Adityavardhan Oberoi_VA by Adityavardhan Oberoi https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol en-us 2019-01-09 15:34:03 UTC 2023-02-07 19:18:10 UTC hello@padlet.com adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/321117562 2019-01-16 08:24:01 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/321117562 Draft mindmap adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/323756609 2019-01-24 02:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/323756609 Final Mindmap adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330660529 2019-02-13 03:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330660529 Reflection adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330662868 How did you share responsibility for decision making within your group? 
I shared responsibility within my group very well as we collaborated well. Also when we were working we divided our work into different parts so that we could save time. Both of us had worked efficiently which made our product good. Also we shared the responsibility of decision making by telling each other our skills and then whatever we were good at we did it so that our final product would be good.

How did you manage and resolve conflicts to work collaboratively in teams? 
We resolved our issues by talking it out but mainly we did not have any issues because we have had different skills in art so we just divided our work at the starting and then worked on it and then after our final product we saw it and we saw how good looking our mind map would be. So in conclusion we did not have any conflicts between us as we had different skills and there was no problem

Did you listen actively to other's perspectives and ideas?
Yes we did listen to other's perspective as after we were done with our draft mindmap we went around asking people if it was good and if it was not then we asked on how we could improve. So when we did our final we used the feedback to make it better.

What is the theme of your mind map? Have you succeeded to develop it in your visual presentation? 
Our theme was Illustrations and I think so we somewhat succeeded as we portrayed our theme with having information and pictures combined.

Did you learn anything new in this process?
Yes I did, I learnt  how to have a balance  between pictures and information to please the mindmap.
]]> 2019-02-13 04:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330662868 Slides link adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330662996 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xHyvZ3Wy0AExJMUNHEw4hURegrLcJP8QJgZOr5np_5g/edit#slide=id.g35ed75ccf_015]]> 2019-02-13 04:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/330662996 Picture of cover adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/340240063 2019-03-12 03:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/340240063 How have you communicated your thoughts, message and idea through your artwork? adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/340240775  I have communicated all of this as I have  communicated my thoughts because I have drawn three people who are the main characters and I have drawn them in a way which describes my thoughts because I have drawn Ms Carlotti as an angry person which describes and I have also done this for the other 2 characters, I have described my message through as I have poster which describes my messages because it is finding the invisible boy.

Is it clear to the audience what is your book about by looking at the cover page designed by you? Take 2 peer feedback to justify.
Yes it is because people think that it is very visible that what my book is about as 1 peer says that I have used many objects which describes the book. Another peer says that my cover page shows the book well because he says that the characters I have drawn are detailed which describe the book.

How have you created your artwork keeping your audience in mind? Is your layout and style audience (chosen) friendly?
I have created my artwork keeping my audience in mind because I have kept it kid friendly and have made the cover very simple and the colour I have chosen is light which is very friendly.

How is your title communicating the main idea?
My title is communicating the main idea because I have made the title bold which makes it stand out and also I have made invisible blank which makes it stand out and shows my book.

Take 2 productive peer feedback asking them if you have succeeded to communicate through your visuals and text you have chosen for your illustration?
I have taken two feedbacks one said: I feel that you have communicated this very well as I could clearly identify the characters on the cover page. Another peer said: I believe that your artwork was very good and had an interesting feel to it, I loved the contrast and you have presented your ideas in a rather unique manner. ]]> 2019-03-12 03:12:35 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/340240775 Rough for summative adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/347513781 2019-04-02 08:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/347513781 Final summative adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351074210 2019-04-12 08:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351074210 Picture adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351076649 2019-04-12 08:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351076649 Final summative picture adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351078431 2019-04-12 08:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351078431 Reflection adityavardhanoberoi1 https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351079142 Is your artwork reflecting the chosen text?
Yes both my artworks are reflecting the chosen text. This is because in my artwork I have had very detailed drawing and you can see in the images on the left. I have made the setting very well which then shows how Bryan is and how he is feeling.

