2.1 Written Text Revision Hub by Debbie Mansell https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65 Made with charisma en-us 2018-08-21 23:26:13 UTC 2018-11-19 22:00:54 UTC hello@padlet.com Revision sheet 1: Protest poetry basics dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448505 2018-08-21 23:34:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448505 Revision sheet 2: No Ordinary Sun dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448551 2018-08-21 23:35:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448551 Revision sheet 3: A Bucket of Blood for a Dollar dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448611 2018-08-21 23:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448611 Compare and contrast task dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448758 Print out this map and compare/contrast the two poems.]]> 2018-08-21 23:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448758 Previous 2.1 Written Text Exam Questions dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448848 Practice identifying 'good' questions to answer by highlighting the appropriate questions for our studied texts.

Use these to prepare a variety of essay plans on different appropriate questions.]]> 2018-08-21 23:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274448848 Basic Essay Structure dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449019 Sentence starters to build an essay that follows the PEEL paragraph structure.]]> 2018-08-21 23:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449019 2.1 Written Text Assessment Jargon dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449147 The basic grammar of this assessment that you need to know and understand.]]> 2018-08-21 23:40:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449147 2.1 Written Text Language Features dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449212 A list of basic language features you need to know and understand.]]> 2018-08-21 23:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449212 Achievement Criteria dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449788 How we assess your essay!]]> 2018-08-21 23:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449788 2017 Examination Paper dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449970 Here's what last year's students had in front of them in the exam!]]> 2018-08-21 23:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274449970 What you need to do for A, M or E. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274450267 A list of criteria specific to our protest poetry study that you should be meeting to gain each level.]]> 2018-08-21 23:48:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274450267 2017 Moderator's Report dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274450491 This is written by the external moderators of this standard, and tells you exactly what students did (or didn't do) well in the exam, and to secure each grade.]]> 2018-08-21 23:49:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274450491 Planning and structuring your essay dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452284 Step by step of what to do in the exam!]]> 2018-08-22 00:04:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452284 Re-read the two poems we studied in class. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452439 Look up any words/vocabulary you don't know the meaning of.

Summarise the main ideas the author develops in each poem.]]> 2018-08-22 00:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452439 Check out the written text achievement criteria and moderator's report. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452492 2018-08-22 00:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452492 Go through the assessment and language features terminology glossaries and ensure you know and understand the terms. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452541 2018-08-22 00:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452541 Complete the revision sheets in order - 1, 2 and 3. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452626 These are found under 'revision tasks' - if you do NOTHING else you MUST complete these!]]> 2018-08-22 00:07:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452626 Compare and contrast task dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452699 2018-08-22 00:08:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452699 Annotate each poem dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452755 See how many language features you can annotate and explain the effect of, in each poem. When you've finished, look at pictures you took of the whole class annotation to see if you missed any. ]]> 2018-08-22 00:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274452755 No Ordinary Sun: Grouping Evidence Table dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453049 2018-08-22 00:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453049 No Ordinary Sun: Grouping Evidence dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453292 This is an old task that you may have started during the previous lessons, but it is crucial that you complete the table to prepare a range of evidence you can discuss in your essay. Know these quotes and their effects OFF BY HEART!]]> 2018-08-22 00:12:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453292 A Bucket of Blood for a Dollar: Grouping Evidence Table dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453467 2018-08-22 00:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453467 A Bucket of Blood for a Dollar: Grouping Evidence Table dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453491 2018-08-22 00:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453491 Complete the 'body paragraphs - finding evidence' essay plan. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453703 2018-08-22 00:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453703 Read the A/M/E checklist, 2017 moderator's report and exemplar excellence paragraphs. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453754 2018-08-22 00:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274453754 Exemplar Excellence Paragraphs dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454040 Not full essays!
You could read through these and work out:
- The focussing question the student might be answering
- Identify the examples and their unpacked explanations
- Identify the links the student has made to the author's purpose and society in each paragraph.]]> 2018-08-22 00:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454040 Body Paragraphs - Finding Evidence dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454156 This helps you prepare an essay outline to a previous exam question, including identifying the point in each paragraph, evidence and explanation, and link to author's purpose and society. 10/10 would recommend!]]> 2018-08-22 00:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454156 Go through these slides on 'how to write an essay' and produce a practice introduction to a previous exam question. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454916 2018-08-22 00:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274454916 Get feedback on your intro! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455059 2018-08-22 00:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455059 Write the first body paragraph of the above essay. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455066 2018-08-22 00:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455066 Get feedback on your body paragraph! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455107 2018-08-22 00:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455107 Write an outline of what you would include in the remaining three paragraphs (Tuwhare #2, Baxter #1 and Baxter #2) and a conclusion. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455131 2018-08-22 00:26:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455131 Get feedback on your outline dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455174 2018-08-22 00:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455174 Go back through all the lesson presentations from Term Two to recap and complete any outstanding work you might have missed. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455326 2018-08-22 00:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455326 Take charge of your own revision now, and work on areas you know you need to. e.g... dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455444 Memorising quotes and the names of language features.

