Period 2 Fragments/Run-ons by Lorinda Shew https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq Made with brains en-us 2020-09-21 00:19:18 UTC 2021-09-22 19:04:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f49a.png Mrs. Shew lorindas https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/774500856 Fragment example
Fragment fixed

Run-on example
Repaired run-on]]> 2020-09-24 03:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/774500856 Lillian Walker lillianw25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757770398 Fragment- A shooting guard
Fixed: Kobe is a shooting guard.

Run-on- Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of college
Fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy; he joined the NBA straight out of college.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757770398 Avery Nidiffer averyn25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757771126 Run-on: Kobe played his entire 20-season career in the league with the LA Lakers he is one of the game’s all-time greats.

Fixed: Kobe played his entire 20-season career in the league with the LA Lakers. He is one of the game’s all-time greats. 

Fragment: A shooting guard.

Fixed: He was a shooting guard as well.
]]> 2021-09-21 16:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757771126 Lily Sandefur lilys25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757774976 Fragment: Widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time.

Fragment fixed: Kobe Bryant is widely regarded as one of the greatest basketball players of all time.

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of college.

Run-on fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. He joined the NBA straight out of College.]]> 2021-09-21 16:27:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757774976 Danielle Dotson danielled25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776513 Fragment: Retired in 2016 after scoring 60 points in this final game. 

Fragment fix: Kobe retired in 2016, after scoring 60 points in his final game.

Run-on: Kobe was multilingual he spoke English, Italian and Spanish fluently. 

Run-on fix: Kobe was multilingual. He spoke English, Italian and Spanish fluently. ]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776513 Noah Speir https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776635 Run-on
Kobe is multilingual he speaks English, Italian, Spanish fluently

Run-on fix
Kobe is multilingual; he speaks English, Italian, and Spanish fluently.

Fragment
A shooting guard.

Fragment fix
Kobe played as a shooting guard.
]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776635 Talan Pryor talanp25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776673 Run-on:  Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA right out of high school.
Fragment: A shooting guard.

Run-on fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy ; he then joined the NBA right out of high school.
Fragment fixed: Kobe was a shooting guard.




]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776673 Lillian Poston https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776781 Fragment- widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time
 Fragment Fixed - Kobe was widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time.
Run-on -  Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school.
Run-on Fix- Kobe spent his early years in Italy; he joined the NBA straight out of college.
]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757776781 Kashius Salcido kashiuss25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757777634 Fragment: A shooting guard

Fragment fix: Kobe was also a shooting guard 

Run-o:  Kobe was multilingual he spoke English, Italian, and Spanish fluently.

Run-on fix: Kobe was multilingual, he spoke English, Italian and Spanish fluently.


]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757777634 Abby Taylor abigaylt25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757777984 Run-on: Kobe played his entire 20 season career in the league with the LA Lakers he is one of the game’s all-time greats. 

Run-on fix: Kobe played his entire 20 season career in the league with the LA Lakers. He is one of the game's all-time greats.

Fragment: Gone but not forgotten. 

Fragment fix: Kobe is gone, but not forgotten.



He
]]> 2021-09-21 16:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757777984 Devan Downing https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779281 Run-On: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he went stright to the NBA after highschool.

Run-On Fix: KObe spent his early years in Italy. After graduating hihgschool, he went stright to the NBA.  

Fragment: Was a shooting guard. 

Fragment Fix: Kobe was a shooting guard. ]]> 2021-09-21 16:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779281 Jaiden Babb jaidenb25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779530 Fragment ex: A shooting guard. 
Fragment fixed: Kobe Bryant was a professional shooting guard.  

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of college.  
Run on fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy; he joined the NBA straight out of college.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779530 Leyna Hudson leynah25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779763 Fragment: widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time.
 
Fixed Fragment: Kobe was widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time.


Run-on: Kobe was multilingual he spoke English, Italian, and Spanish fluently.

Fixed Run-on: Kobe was multilingual, he spoke English, Italian, and Spanish fluently]]> 2021-09-21 16:29:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757779763 Lucas Vanderlip lucasv251 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757780875  Fragment: A shooting guard.

 Fixed: Kobe was a shooting guard.  
 
Run on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school.
 
Fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. He joined the NBA straight out of high school.]]> 2021-09-21 16:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757780875 Daisy Sandefur daisys25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757782818 Fragment example: Gone but not forgotten.

Fragment fix: Kobe is gone, but not forgotten.