Is your illustration and character style matching the cover page?
Yes, my illustration is matching the cover page because as you can see in the cover page that I have drawn, the three main characters of the book which are Brian, Justing and Ms.Carlotti. So if you even see the cover page then it shows how Brian looks so different from others. This is because in the book also Brian is described as the invisible boy as no one notices him. This is now shown in my illustration of a scene too as the scene I have drawn is when Brian says that he wish he could draw a hole to swallow him up because he is alone. this is interpreted in the illustration too as Brian's body language shows how sad he is and also in the background, the colour grey adds a sad feeling.

What are the positive points and the negative points in your artwork? ( Take 2 Feedback and add your own opinion)
Granth - I think so that overall your artwork was decent to good as you portrayed the scene in the book really well and it could help the audience in following through of what is the book. You have also used a nice palette of colours and have shown the setting well. Somethings you could maybe improve on is that you could have been more detailed with your drawings as then this would give a better understanding to the audience and you could have also made some space to put a quote.

Dhruv - Personally, I think that there is a lot of good stuff in your artwork but there are also things you could improve on. Some things which I really liked was the mixture of colours you used and how the artwork was so bright but at the same time the audience came to know how Brian was sad because of the grey used on top, so the mixture of the colours was really good. I also think the way you have portrayed your setting is excellent as a normal person can easily understand where this is happening. Some negative points and some improvement basically are that you could have been more intricate with the drawing which could then give a better effect to the audience. You could have outlined better to make the illustration look more sharp and neater. Also if you had a better proportion of figures then the audience would be able to understand a bit more, but otherwise everything was really good. 

My own opinion - In my opinion I think so that I have negative and positive points on my artwork. Some positive points are the way that I have shown setting, the theme and how I have portrayed an artwork which really makes the audience understand what the drawing is about. I think so that the way I have made my background is really good as it shows how Brian is feeling at that point of time, I think so another good thing was that the way I have shown the building really shows how my imagination is about the book and how this can make the audience understand the book better. But other than all of this there are also some negative points such as me outlining better to make the drawing neater and making all the objects stand out more. I think so that I could have coloured a bit more better so that it could be aesthetically appealing, But other than all of this I think so I did a good job on my illustration as it can make the audience understand the scene really well.

What are the elements of art and principles of arts are used in your work, could you explain it?
There are seven element of art which are color, form, line, shape, space, texture, and value. I have shown colour really as I have a nice mixture of colours and the colours I have used describe everything really well because I have used bright colours in the background to show how everyone is so happy but with that I have also show grey to show how Brian is feeling. The form is also shown as the artwork is formatted really well. I have also shown line as the lines I have drawn really stand out and give an effect to all the objects which henceforth make the objects stand out really well. I have also shown space as there is no negative space in my artwork and everything is taking up an equal amount of space. I have shown texture as the texture of my colours really shows how the feeling are of the characters in the book. There is value to shown as in the sky you can see the value of the colours and how they are blended with each other but are still showing different feelings. Now to the principles, though I have not used all the principles of art, I have used the main ones which are balance, proportion, pattern, repetition, variety and unity. I have shown balance as there is a balance of colour and also a balance of the number of objects in the artwork, this balance helps as it show how everything is not so cluttered. There is proportion shown too as the person is not too big or too small and is proportionate to the all the objects in the background. There is pattern shown too as you can see a patter of how the drawing goes and the pattern of what Brian is doing at the current moment and how he is feeling sad. There is no repetition too as all of them are unique and different objects which are united together to make the artwork. Another principle shown is variety as there is a variety of colour which really make the objects stand out and they also make the feelings of the character stand out. Even unity is shown as all the objects are not just separately placed as all of have a purpose of being there and they all our combined leaving no negative space to show the scene in the invisible boy. So overall, I have shown all the elements of art and have shown the main principles of art which I think make my artwork decent.]]> 2019-04-12 08:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/adityavardhanoberoi1/t9ikk5jfhol/wish/351079142