by Mr D Banks

What makes a successful narrative?

dbanks5 — 2015-12-03 08:14:44 UTC

Write your ideas along with your name and a short explanation.

Tom

2015-12-03 12:31:00 UTC

Interesting and not repeating itself and includes different techniques. 1st person and good sentence starters

Suzie

2015-12-03 12:31:07 UTC

You need to include a zoomed in perspective of anything that could hook the reader.

Unusual opening to hook the reader and you should give away too much information to the reader so they want to read in.

Ambitious vocabulary.

Sarah C

2015-12-03 12:31:16 UTC

Slowly revealing the story

Kaya

2015-12-03 12:31:18 UTC

Past tense always.

First person.

Chronological order.

Different and good sentence starters.

Don't repeat you self- don't drag.

Drip feed information.

Ambitious vocabulary.

Use senses.

Abstract opening paragraph.

Oscar

2015-12-03 12:31:21 UTC

Past tense throughout,

Chronological order,

Accurate SPAG,

Don't repeat yourself,

Don't reveal too much at the start,

New idea each paragraph,

Stop it being boring,

Connor

2015-12-03 12:31:23 UTC

Hook the reader in

Amelia

2015-12-03 12:31:28 UTC

It needs to be in chronological order.

Keep speech to a minimum.

Using similes and metaphors, personification, onomatopoeia.

Don't give away everything away, drip feed.

Use different sentence openers.

Sophisticated language.

Connor

2015-12-03 12:31:50 UTC

Focus on small details cause they can add a lot in

Sarah C

2015-12-03 12:32:26 UTC

Describe something different in each paragraph

Connor

2015-12-03 12:32:28 UTC

Interesting sentence starters and vocabulary and adverbs

Sarah C

2015-12-03 12:32:56 UTC

Keeping it fluent

Include feelings and emotions

No repition

Include senses

Chronological order

Avoid speech

Different sentence lengths and openers

Max

2015-12-03 12:33:14 UTC

In past tense

Max

2015-12-03 12:33:32 UTC