https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q Leave me feedback! en-us 2022-01-31 17:41:32 UTC 2022-03-10 17:23:18 UTC hello@padlet.com 27sjudd https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2023834735 I really liked the ending of your essay when you said don't jump to conclusions that arcades don't have any benefits. This really ended it good showing that its important to reconsider all the things you said about how even the small benefits of an arcade will help a kid in the future. It summed up your last part nice and gave a clear look at a different perspective.]]> 2022-02-01 17:14:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2023834735 27sjudd https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2023853442 I wish you added more details on the exact benefits of what an arcade has on people. This would give a better understanding of when you bring up that there are positive things and benefits  to arcades to kids. ]]> 2022-02-01 17:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2023853442 27sjudd https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2088805865 My first star: i like how you explained the app and the price for delivery, especially the part about signing up for premium, i think that really gets people interested in your groups project. 
My second star: I enjoyed the part about your target audience and agree with the statement about trying to sell these to beginner cooks.
My wish: I wish you made your presentation with bigger words or make the background colors more interesting and grabbing the viewers attention, i would also have liked for you to put more pictures of your product or even images related to the topic of each slide.]]> 2022-03-10 17:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2088805865 27miannotta https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2088808062 One thing I thought was great about your project was your product in general. The whole idea of Recipe Box was great and I think it could really work as a real company. There are already multiple companies like yours so how will you make it super different? Another thing I liked about your product is how essential this product could be for normal people in their everyday lives. One wish I have for your product is to just make the slideshow more pleasing to the eye and more colorful and creative.]]> 2022-03-10 17:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27ejohnston/swkxx0aw72kren3q/wish/2088808062