https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe Choose one group response to respond to. 1. What is one thing you liked? 2. What is one criticism you have? 3. What is one question you have for the group? en-us 2016-09-01 19:14:55 UTC 2016-09-02 14:48:08 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331075 1. The connection to Parallel Journeys from last year was a very good comparison due to its familiarity with the class
2. Although the connection to Parallel Hourneys was good the group should have focused more on the poem.
3. Is Parallel Journeys the best comparison for the poem or are there other texts that could work as well?]]> 2016-09-02 14:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331075 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331172 2016-09-02 14:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331172 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331182 2016-09-02 14:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331182 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331245 2016-09-02 14:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331245 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331356 2016-09-02 14:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331356 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331384 I like how you said his quote "keep your hand on the plow, hold on." Meant freedom does not come easily that you must keep working.]]> 2016-09-02 14:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331384 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331502 2016-09-02 14:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331502 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331652 I liked your response and how you presented it. I agree with your answer and I think he used those words ]]> 2016-09-02 14:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331652 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331849 I like how their essay talked about how without the people and there working hands, there wouldn't be America. I also agree with the statement that said that the poems theme was about how if everyone worked together, we could achieve freedom and overcome any obstacles.]]> 2016-09-02 14:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331849 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331888 1. Their essay is really well-written and appears to be thought out very well. The excerpts are good at proving their points. 
2. I think they could’ve provided a few more of their ow]]> 2016-09-02 14:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331888 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331909 I like how i could read the whole quote so that i could understand the reasoning better. Also I agree ]]> 2016-09-02 14:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331909 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331959 2016-09-02 14:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331959 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331988 2016-09-02 14:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121331988 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332236 2016-09-02 14:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332236 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332276 I like ho]]> 2016-09-02 14:24:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332276 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332465 i like how they used metaphors and ]]> 2016-09-02 14:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332465 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332535 RrI like ]]> 2016-09-02 14:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332535 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332652 The structure of the response somewhat clouds tha meaning but I agree with group 5's interpretation of the meankng]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332652 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332661 achieveAlso I agree with the message saying that if we all work together then we can conquer obstacles and and  achieve freedom]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332661 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332684 I like how group 4 put in the famous quotes from the famous people ]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:18 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332684 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332733 I like how they talked about freedom being a universal statement and everyone is born with it. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332733 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332848 They used good evidence and good supporting detail. It was very well thought-out. They had strong excerpts. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332848 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332850 The thesis says that to achieve freedom, you need to work together and never give up hooey. However, it was related to parallel journeys and Helen in the concentration camp, where she mostly gave up hope. Also, it is stated that she had to fight other women for food, which contradicts the working together part]]> 2016-09-02 14:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332850 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332970 2016-09-02 14:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121332970 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333019 i liked how they elaborated on their evidence and used metaphors]]> 2016-09-02 14:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333019 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333101 2016-09-02 14:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333101 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333104 Group one ]]> 2016-09-02 14:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333104 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333141 2016-09-02 14:27:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333141 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333176 Group 1 used a lot of details and they supported their evidence very well.]]> 2016-09-02 14:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333176 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333177 2016-09-02 14:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333177 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333259 Group 3 did a good job ]]> 2016-09-02 14:28:31 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333259 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333281 The transitions were really good and they provided lots of evidence to back it up. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333281 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333365 I like hove you've related it to our time. And I liked your choice in Racism]]> 2016-09-02 14:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333365 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333378 They had many examples ]]> 2016-09-02 14:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333378 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333494 Group 3 did a good job addressing Hughes' calls for unity among races in a time where racial unity was rare.]]> 2016-09-02 14:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333494 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333573 2016-09-02 14:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333573 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333574 2016-09-02 14:29:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333574 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333695 2016-09-02 14:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333695 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333790 2016-09-02 14:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333790 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333798 I like how they explain what the quotes mean and what emotions they evoke. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:30:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333798 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333847 i like how you connected the message of the poem to parallel journeys to use better evidence]]> 2016-09-02 14:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333847 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333924 The connection between Parallel Journeys is very good because it connects something we just read with something we are more familiar with. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121333924 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334328 2016-09-02 14:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334328 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334431 I like how they connected the plow to the idea of holding on and keep on working. Eventually freedom will come and it will last]]> 2016-09-02 14:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334431 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334463 2016-09-02 14:32:09 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334463 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334499 2016-09-02 14:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334499 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334618 I like how they connected it to parallel journeys.]]> 2016-09-02 14:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334618 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334669 2016-09-02 14:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334669 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334798 DI like how they connected the question to Parallel Journeys and used details from both texts. ]]> 2016-09-02 14:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121334798 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121335273 Harambe ]]> 2016-09-02 14:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121335273 https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121336526 2016-09-02 14:38:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cmanz/sw8uyxskjphe/wish/121336526