Marking academic presentations by Bas-Szymaszek M. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4 List 1 good point and 1 point for improvement for Alicia's and Elijah's presentations en-us 2023-07-18 11:16:07 UTC 2023-07-19 10:50:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Good points mbasszymaszek https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647148885 2023-07-18 11:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647148885 Improvements mbasszymaszek https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149609 2023-07-18 11:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149609 Good points mbasszymaszek https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149661 2023-07-18 11:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149661 Improvements mbasszymaszek https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149824 2023-07-18 11:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647149824 give some examples which are all well-known company https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842301 2023-07-19 10:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842301 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842321 The structure of her presentation is clear ]]> 2023-07-19 10:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842321 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842343 body language   ]]> 2023-07-19 10:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842343 Use the conjunctions or some sentences to move on to the next part or points. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842351 2023-07-19 10:46:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842351 Use the conjunctions or some sentences to move on to the next part or points. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842385 2023-07-19 10:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842385 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842424 use plenty of examples]]> 2023-07-19 10:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842424 Pronunciation of key words https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842458 2023-07-19 10:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842458 The idea is very clear, and his Logical framework can be clearly seen through his overview https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842467 2023-07-19 10:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842467 lack data support https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842485 2023-07-19 10:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842485 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842488 structure is clear, and most of presentation is coherent. ]]> 2023-07-19 10:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842488 Her structure is clear and well organised, so it is easy to understand what she is talking about. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842647 2023-07-19 10:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842647 Her structure is shown in the form of a flow chart. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842667 2023-07-19 10:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842667 There are some charts to help understand the topic https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842672 2023-07-19 10:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842672 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842679 more examples to support]]> 2023-07-19 10:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842679 she need to improve her fluency and correct her pronunciation https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842770 2023-07-19 10:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842770 emphasis of key words--- help audience to get his points. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842788 2023-07-19 10:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842788 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842821 It will be better, if she present more actively, such as more body language .]]> 2023-07-19 10:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842821 Some pronunciations are not very accurate. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842834 2023-07-19 10:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647842834 The explanation of every concept is clear https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843070 2023-07-19 10:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843070 incapable of fluency https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843071 2023-07-19 10:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843071 lack of overall and keywords https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843077 2023-07-19 10:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843077 He need to improve his ponuciation in certain word, and make sure the fluency of some sentences. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843142 2023-07-19 10:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843142 Make more eye contact and do more body language. Also, improve the fluency of the speech. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843150 2023-07-19 10:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843150 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843362 the communication is not so effectively, which don't have a good rhythm. It's always staccato]]> 2023-07-19 10:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843362 His speech is fluent and do more body language. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843386 2023-07-19 10:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843386 https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843705 the logic of this presentation is clear and use the conjunctions words to make sure that]]> 2023-07-19 10:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843705 The structure is a little disordered. https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843736 2023-07-19 10:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843736 his topic is easy to understand, although my major is not human resource management , but I think almost everyone has a basic understanding of the implementation of human resource management in different organizations https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843876 2023-07-19 10:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mbasszymaszek/t498w8aj0d0ca9v4/wish/2647843876