Writing: Some C1 writing samples from the FPT2 by Pro-ELT Sarawak

FPT2 Joey SK Serian B2

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-19 14:33:10 UTC

A very good example of strong vocabulary, cohesion and varied grammar. Take a look and make some notes on the points I have made.

FPT2 Sandy SK Serian B2

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-19 14:33:13 UTC

You can see I have correct quite a few things here but the overall cohesion and feel of the ideas put forward are very strong. Another good example of how to construct the test well.

FPT2 Juana SK Serian B2

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-19 14:39:36 UTC

Again another great example of good content and structure - key point here: if you are writing this well you don't need to write more than the word count. See how we tried to reduce the word count here....

FPT2 Easter SK Tarat B2

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-19 14:45:57 UTC

Great example....done at least twice! Yes it's word count time! Have a look here and you will see that Easter did plenty to get a high level mark but just kept on writing....key point: have confidence in yourself! See how we reduced the count but kept the main points in.

FPT 2 Norazira SK Tarat B1

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-22 07:11:16 UTC

This is a B2 aim but as you can see there are some great points here....very c;lose to a C1...even though aiming at B2!

FPT 2 Helen SK Serian B2

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-22 07:15:11 UTC

Here is a very good example; reallt uses the conditional very well and is very well constructed.

FPT 2 Sulai SK Lebur

proelt_sarawak — 2015-02-23 03:52:36 UTC

Very good attempt with good vocan and varied grammar - mainly the ideas that start at the beginning really flow right to the end.