https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v Which essays did you like? Type the number, followed by a reason or two you thought it was well written. en-us 2017-10-23 14:21:34 UTC 2017-10-23 19:44:10 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631380 2017-10-23 15:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631380 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631720 2017-10-23 15:31:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631720 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631828 i like the fact that it includes feelings while this is occurring. ]]> 2017-10-23 15:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199631828 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632138 27 
It had a good hook good dialogue and it got my attention right away. ]]> 2017-10-23 15:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632138 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632315 The introduction grabs attention of the readers this story has many vivid details.]]> 2017-10-23 15:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632315 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632483 very captivating
good details]]> 2017-10-23 15:32:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632483 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632680 i enjoy the fact that it started with a sentence it made you think like right in the beginning that helps the feel of the sentence ]]> 2017-10-23 15:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199632680 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633065 The introduction was good it caught my attention the story was very inspirational and motivational.

]]> 2017-10-23 15:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633065 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633216 It kept me interested]]> 2017-10-23 15:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633216 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633248 well done
grabbed my attention the most ]]> 2017-10-23 15:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633248 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633313 The story kept me on wanted to keep on reading. The story felt very realistic. ]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633313 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633348 Very interesting ]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633348 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633389 this story was very interesting to me, caught my intention ]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633389 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633393 kept me wanting to know more

]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633393 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633438 Number nine was the essay that interested me the most because I liked the language used]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633438 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633509 7. Seven had good introduction. Each paragraph made me want to keep on reading]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633509 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633515 Very descriptive
gets my attention


]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633515 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633553 2017-10-23 15:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633553 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633615 9]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633615 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633695 The intro started off good and made me wanting to know more]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633695 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633746 sounds realistic
makes you feel what the writer felt]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633746 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633774 The intro was very good and the story was sad]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633774 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633800 Unique
Grabs your attention and you understand what this person is going through]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633800 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633850 It has good detail and dialogue ]]> 2017-10-23 15:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199633850 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634001 i love the hook it really hooked me and kept up with my intrest level ]]> 2017-10-23 15:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634001 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634161 I enjoyed the conflict within the story]]> 2017-10-23 15:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634161 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634708 22. I liked the introduction]]> 2017-10-23 15:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634708 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634719 flows very smoothly almost like a soft blanket but there's rough part ....other than that its good ]]> 2017-10-23 15:36:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634719 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634944 12. It was very personal and descriptive. Also grabbed my attention. ]]> 2017-10-23 15:36:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634944 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634946 Could not stop reading. Kept getting more interesting 

]]> 2017-10-23 15:36:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199634946 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635274 Very descriptive and grabs my attention]]> 2017-10-23 15:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635274 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635545 19 was honestly the most interesting. It grabbed my attention drawled me in and kept me reading for more. The word choice and they way it tells the story is great. One of the best!]]> 2017-10-23 15:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635545 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635572 I really enjoyed it, It had great descriptions ]]> 2017-10-23 15:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635572 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635812 It really got me thinking and it described how they felt]]> 2017-10-23 15:38:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199635812 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636036 The story was good. The dialogue was good and very realistic. It caught my attention]]> 2017-10-23 15:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636036 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636091 Grabs my attention a lot ]]> 2017-10-23 15:38:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636091 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636290 I liked the story because in the beginning it caught my attention and was very entertaining 

]]> 2017-10-23 15:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199636290 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199637014 Its title caught my attention immediately and I liked the way he described how they handled it]]> 2017-10-23 15:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199637014 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199638342 it's captivating and descriptive ]]> 2017-10-23 15:42:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199638342 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199750865 it really caught my attention how he really expressed his emotion.

]]> 2017-10-23 19:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199750865 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199750988 #13 caught my attention because it seems realistic]]> 2017-10-23 19:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199750988 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199752136 The essay was very descriptive and emotional. I liked it because it's a topic you can relate to.]]> 2017-10-23 19:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199752136 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199754225 It was emotional. It really caught my attention ]]> 2017-10-23 19:15:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199754225 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199755136 Its very realistic. It sounds just like me. Oh wait it is me :| ]]> 2017-10-23 19:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199755136 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756468 it really caught my attention and i wanted to keep reading]]> 2017-10-23 19:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756468 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756542 I liked the way it was written, caught my attention.

]]> 2017-10-23 19:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756542 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756933 It was a very good essay. It caught my attention. They way how it expresses that the person isn't going to give up ]]> 2017-10-23 19:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199756933 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757043 it was cool]]> 2017-10-23 19:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757043 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757057 11,12, and 24 are written so good. They all end with a big emotional hit at the end. Pretty good development and structure.  ]]> 2017-10-23 19:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757057 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757061 It caught my attention in the beginning. It made me want to read more. ]]> 2017-10-23 19:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757061 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757233 This narrative was really realistic and full of details. It was a funny and interesting story.]]> 2017-10-23 19:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757233 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757827 This essay had very good monologue and I could feel what the writer was explaining]]> 2017-10-23 19:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199757827 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758512 This essay really caught my eye,  the way the author described the setting and the actions that had happened. It gave us great detail and information about the topic. You can actually see the image and visualize it in your mind, the way the emotions and words came together]]> 2017-10-23 19:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758512 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758705 2017-10-23 19:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758705 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758740 The theme of the story trapped my attention and made me want to finish the story even beyond. ]]> 2017-10-23 19:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758740 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758863 The title really caught my eye, and as I was reading it I felt like I could really relate to it.]]> 2017-10-23 19:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758863 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758897 it was funny]]> 2017-10-23 19:26:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199758897 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759075 It was emotional made me want to cry. 

]]> 2017-10-23 19:27:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759075 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759142 This narrative was really emotional. I could feel what the person felt by the way it was described. ]]> 2017-10-23 19:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759142 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759665 it was funny]]> 2017-10-23 19:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199759665 2887793 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199760408 Very graphic and heart breaking, had me having second thoughts on certain things ]]> 2017-10-23 19:30:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199760408 https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199760895 2017-10-23 19:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lweiss17/t3z0i6axew9v/wish/199760895