https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx Student-produced films in the silent film genre en-us 2020-11-05 15:19:47 UTC 2024-04-01 09:22:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f39e.png mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894529619 2020-11-05 15:52:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894529619 11295831 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894534724 I think the music meshed really well with the video. The music was upbeat and mellow which was great regarding the premise of the video was a daily action, making tea.]]> 2020-11-05 15:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894534724 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894536345 The three all worked well together. They all had the same theme of the hot tea burning them. They made it as tea burning them in different ways as well as making the tea in different ways. 
-Amyya Mathews ]]> 2020-11-05 15:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894536345 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894536955 the film was very good and funny. The music synced really well with what was happening on the screen. The exaggeration of their actions was very good as well

]]> 2020-11-05 15:53:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894536955 1101878 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894538949 The music fit really well with the video and was nice and fun/silly. The instruments used in the song in the video made the song sound fun and uplifting, which added to the overall light hearted tone of the film. ]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894538949 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894539020 I love the acting, everyone did a great job exaggerating the actions of everyday activities, which makes it look like an authentic silent film :)]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894539020 1094319 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894539701 What worked- The expressions on julia's face added a level of playful frustration. The overall film was very good



]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894539701 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894540841 I liked the fast speed of the film. It worked well to have the watcher keep close attention.]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894540841 1089895 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894541215 The facial expressions conveyed what was going on and added overdramatic comedy]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894541215 erestelli https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894541636 Great music! Physical exaggeration is spot on. Facial expressions, squeezing the honey...]]> 2020-11-05 15:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894541636 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894542721 I think that the way the music matched all the scenes and what was happening was cool and worked very well

]]> 2020-11-05 15:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894542721 1132263 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894543490 For the person actually making the tea, seeing the steam is pretty effective cause it shows you're actually doing it instead of pretending to do it which immersed me into it more]]> 2020-11-05 15:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894543490 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894548477 I think the acting in the silent film was really effective in showing how their tea was and how they were doing. The gags were done really well and added to the overall humor of the film.]]> 2020-11-05 15:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894548477 1119619 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894552016 I liked the MUSIC.... Julia picked the music for the film :)]]> 2020-11-05 15:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894552016 1103211 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894553529 2020-11-05 15:57:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894553529 1103286 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894554182 2020-11-05 15:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894554182 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894557034 The transitions and the way they focus on the main character ]]> 2020-11-05 15:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894557034 1107265 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894567339 Things That Works- Shailah Anderson
- Transitions (It was very obvious when the film would switch to another person and it gave the person's name so you could tell who everyone was)
-Music ( The music blend very well with what was happening in the film)
- The exaggeration ( The pouring of honey, burning hand or mouth, and facial expressions)
- The film blended together well even though everyone did something different 

]]> 2020-11-05 16:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894567339 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894589437 The way the music fits in with the scenes and matches the facial expressions is amazing. I really like the transitions as well.]]> 2020-11-05 16:04:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894589437 1101878 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894657468 In this film, there was a laugh track sound effect added which made it reminiscent of older films similar to this (silent films). The effect helps to contribute to the laughter of the live audience and to set the tone of the film.]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894657468 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894658631 I really liked the laugh track it was super funny to see a modern sitcom element in an old style silent film. also the screen flipping upside down was funny. The change in the music is abrupt but still manages to work with whats going on in the film as he gets an idea.]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894658631 1089895 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894658844 The change in music depicted the change in mood from sleepy to chaotically trying to open the door]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894658844 1119619 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894659114 I really liked the music! it matched the context of the silent film very well. It gave a playful tone to it.]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894659114 11295831 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894659152 The old tv around the video is a great touch to the video because it makes it seem like we are watching the silent film like people did back in the day. ]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894659152 1103211 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894660522 2020-11-05 16:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894660522 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894661491 I like the expressions he had. My favorite was in the beginning when it zoomed in on his shocked face. ]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894661491 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894662176 I truly loved the upside down clip. I
 would not change that at all. it gives me an actual authentic feel with the tv outline  because TVs back in the old days would sometimes have upside down parts of the film/show. the expression and the joyous leaping into bed gave a sense of completion.

