S5CY Unit 11 Section 5 Writing a Problem-solution essay by Kwai-yin, Carrie PANG https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck en-us 2019-03-25 00:32:42 UTC 2025-12-12 20:05:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Group 1 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344639875 Problem: Poverty Problem

Solution 1 & Elaboration 1:If the government raised the retirement age to 65, the elderly would earn some money for themselves. Since some elderlies have spare time, they are still physically fit for their work.

Group 7:
I think only a few group of elderly are physically fit for working.
What about those who are not physically fit for working ?They cannot benefit from the policy of raising retirement age. 🐶🐶🐶
Group six 
Not all elderly are fit for work, I don’t think elderly should do labour works ,  I think office work would be more appropriate for them]]> 2019-03-25 00:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344639875 Group 1 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640266 Problem: poverty problem

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2: If the government gave more welfare to the elderly, they would have enough money to afford daily expenses which can improve their life quality , for instance, they can learn to use technology or working skills.

Group 7 :
Although they can learn to use technology or working skill ,can they still work or technology can help them solve the problem of poor?

Do you agree the retired age up to 65

]]> 2019-03-25 00:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640266 Group 2 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640420 Living Problem


Solution 1 & Elaboration 1: If the government gave more welfare for basic materials to the elderly, they would have more materials to support their daily uses.For instance, food and clothes.


Gp1 comment:🤙🏻🤙🏿🤙🏻🤙🏿🤙🏻🤙🏿
Logical.
Type 2 used correctly.
Try to think about high property price instead of living conditions.]]> 2019-03-25 00:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640420 Group 2 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640694 Problem:
Living problem (poverty problem)
Solution 2 & Elaboration 2:
If the government held more voluntary activities for the elderly,they would have more money support.
Holding Flag day can help raise money for them.

Group1 
Your idea is good and logical.Our group think that you can add more example of voluntary activities and try to explain the activities how to help the elderly.

Group 7
Your idea is creative.You have use type 2 conditional.]]> 2019-03-25 00:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344640694 Group 3 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641046 Problem:health problem

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2:If the government provided free medical service to the elderly,it would solve the  health problem of the elderly effectively.
Since the elderly always spend a lot of money to see the doctor.For instance ,the government give the senior citizens card scheme can enables elderly people aged 65 

Group2 comment:their ideas are logical and creative.they use the Type 2 conditional correctly.SkrSkr!!!!

Group1🐵
I think your idea is good and creative.


]]> 2019-03-25 00:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641046 Group 4 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641139 Problem: Abuse

Solution 1 & Elaboration 1: The social workers should be always in touch with the elderly because they can find the people who is abusing the elderly and stop it.

Group 3: 
No type 2 conditional 
“If the social workers were always in touch with the elderly, they would find the abuser and stop it immediately 



Correct la correct la😘😘😘😘]]> 2019-03-25 00:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641139 Group 4 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641269 Problem:abuse

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2: The government should educate the elderly and their family to understand their needs,  it would reduce the opportunity of abusing 

Group3:
1. No type 2 conditional 
2. Doesn’t make sense 
If the government educated the elderly and their family members to understand what are their needs, it would reduce the opportunity of abusing.

Group2:🤙🏻🤙🏼🤙🏽🤙🏾🤙🏿🤙🤘🏻👍🏻SkrSkr]]> 2019-03-25 00:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641269 Group 5 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641444 Problem:

Solution 1 & Elaboration 1:


]]> 2019-03-25 00:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641444 Group 5 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641538 Problem:elderly abuse 

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2:
education the elderly and their family members
If the government to enhance the elder and their family members that to understand each other’s need, it would reduce the opportunity of abuse
Example2:


]]> 2019-03-25 00:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641538 Group 6 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641632 Problem:healthcare 

Solution 1 & Elaboration 1:If the government provided free body checks for the elderly, they would  have a  better understanding of their health conditions .therefore , the chance of elderly having a serious illness and not having treatment is reduced.
Comment:who take the rise of injury

]]> 2019-03-25 00:49:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641632 Group 6 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641699 Problem:health care

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2:if the social workers organise more events for the elderly,they would teach them sport not feel lonely and 
Social workers can bring them to travel and the elderly can make new friends.



]]> 2019-03-25 00:49:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641699 Group 7 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641818 Problem:finacial difficulties 

Solution 1 & Elaboration 1: If the government provided more fruit money for the elderly ,they would have more money to buy what they need in daily life such as food or clothes.

Good idea, but I don’t think that welfare is named fruit money, try “fruit gold” instead
Good]]> 2019-03-25 00:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641818 Group 7 carriepang https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641910 Problem: financial difficulties 

Solution 2 & Elaboration 2: If the government improved senior citizen card scheme , the elderly would benefit from different parts of their daily lives , such as transportation and education.

The idea is good , correct grammar
Good]]> 2019-03-25 00:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344641910 https://padlet.com/carriepang/tchx46x5lpck/wish/344653174 Group 3
Health problems 

If the elderly’s family members took good care of them, most of the elderly would be healthy and have less chances to get sick. 

Since elderly usually don’t have the abilities to take care of themselves. They can only rely on their younger family members to help them. For instance, they can take them to the hospital to get their body checked regularly.

Their ideas are logical and sensible 
Who take who to hospital?🤙🤙🤙🤙

gp1
Logical
Use type 2
Very good no suggestions 👍🏻👍🏻🤙🏿🤙🏿🤙🏿👍🏻👍🏻🤙🏿👍🏻

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