https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-04 15:54:04 UTC 2021-06-17 14:51:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f34d.png 27dharmer https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1075020148 One thing that I love while reading your piece was how much description you added and how you described everything so detailed. Another thing that I liked was how you described how the beach sounded and how it sounded peaceful once everyone left. One thing that you could have added was how you felt during the moment. Other than that I thought your story was great and I loved reading it!]]> 2021-01-11 16:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1075020148 27ejohnston https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1509828333 Something i liked when i was reading your piece was how much emotion you put into it and how you really described that uniforms are unnecessary. I also liked how you put a lot of effort into your evidence and made sure the reader understood that you really cared. Something i think should’ve been fixed was the amount of pronouns like i and you but other then that i loved reading your piece great job!

]]> 2021-05-10 16:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1509828333 27dharmer https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1612421619 Hey Maddie! I really enjoyed reading your piece and I loved the pretty slides they look so good! One thing I really loved about your story was your log, I loved the idea of the rule being “disguised as a giant hanging unicorn prize on the boardwalk.” I thought that was funny and creative. I also really liked your story about Lily Smith. I loved her turning into a zebra and was a very convincing story to wear sun screen.I don’t have a wish for you! Overall, your piece was so funny and creative and I really liked reading it! Great job!]]> 2021-06-17 14:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/27mhuber/sx8d2dxd6jhj4894/wish/1612421619