https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h 8-326 en-us 2020-03-04 13:54:06 UTC 2020-03-04 17:51:45 UTC hello@padlet.com richardbigby9900 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321160 The analogy in paragraph three help the reader understand the condition of poor people traveling and how it helps the author's tone that poor people weren't treated equally because the condition of the ships was that it was crowding and didn't had any sanitation. In the text it states "The poor people were herded in the hold f the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation." The poor people didn't get any sanitation so that they can wash their hands and if one get sick it could spread because the ship is crowding with people. It proves that they didn't care about the poor people because they had to go through those conditions. In the text it states "But for working-class passengers, the conditions on a crowded ship were unthinkable." This proves that the poor people didn't get what they deserve and rich people got more than what they deserved. This is how the reader understand what the analogy of paragraph three and how ti support the author's tone.]]> 2020-03-04 14:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321160 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321171      The analogy in paragraph three helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in because it gives the reader a understanding on how harsh and bad the conditions where on the boat where. In paragraph three the captain states "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation's." This explains that the people on the ship where crowed into each other in the bottom of the ship. In the text it states " The passengers where were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. Otherwise, they spent much of their voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold." This explains that they were allowed on the deck in small groups but the weather had to be nice or they sat in the hold for most of their trips. This is how paragraph three helps identify the analogy. ]]> 2020-03-04 14:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321171 jenyahyacinthe https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321268 The analogy in paragraph 3 is"The poor people was herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation". The analogy helps the reader visualize that the conditions are not sanitary also because it was very crowded people aren't comfortable and the people has a lack of hygiene and food, which shows how their conditions are extreme. In the text it states that"  Herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep." This shows how poor people are crowded in the ship and the couldn't be clean. In the text it states that" 1850 was hardship for anyone, but for working-class passengers, the conditions on a crowded ship were  almost unthinkable". This shows how the environment the poor people are in is extreme. This is how the analogy reveal the conditions in the ship.]]> 2020-03-04 14:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321268 victoriamck1208 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321404 The analogy in paragraph helps readers understand the conditions people traveled in, as well as how it supports the author's tone, by showing how hard it was for the Chinese in their location. The analogy in paragraph 3 states "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation". This analogy helps reader understand their hardship in where they were living. There were no sanitation, and people in their location were poor. In the text, it states "Economic difficulties in China and some political unrest". This shows that China was in poverty and their economy was failing. That is how the analogy in paragraph 3 helps the readers understand the people's conditions in traveling.]]> 2020-03-04 14:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321404 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321627 The analogy in paragraph three is that "the poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep".This shows that the ship was crowded and the condition was bad. There condition was bad because the had no way to stay clean. The condition is also bad because the ship is crowded with alot of people and everyone is not clean they are dirty.In the text it states "The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups".This shows ]]> 2020-03-04 14:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454321627 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322320 The analogy in paragraph three is, "the poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation." The analogy helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in by, saying that they do not have any public health from just the words "no sanitation.The text is stating "we can only guess at the mortality rate of these Chinese immigrants." That evidence states that these people are becoming a subject of death from the simple word "mortality." The text is stating that people will split in groups on certain weather conditions. The text states " The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair." The evidence being shown is supporting that the people were traveling with no public health because they had to travel in specific weather conditions.The analogy also supports the authors tone by,]]> 2020-03-04 14:04:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322320 aa8721033 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322485 The analogy in paragraph 3 is that the people were on a ship. In the text it states "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a folk of sheep with no sanitation". This analogy explains  that people didn't have no food no soap of any water so they couldn't take no shower. So the people that were on the boat were very sick because there was no sanitation. Also "the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable". This piece of evidence explains how it was very difficult being on this crowd on the ship ]]> 2020-03-04 14:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322485 jaylonnk https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322620 The analogy in paragraph three helps to understand the conditions people traveled in by telling "us" that the people back the travel in a difficult way. The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. They spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of the hold. "Ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone, but for working-class passengers, the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable". This proves that it was hard to travel]]> 2020-03-04 14:05:14 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454322620 manuelayiser19 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454323689 The analogy in paragraph three is "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation.'' This shows that they did not have good conditions because they could not shower and had limited space." The passengers were allowed on deck in small groups but only when the weather was fair."This shows that they treat him as a person who was nothing to them like a flock of sheep without sanitation.    ]]> 2020-03-04 14:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454323689 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454324663 The analogy in paragraph three is that the people were on a very difficult ship. also "the poor people were herded  in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation . . . .". this evidence explains that there was no soap, clean water, no showers, and any type of things to clean them selves with. So everybody on the boat was very dirty and sick because there was no type of sanitation on the boat. so since there was no sanitation it was very difficult. Also "the conditions on a crowed ship were almost unthinkable." this peace of evidence explains how difficult it was being on this crowed ship.]]> 2020-03-04 14:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454324663 bbrittnay55 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454329139 The analogy is "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation." The analogy helps reader  to understand their conditions people traveled in because their condre very bad and unthinkable they also had no use of bathroom. It supports the author's tone because it show's how the poor people were treated bad. In the text it states "We can only guess at the mortality rate of these chinese immigrants who, likes their American counterparts, were traveling thousands of miles, lured by the promise of gold." This show's how the analogy helps the reader to understand their condition they traveled because they only came for the gold and due to them being poor it was a ruff trip with no restrooms. The text goes onto state "Ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone, but for working-class passengers, the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable." This show's how the analogy helps readers to understand there travel conditions because it was crowded and people must of felt overwhelmed. ]]> 2020-03-04 14:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454329139 campbell_ela381 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454329491 The analogy in paragraph 3, “The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation...,” helps the reader understand the conditions the passengers traveled in by...]]> 2020-03-04 14:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454329491 kaseemgfft https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454332235 The analogy help reader understand the condition by help visualize what was happening in the story. According to the text it state“ The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sleep with no Sanitation.” The analogy help the reader visualize the story. In the text it state “ they spent much of the voyage penned in the utter darkness of y the hold.” This analogy visualize how dark it was for them. This is how The analogy help reader understand the condition by help visualize what was happening in the story. ]]> 2020-03-04 14:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454332235 ljnewman1226 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454332929 The analogy in paragraph 3 is that "The environment was extreme". The conditions were harsh and people were getting sick. The historical account states " The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, with no sanitation." This evidence shows how people are getting sick because of the fact there was not alot of bathrooms and nowhere to brush their teeth. Also stated in the historical account " The conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable." This evidence explains how people felt uncomfortable about the environment they were in. Therefore the analogy in paragraph 3 is to explain the extreme environment.]]> 2020-03-04 14:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454332929 maydjina89 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454336414 The analogy "The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep, no sanitation...." helps the reader understand the conditions people traveled in because the condition was very harsh and they was treated like slaves didn't have bathroom.It support the author's tone because it shows that poor people was treated like slaves. According to the text, " One account, based on an American ship captain's first, hand-notes, relates that " The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like of sheep, with no sanitation...." The passengers was were allowed on the deck in small groups, but only when the weather was fair. This means that the poor was treated unfairly. In the text , " We can only guess at the mortality Chinese immigrant who ,like their American counterparts, were traveling thousand of miles, lured by the promise of gold. This demonstrates the Chinese was traveling ]]> 2020-03-04 14:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454336414 tyrahannd https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454337193 The analogy in paragraph 3 “The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep with no sanitation”. The author helps the readers understand the conditions people traveled in and the way it supports the author’s tone  because they had a difficult life. In the test it states “Ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone, but for working class passengers, the conditions on an American ship were almost unthinkable”. This shows the claim because they were in a situation that was unthinkable and unbearable. ]]> 2020-03-04 14:22:10 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454337193 jeanshadey https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454346908 The Analogy  helps  the reader understand  the bad condition the people traveled in the way  it support the tone because "the poor people were herded in the hold of ship like flock to sheep with no sanitation" this evidence explains the people had no way to clean themselves. There for the ships wre really  small making it  crowded because in the text it States "Ocean travel  in 1850 was hardship  for anyone, but  for  working-class  passengers, the conditions on crowded  ship  were almost  unthinkable" this evidence explains the travel was hard because there was not enough room  for the travelers. These were the conditions  the people traveled in ]]> 2020-03-04 14:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454346908 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454504604 The analogy in paragraph 3, '' The poor people were herded in the hold of the ship like a flock of sheep'' helps the reader understand the conditions the passengers traveled in by explaining how the conditions on the ship is extreme. The condition on the ship is extreme because the passengers have no sanitation. In the text it states '' the conditions on a crowded ship were almost unthinkable. This shows how the ship was over crowded which may have made the passengers overwhelmed. The author also states '' ocean travel in 1850 was a hardship for anyone, but for working class passengers...with no sanitation ''. This shows how the passengers had no wear to clean them selves .]]> 2020-03-04 17:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454504604 brizard4 https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454525919 2020-03-04 17:51:45 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/t6s3azx3pr0h/wish/454525919