HSH207 Week 6 Wed 11AM with Emily Seminar Activity: Assessing contributions by https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0 Post your feedback to another group here. en-us 2023-08-22 08:16:21 UTC 2023-08-23 02:44:25 UTC hello@padlet.com The presentation of the slide was well planned and was visually appealing. The information was well researched and interesting. Overall the presentation of this slide was neat and enjoyable considering the time and recourses available. eviecallow17 https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669528415 2023-08-23 02:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669528415 aliciaberbia https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669529421 Spoke nice and clearly, projected voice well.
Easy to follow the idea and flowed logically, the slides didn't have to many words (could be more concise but we did this in 20 minutes so very impressed!)
How you shared the speaking load was effortless and transitioned well. ]]> 2023-08-23 02:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669529421 s222260148 https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669530518 Overall, contributions by individual members of the group seemed to be evenly distributed and everyone seemed to of participated in the completion of the task. This was evident as the group was confident in their presentation and eloquent enough to demonstrate an understanding of their chosen topic. A small minor recommendation for the next task, though I understand there was not enough time would be to include in-text citations within the slides to show that the information was reliable and authentic.]]> 2023-08-23 02:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669530518 https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669531390 Overall, the presentation was well-formatted, engaging and well researched in the given amount of time. Each slide had the key points presented in an easy to read way and were each elaborated on, assisting the audience in understanding the topic. ]]> 2023-08-23 02:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669531390 group 3 slocombesophie https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669531403 Together you both created an appropriate upstream intervention strategy for middle aged adults. The use of in-text referencing and credible websites was a great inclusion into your slide. You used a great range of resources that where valid to their intervention. 

In future tasks, government websites such as ABS, AIHW, AIFS would add relevant data to support the impacts of smoking you provided. ]]> 2023-08-23 02:44:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ecooke18/t01pmcboa183poj0/wish/2669531403