https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf EDEL 4160 en-us 2020-09-28 22:20:31 UTC 2025-11-15 00:26:53 UTC hello@padlet.com peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786093866 Our first class meeting, we began to write about anything we wanted to write about. I remember sitting down thinking, "what does that even mean?" I'm not use to writing for fun, so I sat down confused and wrote a little bit. I am so prompt dependent.]]> 2020-09-28 22:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786093866 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786107340 We started writing more and I had to get used to writing 5 times a week for 10 minutes, which is doable. I saw the mini lesson on writing territories and did mine in my writing journal. I was surprised at how many things I wanted to write about.]]> 2020-09-28 22:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786107340 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786114629 The mini lesson about heart mapping I loved. I got to write down what's nearest to me. I did this in my writing journal and for my lesson. This is for my writing journal.]]> 2020-09-28 22:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786114629 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786114879 The story idea I picked was my Europe trip I took in 2017 with my best friends, it was just such a memorable experience. I got the idea for this story because I wanted to rethink this trip and feel happy since I had such a good time. That trip made me feel so carefree and made me enjoy that I did something for myself. Thinking about today makes me feel hopeful for the future when COVID ends to travel once again since this summer I was not able to do anything. As I reread this story I noticed that I was not really focusing on one activity I did and chose to focus when we went to the beach in Barcelona, Spain. A goal I want to set myself as a writer to be more specific and choose an individual activity to incorporate more sensory details. I will stop and think about all the senses and try to incorporate different ways to make my writing more descriptive.]]> 2020-09-28 22:41:42 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786114879 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786125550 This is the heart map for my lesson and video below. I tried color coding to catch student's attention.]]> 2020-09-28 22:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786125550 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786129997 Christine Peralta
Heart Mapping
K-1]]> 2020-09-28 22:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786129997 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786133776 I wrote about my great day at work. During this time I want to focus on the positive when there is so much negativity around us lately. My classmates agreed and made people enjoy my writing, which I never really thought I can do. I never was the one write for fun.]]> 2020-09-28 22:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786133776 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786139247 I had so many thing I wanted to write about and didn't know how to put it in words to make you feel what I felt. As I see my writing, I'm starting to think of more ways to intrigue my readers, I'm wanting to express myself more. I want my writing to speak for itself. I will use this for my future as a teacher, the power of writing.]]> 2020-09-28 23:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786139247 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786139599 I see my writing has grown, the fact that I want to use more words. Most of the time, I need more than the 10 minutes to write. I started to find a love for writing, it makes me unwind. It makes me to think of feelings I haven't thought about it in a while. Professor I am working to find more time to evaluate my writing. I started to use these strategies for my other classes, and I realized its tedious but worthwhile. My writing goal is to reread my writing, evaluate and revise more of my writing. I will achieve this by setting more time aside to be able to revise and edit my work. This week I will set aside 30 minutes after I finish work to revise, read aloud, and edit my work to make it better. Check in with classmates or other sources to get help on my revision. Read aloud my work, so I can hear my writing flow. The grade I deserve in this class I would say is an A because I am trying to better myself and take in critique to make myself better.]]> 2020-09-28 23:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/786139599 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789696460 2020-09-29 21:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789696460 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789696638 2020-09-29 21:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789696638 peraltachristine951_1 https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789698373 2020-09-29 21:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/peraltachristine951_1/sx6pgxgx65w9zrqf/wish/789698373