]]> 2020-11-05 16:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894662176 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894667088 2020-11-05 16:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894667088 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894667466 I like the exposition telling you the exact situation ]]> 2020-11-05 16:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894667466 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894668567 The way the laugh track lined up with the comedic effect was really effective and made me laugh. I also appreciate the way the music ended on the bed flop. That was funny]]> 2020-11-05 16:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894668567 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894670757 I like how it was a simple idea that turned into a more in depth solution.]]> 2020-11-05 16:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894670757 1103286 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894673818 The music went very well with the film, especially when he realized he couldn't get in because then the music showed the moment where everything went downhill.]]> 2020-11-05 16:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894673818 CherryBeck https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894682852 This film chose a very common situation (being locked out of somewhere) and turned it into a funny and entertaining sort film. I feel like this was a common thing among the best short films, so I think choosing a common problem was a good choice.]]> 2020-11-05 16:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894682852 erestelli https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894721390 You've got a good balance between conveying appropriate info without overloading a viewer. ]]> 2020-11-05 16:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/894721390 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904696279 2020-11-09 15:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904696279 1094319 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904716850 The music in this film was really good. I liked how the music was suspenseful which matched the the scared of ghost theme. 

]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904716850 1089895 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904717069 The fast-paced, choppy movement made the film seem more authentic, and it added an element of comedy. For example, the ghost chasing Will around the table was really funny.]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904717069 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904717792 this was silly funny ]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904717792 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904718042 It looked like you all had a lot of fun while making the film! All of the things you did were very involved when it came to movement and interactions. I don't think we've had a film where there has been more then one subject per scene (for COVID reasons), so that was nice to see! (Even if the subject was a dog!)]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904718042 1101878 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904718771 The camera work in this film was amazing. The way it followed the actors and the angels really contributed to the overall film.]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904718771 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904719178 I loved way you took the extra step in positioning your camera. you made the scene of the ghost walking even more scarier as the camera turn. 

]]> 2020-11-09 15:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904719178 1119619 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904722056 I really enjoyed the sounds from this silent film. Although it was a horror silent film, it was still comedic because of the irony of the sounds and movements.]]> 2020-11-09 15:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904722056 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904722446 I like the gag in the middle (the dog) that was cute and amusing ]]> 2020-11-09 15:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904722446 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904728563 The chase scene/gag was pretty funny because it reminds me of one of those classic gags. Also the ghost dog was a cute addition and twist ]]> 2020-11-09 15:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904728563 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904729942 I think William did a great job during the chase scene with the ghost, the acting was well done and it felt like I was watching a mint silent film produced by professional silent film actors! The music keyed in really well with the tone of the film and really added to the overall idea.]]> 2020-11-09 15:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904729942 1103286 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904731207 The panning of the third ghost combined with the music made the film suspenseful, but comedic.]]> 2020-11-09 15:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904731207 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904731414 2020-11-09 15:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904731414 erestelli https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904736994 Music is fantastic. Love the physical exaggeration and ghost costumes. There were inconsistency's how the text placards were presented. Most were on traditional black screens though several were overplayed over the live clips. I think all should follow the traditional style.]]> 2020-11-09 15:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904736994 1107265 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904744233
The things that worked -Shailah Anderson
Music- the music correlated well with the over plot and the music was fast pace as well as the video itself
The ghost dog- Went well as a gag ]]> 2020-11-09 15:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904744233 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904774023 The best silent film by far

