https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs en-us 2023-02-28 15:06:47 UTC 2023-03-04 03:57:59 UTC hello@padlet.com yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498103366 2023-02-28 15:08:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498103366 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498103577 2023-02-28 15:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498103577 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498104431 2023-02-28 15:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498104431 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498307431 From my personal perspective, I don't want my country to accept such a large amount of people. Because this will raise the competition. Furthermore, there will be problems when two countries' culture bump together. For my country, the government also won't let all people live in China. ]]> 2023-02-28 17:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498307431 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498311324 I changed also to furthermore. It's more formal. And the country to my country to be more specific.]]> 2023-02-28 17:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498311324 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498316460 2023-02-28 17:16:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498316460 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498317187 2023-02-28 17:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498317187 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498318542 China has already existed a large population. Besides, there are poor villiages in mountains.]]> 2023-02-28 17:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498318542 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498321645 I changed owned and big to existed and large.]]> 2023-02-28 17:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498321645 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498322467 2023-02-28 17:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498322467 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498324343 This problem has not figured out yet. China doesn't have ability to accept the large wave of people.]]> 2023-02-28 17:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498324343 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498325553 I changed the tense of the sentense from present to present perfect tense.]]> 2023-02-28 17:23:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498325553 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498332603 2023-02-28 17:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498332603 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498333893 I am confident to say that I have experienced two kinds of culture.]]> 2023-02-28 17:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498333893 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498334642  I changed surely to confident.]]> 2023-02-28 17:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498334642 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498335907 2023-02-28 17:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498335907 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498338386 The more individualism culture is in America and the culture with more pressure is in China.]]> 2023-02-28 17:31:52 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498338386 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498339119 I reconsturtion the sentense to be more clear to understand.]]> 2023-02-28 17:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498339119 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498351648 2023-02-28 17:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498351648 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498352793 For America, I came here last year. I thought the pressure would be same compared to China.]]> 2023-02-28 17:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498352793 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498353721  It would be more obvious to use compare.]]> 2023-02-28 17:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498353721 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498363408 However, after the lecture, I can wander in the campus, enjoying the deep breath with the smell of green grass blending the dust. The course time and subject can be chosen by myself. I was able to choose whatever I liked. ]]> 2023-02-28 17:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498363408 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498363978 The grammar mistake]]> 2023-02-28 17:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498363978 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498364490 2023-02-28 17:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498364490 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498365914 2023-02-28 17:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498365914 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498368505 When I was frustated, I went to beach alone to enjoy the sunshine, which made me relax. My compact mid will be released through the time passed.]]> 2023-02-28 17:51:53 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498368505 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498374068 2023-02-28 17:55:30 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498374068 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498375837 Compared Chinese culture to American culture, there were pressure everywhere.]]> 2023-02-28 17:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498375837 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498377080 Compare something to something
Chinese culture and America culture]]> 2023-02-28 17:57:31 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498377080 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498378737 2023-02-28 17:58:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498378737 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498381126 All of my friends were studying during weekends and week days. I had courses every vocation. No matter]]> 2023-02-28 18:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498381126 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498381793 2023-02-28 18:00:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498381793 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498388698 TOELF or SAT, my parents always force me to go to study something. If they saw me that I was playing games or relax at home, they would think that I did not do my homework well and did not complete the tasks that a student should do.]]> 2023-02-28 18:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498388698 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498400017 I further illustrate the sentense focus. It would be more clear to the reader.]]> 2023-02-28 18:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498400017 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498407859 Even if I tried to protest to them, their terrible eye contact horrify me so much which lead that I didn't have the courage to continue talking, and I asked them to ask for a break.]]> 2023-02-28 18:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498407859 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498408368 2023-02-28 18:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498408368 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498409839 I further illustrate my point to enforce the impression on my parents.]]> 2023-02-28 18:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498409839 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498411000 2023-02-28 18:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498411000 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498422348 I was filled with their expectations. Every parent always gives their children too high hopes, and the pressure makes me breathless. Children are always trying to please their parents and expect their compliments. This is the effect of Chinese culture that has been handed down for a long time.  In this case, I can't relax. For myself, I enjoy the individualism in America. I can have plenty of time to do what ever I like.]]> 2023-02-28 18:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498422348 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498424187 I summary the Chinese culture to myself. This will be more obvious to enable the readers to understand my point.]]> 2023-02-28 18:28:25 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498424187 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498431924 2023-02-28 18:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498431924 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498434420 The most impressive thing about culture difference is the attitude toward grade. There is a big difference about grade between China and America. In China, grade isn't only mean the score you have in this course, but also the students themslves. Teachers will assioate a student with good grade to a good personality. Teachers]]> 2023-02-28 18:35:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498434420 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498436778 2023-02-28 18:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498436778 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498443789 will put more focus on them. Even good students do something wrong. Teachers will unintentionally regard that students who have a lower grade did this bad thing. Schools will also take care of good students more in school, such as secretly providing more opportunities and giving more instructions to them.]]> 2023-02-28 18:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498443789 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498444338
Schools
opportunities
providing and giving

