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      <title>Beta Thursday lesson 7 by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:08:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lim Zen Xi corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen, </p><p>Guess what? I participated in a swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you all geared up to share with you about my experienced in swimming competition. Before diving in, I felt nervous and my heart raced like drumbeat. But after, the race, I felt like a super hero. I won the first prize and I'm proud of myself.                   Regards,             </p><p>Zen Xi   </p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in a swimming competition, <strong>and it was such an exciting experience!</strong> I can’t wait to share all the details with you.</p><p>Before diving into the pool, I felt <strong>incredibly nervous</strong>, and my heart was racing like a drumbeat. But as soon as the race was over, I felt like a true superhero! <strong>The best part?</strong> I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I’m so proud of myself and<strong> can’t wait to celebrate this achievement with you.</strong></p><p>Looking forward to catching up soon!</p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Zen Xi</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:15:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jerreth corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>Guess what?I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday.I am eager to share with you about the swimming competition.I competed in the 50m breaststroke and 100m freestyle.Before diving in,I had butterflies in the stomach.But after race,I felt like a superhero.I won the first prize!Cant wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Jerreth</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in my very first swimming competition<strong>, and it was an unforgettable experience! </strong>I’m so excited to share all the details with you.</p><p>I competed in two events: the 50m breaststroke and the 100m freestyle. Before diving into the pool, I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach.<strong> But once the race was over</strong>, I felt like a true superhero! <strong>And the best part?</strong> I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I’m still on cloud nine and can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Looking forward to catching up soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Jerreth</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:16:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jae Hong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen, </p><p>       Hi, how are you. I participated in swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you about I competed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in, I felt had butterflies in the stomach. But after race, I felt like a superhero. I won the first prize! I can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Corrected</p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p><br></p><p>Hi, how are you?  I participated in <strong>a swimming competition</strong> last Saturday. I can’t wait to share with you <strong>that I competed</strong> in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in, I felt <strong>butterflies in my stomach</strong>. But after <strong>the race</strong>, I felt like a superhero. <strong>The great news is</strong>,I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I can’t wait to tell you more.</p><p><strong>Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Jae Hong </strong></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:20:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Sin Han corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/syggco1ac7u54s1d/wish/3345220617</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>  Guess what? I participate in my first swimming competition last Sunday. I competed in the 50m free style and 100m. Before diving in, I felt had butterflies in the stomach. But after race, I felt like a superhero won first prize! Can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Sin Han</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Guess what? I <strong>participated</strong> in my first swimming competition last Sunday. I competed in the <strong>50m freestyle</strong> and <strong>100m backstroke</strong>. Before diving in, I felt <strong>butterflies in my stomach</strong>. But after <strong>the race</strong>, I felt like a superhero <strong>and won first prize</strong>! Can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,<br>Sin Han</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:24:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kong Jun San corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear White Chocolate,</p><p>Guess what? I participated in swimming lesson last Saturday, I can't wait to share with you about swimming lesson. This is my first time complete the freestyle 50m and butterflies 100m. Before diving in, I had butterflies in the stomach. But after race, I felt like a superhero. This is my first time to complete the Swimming competition. I also get 1st and won the first prize! Can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Best regards</p><p>Kong Jun San</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Karen, </p><p>Guess what? I participated in swimming lessons last Saturday. I can't wait to share my experience from the swimming lessons. This is my first time competing in the freestyle 50m and butterfly 100m. Before diving in, I had butterflies in my stomach. But after the race, I felt like a superhero. This is my first time completing the swimming competition. I also got 1st place and won the first prize! Can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Kong Jun San</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen, </strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in swimming lessons, <strong>and it was such an exciting experience! I can’t wait to share all the details with you.