]]> 2020-11-09 16:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904774023 1089895 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904789673 The exaggerated actions, such as putting hand sanitizer on your whole body or leaving the house with a ton of objects, made the film really funny. This was visual humor, which was perfect for the silent film.]]> 2020-11-09 16:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904789673 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904791881 2020-11-09 16:08:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904791881 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904793754 The repetition in Taylors part was really funny. And I think she did a good job of overdoing things without making it feel annoying and repetitive.]]> 2020-11-09 16:08:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904793754 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904797921 The "overdoing" or "overpreparing" (with sanitizer, etc) gag was funny as it's somewhat unique during this COIVD situation]]> 2020-11-09 16:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904797921 1119619 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904803110 I really liked the close up shots in the film, it added to the humor. Like when taylor was trying to get her keys but her pet (was it an appa?) held on to it. The exaggerations of her facial expressions were gold.]]> 2020-11-09 16:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904803110 1094319 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904813742 I really enjoyed the part where Dareyon was putting on multiple masks at once this exaggerated motion added humor to the film. ]]> 2020-11-09 16:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904813742 1107265 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904821187 Shailah Anderson
The exaggeration- The over application of hand sanitizer over the body, the multiple mask, waking up with a mask, spraying of disinfectant, forgetting things before leaving out the house and the slow build up.]]> 2020-11-09 16:13:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904821187 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904836225 the film was very funny, especially the part with all the masks]]> 2020-11-09 16:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/904836225 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325848727 2022-10-04 14:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325848727 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325851063 2022-10-04 14:42:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325851063 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325854975 2022-10-04 14:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2325854975 11512621 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327546704 The acting was good as it reflected the story. The music was the same the whole time which made some things anti climactic.]]> 2022-10-05 13:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327546704 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327547144 Hudson- They followed the script, and I really liked the falling gag and how they brought it back and built it up. I wish the chase seen was longer, so the group could have done more gags.]]> 2022-10-05 13:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327547144 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327547317 It fits the time, music, and gag requirements. I think my favorite gag was when the girl spun before she fell since it was so dramatic. I love the use of the stairs and the long hallways. Something I think they couldve done was put more use to the two characters not in the chase, maybe making them more important somehow.]]> 2022-10-05 13:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327547317 1160400 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327548399 The music worked well for the storyline it wasn't to fast paced or slow. The use of the wind when the character took off his jacket was a nice addition. 

The story/plot didn't seem cohesive. The two fenake characters started the film but weren't seen again, they felt out of place. The chase seen also seemed out of place, it was a little unclear why he was being chased.

From: R'Reeyah ]]> 2022-10-05 13:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327548399 1131187 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327548445 I think the music worked well. It matched the classy (suit and tie, the cinema) but humorous mood of the film. I also liked the visual gag when Ivan's character kept slipping - it was very well-acted and convincing.

However, I don't think the narrative was quite defined enough. We were introduced to two characters in the beginning, who were getting ready for the show, but we never see them again and we don't know what the show is. They did well with following the instructions and making it interesting, but I think it could have been a bit more clear.]]> 2022-10-05 13:09:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327548445 11512621 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327550952 The acting was good as the actors portrayed good, exaggerated emotion and it was overall funny from good gag scenes. Something that could've been improved was the camera angles: Will's head was cut off at some points.]]> 2022-10-05 13:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327550952 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327552111 The song was amazing, and I love the use of the costumes as well as the fan for the hair. Something that could have been changed was making the story a little more clear through text slides or more physical context.]]> 2022-10-05 13:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327552111 1133574 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327553101 This film was incredible because of the acting, angles. and plot. The only thing is that Will's head was cut off in the beginning.]]> 2022-10-05 13:12:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327553101 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555290 The gag wasn't very funny. it would have been better if Ivan wasn't in it. Ivan hair looked funny because it imitated common love scenes. the music was really good and heled move the story along.]]> 2022-10-05 13:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555290 1131187 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555489 I liked this one a lot. The visual gags (Kiet's character rolling up and over the couch out of fear, the slipping and falling) were very well executed. The acting was quite convincing and very melodramatic - lots of exaggerated gestures that conveyed the story and feelings of the characters well. I also liked the camera angle where we see Will's character's POV as he's stuck inside the mask.