]]> 2023-02-28 18:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498444338 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498447838 2023-02-28 18:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498447838 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498466808 Compared China to America, grade isn't everything. It's just the performance in study.  Teachers or schools will equally provide opportunies to everyone. Schools consider a student base on grade an other staffs, such as sports or extracurricular activities. Schools will meansure a student from different sides to determine whether they should give the offer to them or not.]]> 2023-02-28 18:57:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498466808 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498468435 I changed the last sentence, because I think it's vague.]]> 2023-02-28 18:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498468435 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498491842 2023-02-28 19:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498491842 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498495146 When I saw the mountains with green trees, my memory traced back to my hometown. Birds were singing and children were playing under the mountain. I was one of them. When I saw mountains in Santa Barbara, I almost felt a younger me playing hid and seek with friends.]]> 2023-02-28 19:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498495146 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498496020 When I am going to say something about the past, I should use past tense.]]> 2023-02-28 19:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498496020 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498497725 2023-02-28 19:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498497725 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498503440 River is the most important thing to me, because I spent my childhood around the river. When I went to trip to National Park with my friends, we saw a river. Suddenly, I felt homesick, as my valuable memory started to appear in my mind. We swam in the river in summer and fished in fall. The forgetten memory all came back to me. I missed my hometown so much. The river that accompanied my childhood remind me of my younger age. We played]]> 2023-02-28 19:24:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498503440 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498505449 2023-02-28 19:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498505449 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498507222 hide and seek which will always make me feel homesick. I could not bear to livea place without green mountains and rivers.]]> 2023-02-28 19:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498507222 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498509782 2023-02-28 19:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498509782 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498513650 Substantial research has documented the severe consequences of climate change. People will became anxieous and tend to migrate due to the crisis. Global Warming will multply and accelerate the secrutiy threats.  If glaicer melted and sea level rised, some nation would experience 20%  land in flood. Due to this problem, militaray discusses that there will be an unimginable scale on refugees. They speculate there will be]]> 2023-02-28 19:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498513650 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498515197 2023-02-28 19:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498515197 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498519558 potentially above 30 million people lost their homes and migrant to other places. Like some scenes portrayed, a large amount of refugees will migrate together to another nation. The climate change is reported as the biggest problem in 21st century. Action are needed to be took now, military warned to government.]]> 2023-02-28 19:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498519558 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498525058 2023-02-28 19:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498525058 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498525602 Ordinally, leaders do not often put on the lips such those harmful substances in the air that cause global warming and cause air pollution even though some news pointed out the severe consequences caused by these. Why didn't anyone follow them? Nobody thinks about these future consequences. Greta Thunberg mentioned in 'The disarming case to act right now on climate change ' that global warming has caused the melting of glaciers, causing cities to be flooded by seawater, countries to be razed to the ground, and tens of thousands of people to die. But people now live as if there were no such crises. No headlines mention these crises daily, and even if there are, they are just in the corner of the news.]]> 2023-02-28 19:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498525602 yangsiruiyang https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498534757 I rewrote the sentences to be more clarified and specific. Also I use correct way to cite to author name and the article]]> 2023-02-28 19:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2498534757 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503274197 Can you be specific?]]> 2023-03-04 03:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503274197 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503274505 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/33/

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]]> 2023-03-04 03:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503277190 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503277448 wrong word]]> 2023-03-04 03:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503277448 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503277889 https://wp.me/p25bxK-1xj]]> 2023-03-04 03:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503277889 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503278575 Re-read your summary journals based on Robinson, Fleming, and Greenfield.

You will need to use 100-200 words from various parts of those summaries.]]> 2023-03-04 03:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yangsiruiyang/sxj5voc7lrpijezs/wish/2503278575