Rippel https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283877067 Scientists should not genetically modify foods because it hurts our environment and human health.]]> 2021-03-08 18:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1283877067 Against Designer Babies By: Matthew Gonzalez https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284023874 Scientists should not genetically modify babies because this process could be the foundation of new weapon technologies and there could be unintended side effects we don't know about.]]> 2021-03-08 19:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284023874 Makenna Long https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284284116 Scientists should not genetically modify food because it could be bad for human health and could lead to bad sickness that are unknown ways to deal 
with

Check your wording: For example: because they are unhealthy and cause illness.  ]]> 2021-03-08 20:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284284116 Therese Martinez 0070164937 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284381437 Genetic engineering to create desirable traits in babies has become a controversial topic of discussion. Creating a designer baby is wrong as it could lead to worse illnesses and the child has no say in the decision.

You need TWO reasons.  For example: Scientists should not genetically modify babies because it can lead to health problems and also limits diversity.]]> 2021-03-08 20:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284381437 Evelyn Robinson (Against) https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284583248 Scientists should not genetically modify food because they cause allergies, cancer and other health problems and harm beneficial insect species. ]]> 2021-03-08 21:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284583248 keyarah knight https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284603632 scientists should not genetically modify babies as there could be negative  side-effects,  and you don't know what it could do to ones health.

These seem too similar. Maybe you could say Scientists should not genetically modify babies because it is risky to the baby's health and eliminates the baby's free choice? ]]> 2021-03-08 21:35:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284603632 Gabriel Hernandez https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284684367 Scientist should gentical modify babies due to it being able to getting rid of disease and giving people the potenial to live longer.

Scientists should genetically modify babies because it reduces inherited diseases and increases life span.]]> 2021-03-08 22:03:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1284684367 designer babies https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1285561627 Ava , scientist should genetically modify babies because if the parents have a health issue they can stop the from happening and  Designing a baby can increase its lifespan.

Scientists should genetically modify babies because it prevents hereditary diseases and increases life span.

]]> 2021-03-09 03:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1285561627 Neriah cooper https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1285716954 scientists should not genetically modify food because it is toxic for peoples health and it harms our environment.

Please use caps at the beginning of your sentences.because it is cause harm to people's health and the environment. ]]> 2021-03-09 04:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1285716954 spencer christensen https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289336464 scientists should not genetically modify babies because it is bad for its health and enviroment for the baby.

What do you mean by it is not good for the baby's environment? Please reword your thesis.]]> 2021-03-09 18:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289336464 Jack DeSando https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289485234
  • Scientist should genetically modify food because it makes the food stronger and increases nutritional value.
    • ]]>     2021-03-09 19:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289485234     Elyas Gulban https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289646113 Scientists should genetically modify food because they have more nutritional value, and helps farmers with crop output.

    PLease make this one sentence. ]]>     2021-03-09 19:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289646113     Titus Lewis https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289686034 Scientists should genetically modify food because it makes the food last longer and taste better 

    Scientists should genetically modify food because it lasts longer and tastes better.

    ]]>     2021-03-09 19:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289686034     Chenoa Howard https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289716002 Scientists should genetically modify babies because it’ll stop the baby from possibly having having a health issue that runs in their family.

    You need one more reason. I would reword this to prevent genetic diseases.]]>     2021-03-09 20:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289716002     Amanda Teachenor https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289745737 Scientists should genetically modify food because they have more desirable traits, and help farmers increase their crop yield. ]]> 2021-03-09 20:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289745737 00701640541 https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289758927 Dylan Hebig 
    Genetically modified plants and animals should stop being used because (will they disrupt the food chain and are risky.

    What do you mean by risky? Are they a health risk? environmental risk?


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    RATE]]>     2021-03-09 20:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289758927     Kenneth Tang https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289760111 Scientists should not genetically modify babies because of the increased loss of life and the child never has a say in the matter.]]> 2021-03-09 20:12:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289760111 Ariana https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289794547 Scientist should genetically modify food because it is more healthy for you and GMO are not dangerous.

    These are the same reason.  You need two different ones.  For example:
    Scientists should genetically modify foods because they are healthier and stronger.

    ]]>     2021-03-09 20:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289794547     Izel Vega https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289846704 Scientist should genetically modify food because it is more healthy, and can help protect the environment.]]> 2021-03-09 20:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289846704 gavin b https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289872904 scientist should not genetically modify food because they can have harmful effects on the human body.


    It can cause development of disuses which are immune to antibiotics. 
    Manufacturers do not lable foods that are GM because they think it will effect there busienss.
    YOU NEED TWO REASONS]]>     2021-03-09 20:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kearle9/td38nlcjqs6jj6py/wish/1289872904