At the beginning, I think a wider angle might have been better, so that we could see both Kiet sleeping and also not cut Will's head out of the shot.]]> 2022-10-05 13:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555489 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555841 What worked for me the most was the dramatic falling especially falling off the couch. I feel as if it really dramaticized the scene and made it humorous. It followed the rubric and added to the creativity of the scene. One revision would be the angles and making sure necessary parts (like a head) are all the way in the frame so everyone is seen when needed.]]> 2022-10-05 13:14:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327555841 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327557399 Hudson- They followed the script, and the acting really said what was going on. The prop used tied the film together with its absurdity. I think some of the title slides were unnecessary and the messages were already conveyed by the acting. It also looks like a scene between the fall and the removal of the mask is missing and it makes the film a little confusing.]]> 2022-10-05 13:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327557399 1145864 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327558150 I liked to plot line and the idea of being trapped, i think there could have been more exxagerating movements and it seemed to drag on in some ways.]]> 2022-10-05 13:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327558150 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327559248 The plot was overall very funny. The chase scene looked really good. The gag was really good. The music matched the tone very well.]]> 2022-10-05 13:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327559248 1160400 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327559785 The plot itself was very funny. I like the use of the bunny mask. The sight gags were well placed, such as the character flipping over the coach and falling while running away. Everything seemed cohesive. 

The acting was good as well, trying to get the bunny hat off, we saw the struggle. The movements could have been a little more dramatic.]]> 2022-10-05 13:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327559785 1354469 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327560024 The music fit the film very well.  Especially during the chase scene, it made it more dramatic.  The use of text slides added a good amount of context-there was enough to get the story across, but not an excessive amount.  The movement of each character was exaggerated well, which improved the story. Some of the angles could have been changed so that you could fully see the bunny.]]> 2022-10-05 13:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327560024 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327560797 I loved this film. From the chase scene, to hiding in plain sight, to the dramatic falling, everything in this scene worked and fit right with what the assignment was asking. The gags striked/will strike laughter in the viewer. Its corny but it works. A good corny.]]> 2022-10-05 13:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327560797 13069231 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327561883 The film succeeds at it's goal, it was very dramatic and ridiculous, it was humorous, involved no talking, had a chase scene, and repetition which adds to the humor. The sight gag was the constant falling in the same spot. The narcissism shown by the main character as the wind blew as he took off his suit jacket added to the film and made it very funny. I think the character (Joshua) who chased him should have been in the audience to make it clear he was being boo'ed off "stage".]]> 2022-10-05 13:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327561883 11127291 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327562707 I liked the gag scene with the bunny and the person, it was extremely funny and dramatic. I wish the camera would stay still, and not move every so often. ]]> 2022-10-05 13:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327562707 1133574 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327563889 This was the best film I've seen overall. The site gags, costumes, chases, and acting were phenomenal. I do not have any negative feedback for this group.]]> 2022-10-05 13:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327563889 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327564512 The film had some really great exaggeration from the two main characters' movements to the slapstick like the victim crashing into the wall and the bystander spinning and falling to the floor. The music fit really well too, with its sneaky tone reflecting the robber and its fast paced tempo reflecting the urgency of the victim trying to get his stuff back. I also think the sight gag with the victim looking for the robber was great and the text boxes were just enough to convey the dialogue but not too much to take away from the exaggeration. The two other characters could've had a bit more to do as they didn't have much of a role outside of the funny ending, but that was all I'd change. This was great stuff!]]> 2022-10-05 13:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327564512 1131187 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327564546 The costumes were really good in this. I also liked some of the visual flair - Noah's character sliding down the railing, hiding in plain sight, Simona and Esmerelda's dramatic movements as they were pushed around during the chase scene. The ending was also funny and very cartoonish.