</strong></p><p><strong>For the first time ever, </strong>I competed in two events: the freestyle 50m and the butterfly 100m. Before diving into the pool, <strong>I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach. </strong>But once the race was over, I felt like a true superhero. I’m thrilled to share that I won <strong>1st place</strong>. I’m still over the moon and can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Looking forward to catching up soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br><strong>Kong Jun San</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:29:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Ying corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: karen @gmail. com </p><p>Subject: Swimming Competition </p><p> Dear Karen, </p><p>          Guess what, I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you about my amazing exprience. I competed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in, I had buterflies in the stomach. After the race, I like on top of the world. I was on cloud nine because I won the first prize! I can't wait to tell you more!</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Sze Ying.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in my very first swimming competition, <strong>and it was such an incredible experience! </strong>I’m so excited to share all the details with you.</p><p>I competed in two events: the 50m freestyle and the 100m backstroke. Before diving into the pool, <strong>I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach.</strong> But once the race was over, I felt like I was on top of the world because I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I’m still over the moon and can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Looking forward to catching up soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Sze Ying</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:30:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Varick Swimming Competition corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To:karen@gmail.com               </p><p>Dear Karen,</p><p>  Guess what?I parpticipated in swimming competition last Saturday.I am eager to share with you about the swimming competition.I competed in the 50m breaststroke and 100m freestyle.Before diving in ,I had buttterflies in the stomach.But after race,I felt like a superhero.I won the first prize!Cant wait to tell you more</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Varick    </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p> <strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I <strong>participated</strong> in <strong>a swimming competition</strong> last Saturday. I am eager to share with you <strong>about my experience at the swimming competition.</strong> I competed in the 50m breaststroke and 100m freestyle. Before diving in, I had <strong>butterflies in my stomach.</strong> But after <strong>the race,</strong> I felt like a superhero. I won <strong>first prize! Can't wait to tell you more.</strong></p><p>Regards,<br>Varick        </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:33:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wong Yu Qin corrected</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/syggco1ac7u54s1d/wish/3345239888</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>Guess what?I participated inswimming competition last Saturday.Ican't wait to share with you about I competed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke.Before diving in,I felt had butterflies in the stomach.But after race,I felt like on top of the world.I won the first prize!I can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Yu Qin</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I participated in <strong>a swimming competition</strong> last Saturday. I <strong>can't wait to share with you that I competed</strong> in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in, I <strong>had butterflies in my stomach.</strong> But after <strong>the race,</strong> I felt like <strong>I was on top of the world.</strong> I won <strong>first prize!</strong> I can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,<br>Yu Qin</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:38:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alyssa Teoh corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     Guess what I participated in swimming class last Saturday I am eager to share with you about the swimming competition. I completed in the 50m Break stroke and 100m freestyle. Before diving in, I had butterflies in my stomach. But after the race, I felt like a superhero. This is my first time completed the swimming competition. I won the first prize! Can't wait to tell you more about the swimming competition.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Alyssa Teoh</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>  Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what ? I participated in swimming competition last Saturday. I am eager to share my experience from the swimming competition. I <strong>competed </strong>in the 50m <strong>breaststroke </strong>and 100m freestyle. Before diving in, I had butterflies in my stomach. But after the race, I felt like a superhero. This is my first time <strong>competing </strong>in the swimming competition. I won the first prize! Can't wait to tell you more about the swimming competition.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Alyssa Teoh</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-27 13:43:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Qlowin  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>Hi Karen,</p><p><br/></p><p>Guess what?I just participated in my first swimming competition on Saturday .I can’t wait to share with you my experience.I participated in the 50 meter freestyle and the 30 meter butterfly stroke.Before the competition,I had butterflies in my stomach,but after finishing</p><p>, I was over the moon as I won second place in the 50 meter freestyle competition.I hope to see you soon!