Unpacking each quote to fully explain how the language used achieves the author's purpose.

Researching and finding authentic links to make between the poem and society.

Writing your essay with flair.]]> 2018-08-22 00:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455444 Look at the previous exam questions and highlight the ones that would be suitable to answer based on our studied poems. dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455761 2018-08-22 00:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455761 Put together a document with a relevant quote from the following people, that you could use in your essay to support your ideas: dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455879 - Jamila Raquib on the secret to non-violent resistance (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OIpgrZ8yS-Q).
- Hone Tuwhare on his poem 'No Ordinary Sun' (http://www.nzepc.auckland.ac.nz/kmko/06/ka_mate06_deloughrey.pdf)
- James K Baxter on his philosophy about being a poet.
- One other academic, who has written or commented on ideas present in 'No Ordinary Sun' ]]> 2018-08-22 00:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274455879 No Ordinary Sun: Copy of poem dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274460865 2018-08-22 00:54:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274460865 A Bucket of Blood for a Dollar: Copy of poem dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274460928 2018-08-22 00:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274460928 The first lesson! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274467974 - Useful links to assessment resources
- No Ordinary Sun pre and post reading tasks]]> 2018-08-22 01:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274467974 The second lesson! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468108 - Non-violent resistance 
- No Ordinary Sun social context
- Language features ]]> 2018-08-22 01:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468108 The third lesson! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468391 - A Bucket of Blood for a Dollar pre reading
- Social context]]> 2018-08-22 01:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468391 The fourth lesson! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468504 - A bucket of Blood for a Dollar 
- Compare and contrast
- Grouping evidence]]> 2018-08-22 01:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274468504 Read the exemplar excellence paragraphs dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274497032 2018-08-22 06:36:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274497032 Explode the previous questions dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274708556 Use the worksheet under 'revision tasks' for this.]]> 2018-08-22 20:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/274708556 No Ordinary Sun perusall class annotation dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/275419339 https://app.perusall.com/courses/2english-written-text-external/no-ordinary-sun?assignmentId=ozh99KCHLfTX7mo4D&part=1]]> 2018-08-27 01:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/275419339 Explode the question! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/276417358 2018-08-29 21:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/276417358 Lesson One dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306133748 Kahoot and pictionary!

]]> 2018-11-19 21:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306133748 Unpack that quote! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134130 Choose any line(s) from each poem to look at deeply. Follow the instructions on the attached document to make a lovely poster that fully unpacks your quote(s)]]> 2018-11-19 21:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134130 Lesson two dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134612 Finish that quote and author's purpose task! ]]> 2018-11-19 21:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134612 Lesson the third dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134704 Making links beyond the text!]]> 2018-11-19 21:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134704 Fourth lesson! dmansell1 https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134873 Conclusions, ask the author and essay structure and plan.]]> 2018-11-19 22:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dmansell1/t2rcmxfkrr65/wish/306134873