https://padlet.com/27csolomon/sxozx0lhriafrwzk Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 14:41:00 UTC 2026-02-21 18:59:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27csolomon/sxozx0lhriafrwzk/wish/1067019195 I liked your piece it has a lot strength and I can relate to it easily but I just wish it was longer and you added more detail but that´s ok you can always go back ]]> 2021-01-08 14:07:12 UTC https://padlet.com/27csolomon/sxozx0lhriafrwzk/wish/1067019195 27jgonzalez1 https://padlet.com/27csolomon/sxozx0lhriafrwzk/wish/1078582251 I liked you snapshot moment when you Said you felt proud of jumping in the deep end that it was a great achievement even if you where scared you did it anyway.
I also liked when you described when you felt scared and how your inner thought as also described when you where scared to
 My one wish is that it was longer so i know what happened next when you were in the deep end  but your  snapshot piece was amazing cyla.]]> 2021-01-12 14:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27csolomon/sxozx0lhriafrwzk/wish/1078582251