</p><p><br/></p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Qlowin</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Hi Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I just participated in my first swimming competition on <strong>Saturday.</strong> I can’t wait to share with you my experience. I participated in the <strong>50-meter freestyle</strong> and the <strong>30-meter butterfly stroke.</strong> Before the competition, I had butterflies in my stomach, but after finishing, I was over the moon as I won second place in the <strong>50-meter freestyle.</strong> I hope to see you soon!</p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br>Qlowin</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-28 00:08:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kua Weng Yik corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Weng Yik,</p><p>Guess what? I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you about I completed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in, I felt had butterflies in the stomach. But after race, I felt like a superhero. Won the first prize! Won a bronze medal.</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen, </strong></p><p>Guess what? I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you <strong>that I competed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke.</strong> Before diving in, I <strong>had butterflies in my stomach.</strong> But after <strong>the race,</strong> I felt like a superhero. <strong>I won the first prize and a bronze medal!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Weng Yik</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-28 02:07:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Phauh Jaynelle corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>Guess what? I participated in a swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you about my experienced. I competed in the 50m freestyle and 100m breaststroke.</p><p>  Before diving in, I felt my heart raced like a drumbeat. But after race, I felt like on top of the world.</p><p>  I won the first prize! I can't wait to tell you more!</p><p>                                                                                Your friend,</p><p><strong>                                                                                 Jaynelle</strong></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated  in my very first swimming competition, <strong>and it was absolutely thrilling!</strong> I’m so excited to share my incredible experience with you. I competed in two events: the 50m freestyle and the 100m breaststroke.</p><p>Before diving into the pool,<strong> my heart was racing like a drumbeat, and I could feel butterflies fluttering in my stomach.</strong> But once the race was over, I felt like I was on top of the world.I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I’m still over the moon and can’t wait to tell you<strong> all the details when we meet.</strong></p><p><strong>Your friend,</strong><br><strong>Jaynelle</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-02-28 13:01:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alicia Hee  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:Karen@gmail.com">Karen@gmail.com</a></p><p>Subject: Swimming Competition</p><p><br/></p><p>  Dear Karen,</p><p>     Guess what? I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I cant't wait to share with you ameger ~~~ I completed in the 50m dolphin and 100m butterfly. Before diving in the pool. I felt my heart raced like a drumbeat. However, I felt like a superhere is flying in the pool as fast as a cheetah. Lastly, I won the first prize! I was like a joyful kid flying on the air.</p><p><br/></p><p>     Cant't wait to tell you more! </p><p>   Regards,</p><p>   Alicia </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in my very first swimming competition, <strong>and it was such an incredible experience! </strong>I can’t wait to share all the exciting details with you.</p><p>I competed in two events: the 50m dolphin and the 100m butterfly. Before diving into the pool, my heart was racing like a drumbeat, and I felt so nervous. But once I started swimming, I felt like a superhero, <strong>gliding through the water as fast as a cheetah!</strong> <strong>And the best part? I won first prize</strong>! <strong>I was so proud of my achievement. </strong></p><p>I can’t wait to tell you more about it!</p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Alicia</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-01 02:36:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Jane corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen, </p><p>     Guess what? I participated a swimming competition last Saturday. I can't wait to share with you. Before diving in, I felt that I had butterflies in the stomach and my heart raced like a drum beat. But after the race, I felt like a superhero when I won a silver medal. Can't wait to tell you more.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Sze Jane</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in a swimming competition, <strong>and it was such an exciting experience! </strong>I can’t wait to share all the details with you.</p><p>Before diving into the pool, <strong>I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach, </strong>and my heart was racing like a drumbeat. But after the race, I felt like a true superhero—<strong>especially when I won a silver medal</strong>! I’m still over the moon and can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Sze Jane</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-01 10:05:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ng Jiaxin Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>Hi! I hope you are in the pink of health. I recently participated in my first swimming competition on last Saturday and I can’t wait to share my wonderful experience.I completed in the 50m freestyle and 100m backstroke. Before diving in,I have butterflies in the stomach my heart raced like a drumbeat. But after the race,I felt like a superhero.After a while, the results were released. I won first prize and I was on cloud nine! I was proud of myself because all my hard work paid of.