by laura hartley

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:22:32 UTC

Ethan

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:25:03 UTC

It was really good the movements of the arms and legs wer good. Also the music is also catchy. Very good animation

Marcus

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:30:01 UTC

I thought that the music was matched up the dancing very well, but I think that the lighting is something to improve.

Matthew Cooper

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:35:42 UTC

I think the animation was very creative but the background kept moving around which was very distracting and I couldn't focus on the character.

Gavin Davies

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:38:37 UTC

i like the idea of elmo and way the his arms and legs move , the music was funny because it was the elmo song from sessamie street , i would of added more charters and made a story to improve it .

James Larvin

lauuhartley25 — 2014-05-22 15:42:10 UTC

I liked the music and the idea of Elmo dancing. To improve I would make sure the background stays still and look at doing something with the light.

Laura Hartley

lauuhartley25 — 2014-06-05 15:42:49 UTC

Marcus liked the fact the music and dancing was matched up byt he thought the lighting could be improved which i also think that myself so for next time i need to make sure that i film the animation in a better place so the sun is not making the animation brighter than what it should be. Ethan said he liked the animation he didn't say that i needed to change anything. Gavin suggested i add more characters to make the animation a lot longer and improve the story which i actually was going to do but i ran out of time so next time i will make the animation a lot longer. James also mentioned the lighting so i know i really need to set the animation in a different place he also mentioned the background moving that was part of the animation although some people may not of liked it so i will think about that for next time. Matthew also mentioned the background moving which was a distraction from looking at the character so maybe next time i will keep the background still. It hasn't make me change my mind about my animation i would of done the same one next time but i defiantly would add more characters next time and different background settings and film it in a more suitable lighting area. When comparing my animation to the others in the class i did feel as if it wasn't as long as the ones i had been looking at so next time i need to make the animation a lot longer just to make it better and improve on it and there was a lot of different animations i had watched within the class and some were brilliant for example James Larvins i really enjoyed watching that because you could tell he had put a lot of time and effort into the animation and must have done a lot of planning so i need to remember to update my planning next time and do a lot of planning to make sure the animation is the best it can be.