Mock Trial 2023-2024 Scrimmage Feedback by Aidan Ofori https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15 en-us 2024-01-18 05:02:19 UTC 2024-01-19 01:46:25 UTC hello@padlet.com aiden is killing it tbh https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854043775 slayyy 💅

]]> 2024-01-18 23:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854043775 :o https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854050219 what a rebuttal by the prosecution it is so close!!

]]> 2024-01-18 23:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854050219 Prosecution Opening aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854054220 Good content, and your presentation improved!

]]> 2024-01-19 00:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854054220 def opening https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854056797 we need to work on the closing and wording of certain things, working on the sentence structure as well.

]]> 2024-01-19 00:08:11 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854056797 def opening https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854057152 be louder than you think you need to be!! great content, very eloquent and clear

]]> 2024-01-19 00:08:45 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854057152 Defense Opening aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854058667 Strong argument, make sure to end emphasizing that the client is not guilty at the end, maybe cover the sequence of events in case a little more rather than the witness statements

]]> 2024-01-19 00:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854058667 cop direct https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854061926 work on the "what" / "what, if anything"

is there hearsay???? There may be, work with me, arjun bhatkhande, to look through it.

Good job with witness identification.

Nice flow. Even, if you will.

]]> 2024-01-19 00:15:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854061926 detective cross https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854062579 all of your questions should be yes/no

]]> 2024-01-19 00:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854062579 cop cross https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854063922 remove speculation question

compound question about wearing / walking around that night


bea you did well.

]]> 2024-01-19 00:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854063922 Perren Cross aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854064079 around 11pm or at 11pm question seems a little weak, otherwise good job

]]> 2024-01-19 00:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854064079 Vasquez Direct aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854065972 For Vasquez: I would raise your voice, but the character you're selling (calm and professional) is really good

]]> 2024-01-19 00:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854065972 kc vasquez direct https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854075822 your direct is pretty flawless and trinity you do a good job as your person

]]> 2024-01-19 00:34:56 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854075822 General advice aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854080530 when misspeaking try to say something like excuse me or pardon me instead of sorry

]]> 2024-01-19 00:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854080530 For Gerri Moayed aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854088106 great job dodging questions in cross, give more concrete answers than "I think so"

]]> 2024-01-19 00:51:03 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854088106 arian sunshine https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854088459 you killed it on cross


]]> 2024-01-19 00:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854088459 moayad https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854089503 make sure to give yes or no answers, you have good redirects on that but make sure you fs say yes or no

]]> 2024-01-19 00:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854089503 Tobie Clark Direct aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854095563 really good, heard a couple leading questions you will want to reword

]]> 2024-01-19 00:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854095563 Tobie Clark Cross aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854099818 good job trying to work with new content, work on being louder

]]> 2024-01-19 01:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854099818 Arian Sunshine Direct aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854107477 Maybe could be shortened a little, but good!

]]> 2024-01-19 01:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854107477 Parker Turner Direct aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854113078 idk if mentioning that Turner hasn't experienced a case like this before will help, might undermine credibility

]]> 2024-01-19 01:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854113078 Turner Cross aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854117880 Good but slow down

]]> 2024-01-19 01:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854117880 Nic Yang Direct aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854125389 good job making yang work, just watch out for objections

]]> 2024-01-19 01:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854125389 Feedback notes: https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854129383 2024-01-19 01:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854129383 Prosecution Closing aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854130252 "Contrary to popular belief" idk if you should say that, seems a little irrelevant and casual

]]> 2024-01-19 01:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854130252 Defense Closing aidan_ofo https://padlet.com/aidan_ofo/t4iqwgxw5gexxb15/wish/2854135381 I would do a more dramatic climactic ending, but good!

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