</p><p>That’s all for now. I can’t wait to tell you more!</p><p>Best regard,</p><p>Ng Jiaxin</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Hi! I hope you’re in the pink of health. I recently participated in my very first swimming competition<strong> last Saturday</strong>, and <strong>I can’t wait to share my wonderful experience with you!</strong></p><p>I competed in two events: the 50m freestyle and the 100m backstroke. Before diving into the pool, I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach, and my heart was racing like a drumbeat. But after the race, I felt like a true superhero! When the results were released, <strong>I was thrilled to find out that I won first prize—I was on cloud nine! I’m so proud of myself because all my hard work finally paid off.</strong></p><p>That’s all for now. I can’t wait to tell you more!</p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br><strong>Ng Jiaxin</strong></p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-01 10:15:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title> Ooi  Zun  Khai   corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>          Guess what, I participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I can’t wait to share with you in my first swimming competition.Before diving, I felt had butterflies in the stomach. But after race, I felt like a superhero. I won’t the first prize! Won a bronze medal.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Zun Khai</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? Last Saturday, I participated in my very first swimming competition, <strong>and it was such an exciting experience! </strong>I can’t wait to share all the details with you.</p><p>Before diving into the pool, I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach. But after the race, I felt like a true superhero. <strong>You won't believe that I won</strong> <strong>first prize</strong> .  I’m still over the moon and can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Looking forward to catching up soon!</strong></p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Zun Khai</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-02 06:54:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Saw Kah Hou correctd</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>Guess what?I can’t wait to share with you about my first swimming competition. I completed in the 50m freestyle and 100m back stroke. Before diving in, I had butterflies in the stomach, but after race I felt on of the world because I won the first price! I can’t wait to tell you more!</p><p>&nbsp;      Regards,</p><p>    Kah Hou</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I can’t wait to share with you about my first swimming competition and it was such an exciting experience!</p><p>I competed in two events: the 50m freestyle and the 100m backstroke. <strong>Before diving into the pool,</strong> I was so nervous that I had butterflies in my stomach. But after the race , I felt like I was on top of the world because I won <strong>first prize</strong>! I’m still over the moon a<strong>nd it was a great achievement for me.</strong> I  can’t wait to tell you more about it.</p><p><strong>Warm regards,</strong><br><strong>Kah Hou</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To:Karen@gmail.com</p><p>Dear Karen,</p><p>     Guess what ? I pacticipated in my first swimming competition  last week  I <strong>competed </strong>in the 50m backstoke and 100m freestyle . Before diving in , I <s>felt</s> had butterflies in my stomach . But after the competition,<strong>  I was relieved and the best part is  , I even won  the first place </strong>! I cant wait to tell you more . </p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Zen Hao </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>    Dear Karen,</strong></p><p>     </p><p><br/></p><p>         Guess what ? I praticipated in swimming class last Saturday and  I cant '  to share with you about<strong> the amazing experience.  </strong>I competed in the 50 m freestyle and 100 m backstroke. Before, I diving in swimming pool , I <s>felt</s> had butterflies in the stomach. But after race , I felt like a superhero. I won the<s> frist prize won a </s>second place.<strong> I was grinning from ear to ear when I received </strong>a  trophy .  I can't wait to tell you more!</p><p>  </p><p><br/></p><p>     Regards,</p><p>      Jin Xuan</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-05 14:43:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:karen@gmail.com">karen@gmail.com</a> </p><p>Subject: Swimming competition </p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Karen, </p><p><br/></p><p>Guess what?  I am participated in the swimming competition last Saturday. I had competed the 50m freestyle and loom breastroke competed in backstroke. </p><p>        I felt had butterflies in the stomach before diving in the pool. But after race,  I felt like a superhero.  In the end,  I won the first prize. <strong>I was proud of myself as my hard work paid off. </strong></p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Regards, </strong></p><p><strong>Zi Xuan </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Karen,</p><p>I can't wait to share with u about <strong>my amazing experience in taking part in the swimming competition. </strong> I <s>recently </s>participated in my first swimming competition last Saturday. I completed the 50m freestyle and 100m  backstroke. Before diving, I have butterflies in my stomach. My heart <strong>raced</strong> like a drumbeat. But after the race, I felt like a superhero. After an hour, the results was released. I won first place and I was on seventh<strong> heaven!</strong> I was proud of myself because all my hard work <s>of training</s> paid <strong>off.</strong></p><p>Looking forward to catching up soon!</p><p>Warm regards, </p><p>Atlas</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-11 12:37:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2025-03-13 13:52:01 UTC</pubDate>
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