I think the title slides could have been integrated a little more smoothly. At some points, they cut out the action or popped up right in the middle of a dramatic gesture.]]> 2022-10-05 13:19:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327564546 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327566102 The costumes really elevated the silent film. It gave an old-timey vibe. The exaggerating and slight gags really elevated the film. I have no negative feedback for this group.]]> 2022-10-05 13:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327566102 1354469 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327566887 All of the movements were very dramatic, which made the story clear.  The gags especially, were very dramatic, which made them more obvious.  The music was very fitting, especially in the beginning when you see the robber approaching.  It shows that the robber is sneaking up to the guard to steal from him.  The costumes made it clear who each character was and their purpose.]]> 2022-10-05 13:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327566887 1145864 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569178 I like the costumes and the effort put in, i think its well edited and well put together. The angles were well thought out but I thin they could have focussed more in one area to make the plot line a bit more clear.]]> 2022-10-05 13:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569178 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569582 I think that this film succeeds in portraying the arrogance of the showman through his facial expressions and the slowmo shot. Enough sight gags were shown throughout with the showman slipping and the audience throwing cups at him. Text slides were only used to transition between scenes, which was an interesting approach; the story was easy enough to understand, so dialogue with text slides wasn't necessary. I like that the music fit well with the vibe of the film. The first scene didn't feel necessary for the story. I think that seeing the showman get ready would have fit more.]]> 2022-10-05 13:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569582 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569591 Hudson- They Followed the script, the upbeat music fit the comicalness of the map. All of the gags were great, and I especially liked how the girl that got knocked over got her revenge . The only issue that I saw was the text slides, since they were a little bit too long and broke up the flow.]]> 2022-10-05 13:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327569591 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327570484 The sound and story was great, the robber’s simple eye mask and striped shirt made the film look a lot more believing vs if he was just in his school uniform. They included lots of different gags(the chase, the robber getting hit, hiding in obvious places, etc). The thing I liked the most was probably how smooth the transition was between the text slides and the next shot. They could have made it a bit longer.]]> 2022-10-05 13:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327570484 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327571456 I think the costumes in the movie were great. there were some great shots as well. One thing that may need work is the overall narrative. It was hard to follow what the performance was supposed to be, meaning I couldn't tell why it failed so badly. ]]> 2022-10-05 13:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327571456 13069231 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327573441 The film was successful, it was very funny, included a chase scene, had a sight gag (dramatic falling on the ground and off the couch), and was dramatic enough that the gestures spoke for the film itself. The film was in black and white and had no talking which is essential. The miscommunication which led to fear and the chase scene was very funny. The ending where one of the main characters takes the Easter bunny head piece off of the other character led to so much relief in his face. One character's head was cut out of frame which could improve the film.]]> 2022-10-05 13:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327573441 1160400 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327578014 The film was pretty good, the acting was really good, the dramatic movements of the robber sneaking up to the man to steal was nice and the oat on the head was funny. There were several sight gags that were nicely incorporated such as running around the girl and hiding behind the corner. I like how the one of the word slides came from the perspective of the girl.]]> 2022-10-05 13:27:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327578014 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327579064 The camera angles were on point, the sound fits nicely into the film with the funny aspect. The best part to me was probably the POV shots. They could have used a bit more time, because it felt like not a lot really happened story wise.]]> 2022-10-05 13:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327579064 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327580850 I like the effort everyone brought to the film, it really makes it funny and worth watching. I like the gag scenes, there were a lot that got me laughing, I love the use of irony as well. Costume were a big thing that helped identify the characters and make the film make sense. I like the use of the sped up to make the characters almost animated and made the scenes more hilarious.]]> 2022-10-05 13:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327580850 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327585937 The sound use was great, and I liked how they had the text just over the film instead of cutting it to a slide. The fall gag they used was a bit repetitive I feel, and the two characters they showed at the beginning kind of had no purpose.]]> 2022-10-05 13:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327585937 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327592889 I really like the plot of the, with the gradual build up to the chase being a funny misunderstanding that the guy with the bunny mask was trying to attack the other guy. I think the music could've been a bit more fast paced to further convey the fear the other guy had but it was still good. The exaggeration was also really great with the beginning where the mask gets stuck on the guy's head, the chase and the funny. The first angle also should've been a bit higher to show the person who put the mask on the guy's head. There could've some more great exaggeration from that, but great stuff nonetheless!]]> 2022-10-05 13:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327592889 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327921356 I like the use of costumes I feel like it added value to the scene because it reminds me of films back then when characters would wear suits for comedy.  