3E4 Crafting your own thesis statement and topic sentences by Debbie Wong https://padlet.com/debbiejudewong/swmw3nvx5j5elbtc A wall with sections en-us 2024-03-21 04:29:20 UTC 2024-03-23 16:48:24 UTC hello@padlet.com li m qiao ying [16] https://padlet.com/debbiejudewong/swmw3nvx5j5elbtc/wish/2929463993 Thesis statement: 'fellow citizens, refers to us Singaporeans. It is no surprise that it is because of them that our daily lives are filled with happiness and comfort. Out country, remains a home that I can fully admire and love. Not because of its amazing tourists destination or its high-tech infrastructure but because of its citizens. Some traits that made me like them are that they are helpful, kind and honest. Therefore, in this essay, I will elucidate the reasons of why I like the traits of my fellow citizens.


Topic sentence 1: One of the traits I like of my fellow citizens is that they are helpful.


Topic sentence 2: Secondly, another trait that I also like of my fellow citizens is that they are kind.


Topic sentence 3: Lastly, the trait that I like of my fellow citizens is that they are honest.


]]> 2024-03-22 02:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/debbiejudewong/swmw3nvx5j5elbtc/wish/2929463993 Michiko (20) https://padlet.com/debbiejudewong/swmw3nvx5j5elbtc/wish/2931004649 Most Singaporeans believe that if something is none of their business they should not interfere and help and that eventually someone will help them out.This trait of caring for others has been lost in today's society and should be more practiced.Other traits that are slowly being lost include social responsibility and respect


Topic sentence 1

Care is something everyone should show.if everyone just shows care and concerned for one another and help each other when they are in need.It will help foster a community where everyone knows that they can depend on one another


Topic sentence 2

Have you ever seen people dropping a piece of litter on the floor and saying it is ok because eventually a cleaner will pick it up for them or that they don't care about the cleanliness of this public space as it is not their home.This can commonly be seen in Singapore and should be stopped.Everyone should practice social responsibility, if everyone feels the need to take care of public spaces it will help make the public spaces a cleaner and more enjoyable environment to be in


Topic sentence 3:

Although everyone assumes people have basic respect for one another and that Singapore is free of racism as it is a multi racial country.However,racist jokes are still commonly made and should be stopped as it can offend others and cause racial tensions. Respect is important as, if everyone respects each others race and religion there very be minimal to none racial conflicts and it will help foster a peaceful society

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