https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow - What are the features of this example of written communication e.g. type of language used, structure/formatting of the content, level of assumed knowledge etc. en-us 2017-03-15 09:27:15 UTC 2025-10-01 20:03:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/160392219 The language used this example was easy to understand, without using too much jargon. When they explain a variable in osteoporosis treatment, e.g. protein, they explain it in simple terms from the bottom up so that they aren't assuming previous knowledge on nutrition status or physical activity physiology. 

It was structured in bite sized pieces, with shorter, sharp paragraphs so the target audience wouldn't have to sift through large amounts of information. ]]> 2017-03-15 22:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/160392219 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161781710 The language was simple, straight to the point, clear, easy to read and descriptive without being too wordy. ]]> 2017-03-22 12:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161781710 finsstar1 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161980405 Language employed within the article was very simplistic and succinct. Because of this, the reader was able to understand more complex and new concepts such as vitamin d
 role in bone health.]]> 2017-03-22 21:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161980405 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161984414 The writer did not assume that reader had any prior knowledge and this was exemplified through their writing style. The language used was simple, clear, easy to read and easy to comprehend. The structure of the article was easy to follow with their being two main focal points: lifestyle and home remedies and prevention. Within each of these, there were sub-categories clearly highlighted, making it easy for the reader to understand what they were reading. Furthermore, the text was not presented in "large chunks" rather, it was in small structured paragraphs. This also contributes to the simplicity of the article. ]]> 2017-03-22 22:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161984414 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161993187 The structure of the article was clear and had a good flow; the subheadings also allow relevant information to be found more easily. The language is formal and simplistic not requiring a large vocabulary. This article has an assumed knowledge that the individuals have read the previous pages on what is it, symptoms, diagnosis, etc. ]]> 2017-03-22 23:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161993187 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161997886 Type of language: minimal jargon, fairly 'wordy' is some areas.
Structure/formatting of content: good use of subheadings, good use of bullet points for examples.
Level of assumed knowledge: fairly minimal-moderate assumed knowledge, the writer provided clear statements for risk and protective factors. ]]> 2017-03-23 00:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/161997886 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162001833 The main standout of the written communication in this article was the use of bold headings and sub-categories. This made it easy for people to seek out the type of information they were looking for. 
The article contained minimal medical jargon, and was presented in lay terms that could easily be understood by readers at different levels of health literacy. 


]]> 2017-03-23 01:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162001833 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162011237 It was simple and easy to understand without any prior knowledge. The headings made it easy to see was being written about]]> 2017-03-23 03:03:39 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162011237 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162078005 This article had a good structure with a genuine purpose towards informing the reader about osteoporosis and the preventative measures that can be taken to reduce the risk of developing the condition. A good logical order aided in the layout of the article and sentences and paragraphs flowed and were succinct. The use of subheadings allows the reader to scan the article to read the sections that most interest them. However, a lack of an introduction may fail to may make an immediate impression on the reader. ]]> 2017-03-23 11:17:00 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162078005 18101486 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162539159 The language used was not overly scientific however there appeared to be an expectation of some basic health knowledge.  The article was set out in a clear, flowing format with headings and dot points.  This would help to prevent the reader being overwhelmed by 'information overload'.

]]> 2017-03-25 03:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162539159 mollykfairweather https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162541648 Language employed was very clear, with no use of scientific jargon. Layout was easy to follow with clear subheadings will no large chunks of text.
The level of assumed knowledge was minimal, with lay terms and explanations given to the points raised eg 'Protein is one of the building blocks of bone'. ]]> 2017-03-25 04:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162541648 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162717681 The article was well written for the general public being easy to understand. The language was straight to the point and was set out with clear headings. The structure was clear and it seemed to flow really well. ]]> 2017-03-27 07:32:41 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162717681 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162728815 Language was simple, and there is good use of white space making it easy to read, ie. not too cluttered.]]> 2017-03-27 08:30:03 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162728815 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162760473 Features of this written communication:
Lay terms used
Limited use of jargon
Clear formatting
Perfect use of spacing
Good flow
No assumed knowledge, clear and concise explanation.]]> 2017-03-27 11:00:03 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162760473 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162992466 The article employed lay language to explain, in simple terms, the basics of osteoporosis. ]]> 2017-03-28 01:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/162992466 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163005254 The language used in the article is simple, clear, concise and jargon-free. It is layperson-friendly as it does not assume prior knowledge. The layout provides information in short and concise paragraphs that will not overwhelm the reader. The use of subtitles, headings and highlighted words makes the article easy to follow. ]]> 2017-03-28 04:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163005254 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163012749 The article was very straight forward and easy to follow for the intended audience. With clear, simple and little to no jargon the written text allows individuals to gain an understanding without any prior knowledge to be needed. ]]> 2017-03-28 06:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163012749 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163015399 Information is presented on a need-to-know basis, i.e. the physiological mechanisms of bone formation etc. are not necessary
Information is clear and easy to understand. 
The information is spread out and separated by subheadings which is less overwhelming and boring than slabs of text.

]]> 2017-03-28 06:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163015399 rileykusuma https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163043708 - Simple language using short phrases 
- Structure and formatting - dot points under major headings which makes it simple to read and understand 

]]> 2017-03-28 08:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163043708 livster_990 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163061018 Language with limited medical jargon has been used to simplify a complex concept for the lay reader. 
The clear headings and separation of topics adds to the simplicity and flow of the information to allow readers to absorb the information easily.
Knowledge in the area is not required to comprehend the article, however the intended audience is one who is actively seeking this information, therefore they would more than likely have some basic knowledge of the topic.]]> 2017-03-28 09:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163061018 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163090753 - clear and concise sentences.
- employs the use of bullet points to make it clearer to read. 
- paragraphs are introduced with an explanatory informative statement to build a basic level of understanding and then more information is given as to how this can relate to the reader and their daily habits and choices. ]]> 2017-03-28 12:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163090753 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163127469 - succinct notes
- coherent sentenses
-easy to understand language
-short
-easily read ie. font colours
-laymans terms
-important info only ]]> 2017-03-28 13:52:02 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163127469 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163596404 2017-03-30 04:08:50 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163596404 https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163851179 The language utilised in the article, although formal, steers away from medical jargon and remains relatively simple allowing ease of understanding from readers. The format follows a logical structure again, aiding in improving the reader's depth of understanding. ]]> 2017-03-31 00:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/18472372/szds28lic0ow/wish/163851179