Run-on: Kobe is multilingual he speaks English, Italian and Spanish fluently.

Run-on fix: Kobe is multilingual. He can speak English, Italian and Spanish fluently.]]> 2021-09-21 16:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757782818 Elizabeth Love elizabethl251 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757783685 Run-on: Kobe played his entire 20-season career in the league with the LA Lakers he is one of the game's all-time greats.

Fixed: Kobe played is entire 20-season in the leagues with the LA Lakers, he is one of the games all-time greats

Fragment: Retired in 2016 after scoring 60 points in his final game.

Fixed: Kobe retired in 2016 after scoring 60 points in his final games.]]> 2021-09-21 16:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757783685 Owen Kolp owenk251 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757783747 Fragment: A shooting guard.

Fixed: Kobe was a shooting guard.

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school.

Fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. He joined the NBA straight out of high school.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757783747 Tanner Anderson tannera25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757785987 Fragment: A Shooting Guard

Fragment fixed: Kobe played as a Shooting guard.

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of High school

Run-on fix: Kobe spent his early years in Italy; he joined the NBA straight out of high school.
]]> 2021-09-21 16:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757785987 Ryan Rutledge ryanr25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757787387 Fragment: Gone but not forgotten.
Kobe is gone but not forgotten.
Run-on: A dominant scorer, Bryant won five NBA championships he won the 2008 MVP award with the Los Angeles Lakers.
A dominant scorer, Bryant won five NBA championships; he won the 2008 MVP award with the Los Angeles Lakers.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757787387 Caleb Hopkins calebh25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757788732 Fragment, A shooting guard. 
Kobe was one of the best shooting guards.
Run on Kobe was multilingual he spoke English, Italian, and Spanish fluently
Run on fixed, Kobe was multilingual. Kobe could speak English, Italian, and Spanish fluently.]]> 2021-09-21 16:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757788732 Michael Varitek https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757789484 Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of highschool.
Run-on fix: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. When he got out of highschool, he joined the NBA.

Fragment: Retired in 2016 after scoring 60 points in his final game.
Fragment fix: Kobe retired in 2016, after scoring 60 points in his final game.


]]> 2021-09-21 16:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757789484 Rayna Hayes raynah25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757792453 Fragment: A shooting guard.
Fixed: Kobe Bryant was a shooting guard.

Run-on: A dominant scorer, Kobe won five NBA championships he won the 2008 MVP Award with the Los Angeles Lakers
Fixed: A dominant scorer, Kobe won five NBA championships and the 2008 MVP Award with the Los Angeles Lakers.]]> 2021-09-21 16:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757792453 Sophia Bauer sophiab252 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757793816 Fragment: A shooting guard.
Fixed Fragment: Kobe was a shooting guard.

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy joined the NBA straight out of high school.
Fixed run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy and joined the NBA straight out of high school.]]> 2021-09-21 16:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757793816 Mya Carpenter myac25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757796786 Fragment: A shooting guard
 Fixed: Kobe Bryant was a shooting guard.

Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school 
Fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. After graduating high school he went straight to the NBA.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:35:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757796786 Max Russell maxr251 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757799636 Fragment: Retired in 2016 after scoring 60 points in his final game. 
Fixed Fragment; Kobe retired in 2016 after scorning 60 points in his final game.
Run-on:  Kobe spent his early years in Italy but he joined the NBA straight out of highschool. ]]> 2021-09-21 16:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757799636 Alivia Belanger aliviab25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757801679  Fragment: A shooting guard.
Kobe was a professional shooting guard.
 Run-on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school.
 Kobe spent his early years in Italy. Kobe joined the NBA straight out of high school.

]]> 2021-09-21 16:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757801679 wyatt eldred wyatte25 https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757804205 run-on: Kobe played his entire 20 season career with the la lakers he is one of the games all time greats 

fixed run-on: Kobe played his entire 20 season career with the la lakers; he is one of the games all time greats 

fragment: gone but not forgotten

fixed fragment: kobe is gone, but not forgotten]]> 2021-09-21 16:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757804205 River Harris https://padlet.com/lorindas/sz3zzdcfyn7yozbq/wish/1757914108 Run on: Kobe spent his early years in Italy he joined the NBA straight out of high school.

Fixed: Kobe spent his early years in Italy. He joined the NBA straight out of high school.

Fragment: A shooting guard

Fixed: Kobe was a shooting guard.

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