https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57 Reflections on Intervention, Lessons 4 & 5 en-us 2017-03-08 19:50:40 UTC 2018-01-08 04:59:12 UTC hello@padlet.com blessed_SS https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799779 The use of the pyramid to show how an introduction is meant to move from a broad to narrow focus was very effective to me. I was able to understand how to structure my introduction wherethe broadest first section is what is generally said and narrow it down to my own opinon being the last and smallest section.

]]> 2017-03-08 19:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799779 successandpeace678 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799793 The planning map has helped me as a visual aid since the different steps in planning an essay was outlined in different levels so it helped me to always remember to link all points to the main idea

]]> 2017-03-08 19:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799793 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799945 The planning map given, helped me understand clearly what is needed before starting an essay. This is so as it clearly separates the points to be discussed in my essay, such as separation between the two texts, and the content for each. This was useful as I never used to plan my essays so precisely.]]> 2017-03-08 19:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799945 maryam_mohammed99 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799975 The planning map helped me in understanding because seeing the map helped me to compartmentalize ideas for paragraphs]]> 2017-03-08 19:58:45 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158799975 Jaresiah https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800072 The pyramid organiser gave my thoughts process a visual representation as it conveyed the filter I use in my mind. From Thick and chunky ideas to slim sentences acting as a funnel
 ]]> 2017-03-08 19:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800072 Khanysia_J https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800091 The planning map has helped because it created a visual on how questions should be broken down before attempting. It gave a step by step metheffectively analysing and interpreting a question  ]]> 2017-03-08 19:59:11 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800091 Kerrinadenielhypolite https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800134 The planning map helped me to understand how planning an essay properly before writing because knowing what I want to write and creating my responses to prompts before attempting an essay enables me to have an essay of a higher quality ]]> 2017-03-08 19:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800134 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800174 The use of the planning map was very helpful as I now feel more confident in writing my essays as well as I have a clear understanding of how to tackle my essays using a step my step approach.]]> 2017-03-08 19:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800174 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800222 Padlet was great a tool in allowing my work to be easily viewed by my peers and my teacher so that it was able to be critiqued and analysed in to improve my techniques in writing.]]> 2017-03-08 19:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800222 briansookdeo1 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800343 The pyramid organizer and mapping plan showed me how to coordinate my essays.]]> 2017-03-08 20:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800343 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800518 The planning map really helped me to organize my thoughts and visually put them on paper. I like to write my thoughts,  so that I can remember them. ]]> 2017-03-08 20:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158800518 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158801159
The planning map helped me to properly organize the process of my ideas, it also was able to enhance the organization of my essay writing skills. ]]> 2017-03-08 20:03:09 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158801159 briansookdeo1 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158801756 Through visual representation the knowledge taught was reinforced orally. The pyramid organizer and padle did this well but the planning map helped most.

]]> 2017-03-08 20:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158801756 blessed_SS https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803055 This activity was very enjoyable even though we were dealing with a serious topic. I was able to see and take note of some of the errors that we as essay writers make. I learnt, through critiquing others work and the critics of my work, what i should do and what i shouldn't do when writing my introduction.]]> 2017-03-08 20:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803055 Kerrinadenielhypolite https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803138 I enjoyed the speed dating activity because I was able to read other persons' ideas on attempting the same prompt. This activity proved educational because I was able to see many common errors students make when writing introductions to their essays. My knowledge of these classic student mistakes helps me to critique my own introductions and avoid repeating these errors in both the introductions and other parts of my essays.]]> 2017-03-08 20:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803138 successandpeace678 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803256 The idea of speed dating was interesting I liked that different persons commented on my introduction, however, the process was a bit rushed so most persons did not get to truly make proper comments. I think I might have enjoyed this method more if we got a little bit more time]]> 2017-03-08 20:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803256 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803288 The speed dating exercise was so enjoyable. It was really good to view my friends' work, not only to know that I'm not the only one struggling with aspects of essay writing, but also to see where others are strong and I can get help from them. ]]> 2017-03-08 20:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803288 Jaresiah https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803542 The Peer Review/ Speed Dating actually was intimate and intimidating as a date but I enjoyed it receiving helpful pointers and seeing my work in the eyes of others ]]> 2017-03-08 20:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803542 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803796 The speed Dating activity was helpful as I was able to attain a number of different perspectives of my work which was effective in highlighting my mistakes to me.]]> 2017-03-08 20:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158803796 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158804877 The Pyramid Organizer was helpful as it provided a visual representation or guide that helped to focus my essay from a general to a narrow view. It was effective especially for a visual learner like myself]]> 2017-03-08 20:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158804877 briansookdeo1 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158813401 2017-03-08 20:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/158813401 https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/159139844 The use of the speed dating/peer review session was very interesting. It was great to get feedback from my peers so I would know what I need to work on.]]> 2017-03-09 21:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/MrsTudorBaptiste/t72ewj6xgr57/wish/159139844