The exaggerated scene of him taking off the suit jacket was great input. I also liked the girls getting ready in the bathroom to get ready for the show. Could've added scenes of the girls in the show]]> 2022-10-05 16:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327921356 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327931794 I like the use of exaggeration with trying to get the bunny hat off, they really made it look like it was stuck. I feel like there could've been more of a gag scene and more of the chase to show that the human actor was really scared of the bunny man]]> 2022-10-05 16:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2327931794 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328393648 I found the film funny. The us of the bunny head as costume was great because it is genuinely creepy. The movements were dramatic which added to the scene. My favorite part was when Kiet fell over the couch. ]]> 2022-10-05 23:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328393648 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328406461 The costumes in this film were great. I loved the bank robber costume. This had some phenomenal movements. I found the part where the robber tapped the officer funny. The tone of the film was really goofy, I think that people in this time would find it funny.]]> 2022-10-05 23:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328406461 1194889 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328429119 I really liked the costumes used. The act where the dude was drunk really felt like a Chaplin-like silent film. The sounds used were also really fitting for the film. The falling gag could have been used a little less. The overall story was a bit weird and hard to follow.]]> 2022-10-06 00:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328429119 1194889 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328435255 A very good film. The acting was very well done, and the gags were funny. I like how Kiet fell over the chair that was good acting. The camera shots could have been a little bit better. Since Will is a very tall man his head was being cut off by the camera. The chase scene could have been a little bit longer. Overall, a good film.]]> 2022-10-06 00:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328435255 13069231 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328443668 The film was successful it included all aspects needed such as a sight gag (hiding in plain sight), dramatic falling, a clearly understood plot, no speaking, a chase scene, and was in black and white. The chase scene incorporated more characters one of which fell down after spinning a few times because she was knocking into during the chase and in return she punched the robber. The robber hid in plain sight which added to the humor of the film. The character who stood in the middle with a shocked expression could have been a tad bit more dramatic.]]> 2022-10-06 00:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328443668 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328548739 I really like this film and the costumes. The falling scene was good and the acting was good too. I just wish you added more text screens to kind of explain whats going on in the film since the script kind of got confusing at the end. I feel like there should have been a better and more clear reasoning for the chase. Overall though it was really good. ]]> 2022-10-06 01:54:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328548739 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328552725 This film as really good! It used just enough text screens and the plot was easy to follow. One thing I would change is adding more obstacles to the chase scene. Also, it would be cool too if after you knocked over Esme she could have joined in the chase to make it more entertaining. ]]> 2022-10-06 01:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2328552725 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331498969 I think the wind blowing added comedy but I think they should've made it more clear that he was getting drunk and not just spilling and refilling water.]]> 2022-10-07 20:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331498969 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331500095 I like how the pov of his hands was added it gives a sense of confusion for a second like, what's wrong why can't I pull this off?]]> 2022-10-07 20:41:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331500095 11155751 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331502126 I like how the pov of his hands was added it gives a sense of confusion for a second like, what's wrong why can't I pull this off?]]> 2022-10-07 20:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331502126 11155751 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331505897 I think the wind blowing added comedy but I think they should've made it more clear that he was getting drunk and not spilling and refilling water.]]> 2022-10-07 20:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331505897 11155751 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331523005 I like how the robbery was in a stripped shirt, it made his character clear but I think they were abusive with the title slides when it was clear what was happening.]]> 2022-10-07 20:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331523005 11155751 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331527148 I like the music it adds tension to the video but I think they should've backed the camera up a little like the first scene when she was on the ground picking up the tea box.]]> 2022-10-07 20:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2331527148 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2340593388 2022-10-14 14:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2340593388 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2340595309 2022-10-14 14:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2340595309 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2347063010 This scene succeeds in using text slides and slapstick to create a good silent film. The text slides make the story more understandable and adds to the humor of the film. The slapstick with one of the actors falling over the chair and the bunny man falling over the paper cup were really funny. They also include a shot of the bunny man looking at himself and how he realized what had happened. However, one of the angles had been too low on the bunny man; also, the fall was hard for me to understand with the cut from the text slide. ]]> 2022-10-19 13:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2347063010 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2347314352 I like the effort in acting and the costumes that helped differentiate the characters. However the costume also made me confused on who was who and the story was a bit hard to follow towards the part where Ivan was falling and tripping, I wasn’t sure what his role in that really was.]]> 2022-10-19 15:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2347314352 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2734166192 2023-10-05 15:33:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2734166192 mroneill2 https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2734168566 2023-10-05 15:35:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mroneill2/su6he3lg8b2o93tx/wish/2734168566