Taller de Escritura en Inglés. Saturday by Jenifer Cano Serrano https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47 Building Understandings: Cohesion and Coherence en-us 2021-10-09 14:47:06 UTC 2024-09-13 20:04:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270f.png What do you understand by Cohesion in academic writing? jenifercanose https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804175836 Listen and analyze the attached video. Provide some examples. ]]> 2021-10-09 14:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804175836 What do you understand by Coherence in academic writing? jenifercanose https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804176895 Listen and analyze the attached video. Provide some examples.]]> 2021-10-09 14:53:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804176895 Listen and analyze the following video about Coherence and Cohesion. jenifercanose https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804178963 If necessary, use any other kind of resource to approach these two concepts. ]]> 2021-10-09 14:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1804178963 Coherence valentinasernada https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1815498161 Ideas that are arranged clearly and understandably are coherent. When a text is unified and clear, the reader can easily understand the main point.

Example:
The Austrian composer Mozart was a musical genius. He has got a swimming pool. It actually tingles on your skin to tell you it’s working. Water would then come out of fountains such as the one shown here. And that is why dogs still chase rabbits. It is an incoherent text because we can see different topics.

Valentina S

]]> 2021-10-14 00:52:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1815498161 Cohesion valentinasernada https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1815575085 Refers to connections between sentences; each sentence is related to the next one and, separate sentences work together to make a unified whole.

Example: 
  • Isabel broke up with her boyfriend. Camilo was unfaithful. Isabel found him with another woman. Camilo cried and told her to forgive the situation. But isabel didn't forgive him and start from scratch. We can't see cohesion here, for we have lack connectivity
  • The hotel is famous. It is one of the most wellknown hotels in the country. The latest international dancing competition was held at the hotel. The hotel spent a lot of money to advertise the event. Because the hotel wanted to gain international reputation. But not many people attended the event. Poor connectivity

Valentina S
]]> 2021-10-14 01:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1815575085 Cohesion https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818484256 Cohesion refers to the way we use vocabulary and grammatical structures to make connections between the ideas within a text.

Cohesion  can be thought of as the way the words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas stick together.

-Eder


]]> 2021-10-15 01:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818484256 Coherence https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818528710 Coherence in writing means that all the ideas ina
paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the
next sentence. With coherence, the reader as an easy time
understanding the ideas that you wish to express.

A text is coherence whe it makes sense. 
 - We can understand what the text is about.
- We can translate it. 
- We can paraphrase it. 
- We can summarize it.
- We can explain the meaning to someone else.

-Eder

]]> 2021-10-15 01:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818528710 Coherence juliethantoniodi https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818535860 I understood that coherence refers to the unity of a text as such. How the ideas are connected to each other to give it a logical order and that makes true sense (Julieth C)]]> 2021-10-15 01:37:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818535860 Cohesion juliethantoniodi https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818539854 refers to the way we use vocabulary and grammatical structures to make connections between the ideas within a text. It provides flow and sequence to your work and helps make your paragraphs clear for the reader.

Cohesive devices are words and expressions that show relationships between parts of text and ideas, such as cause and effect, time, addition, or comparison and contrast. (Julieth C)]]> 2021-10-15 01:38:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818539854 Coherence describes the way anything, such as an argument, or a part of an argument “hangs together.” If something has coherence, its parts are well connected and all heading in the same direction. Without coherence, a discussion may not make sense or may be difficult for the audience to follow. It’s an extremely important quality of formal writing. (Santiago Bedoya) https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818555505 2021-10-15 01:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818555505 Cohesion concerns the flow of sentences and paragraphs from one to another. It involves the tying together of old information and new. When we write academic essays, particularly in the humanities, we work hard to foster cohesion structurally, which enhances a reader's understanding of our ideas. (Santiago Bedoya) https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818557756 2021-10-15 01:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1818557756 Coherence juanmediname https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819932056 In a composition, coherence is a literary technique that refers to logical connections, which listeners or readers perceive in an oral or written text. In other words, it is a written or spoken piece that is not only consistent and logical, but also unified and meaningful. It makes sense when read or listened to as a whole.
(Sebastian M.)]]> 2021-10-15 15:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819932056 Cohesion juanmediname https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819946760 Cohesion is the connection of the syntactic and semantic markers in surface structure of linguistic form, or is the relationship between one component and another that can be explained within discourse.

For example:
The latest international dancing competition was held at the hotel, which is one of the most wellknown hotels in this region. The hotel spent a lot of money on advertising the event since it wanted to enhance its international reputation; however, it failed to attract many people. (The connection of ideas is good.) 
(Sebastian M.)]]> 2021-10-15 15:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819946760 Cohesion julianasanchezom https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819961003 It's a term in linguistics that refers to how the structure and content of a sentence or text is linked together to create meaning. Cohesion means that writing is well structured with linked ideas that follow a logical pattern. Sentences and paragraphs flow smoothly and are written in the same tense, meaning the piece of writing as a whole is fluid and makes sense.
(Juliana S.)

]]> 2021-10-15 15:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819961003 Coherence julianasanchezom https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819961192
Coherence is one of the two qualities that give a written or spoken text unity and purpose. The other is cohesion. Coherence refers to the general sense that a text makes sense through the organisation of its content. In writing, it is provided by a clear and understood structuring of paragraphs and sentences in writing.

E.g
A learner's argument essay is coherent because it has a structure that gives unity and follows an accepted form. It begins with a statement of belief, gives the opposing arguments, refutes these, and summarises in a final paragraph.

(Juliana S.)







 

]]> 2021-10-15 15:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1819961192 Coherence https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820596809 Coherence, what  I can say it is the logical bridge between words, sentences, or paragraphs. Coherent connect ideas within each sentence, that makes a paragraph. So, it means that the Main ideas and meaning can be difficult for the reader to follow if the writing lacks coherence.

Daniel. G ]]> 2021-10-16 01:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820596809 Cohesion https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820603980 When we talk about cohesion, the sentences must fit logically in the writing, thus connecting one idea with the next, it means tying our words to create a text where the relationships between these elements are clear and logical for the reader, allowing a fluidity in the text.

Daniel. G]]> 2021-10-16 01:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820603980 COHERENCE sebastiansernamo https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820656804 𝗖𝗼𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 𝗶𝘀 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲𝘀 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝗮 𝗽𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗴𝗿𝗮𝗽𝗵 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝗻𝗲𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝗻 𝗮 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗼𝗻𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲, 𝗹𝗼𝗴𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗹, 𝗰𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗮𝗯𝗹𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝗻𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗼 𝗴𝗶𝘃𝗲 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘀𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗮𝗻 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮.

We can give coherence with...

-𝒪𝓇𝑔𝒶𝓃𝒾𝓏𝑒𝒹 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓁𝑜𝑔𝒾𝒸𝒶𝓁 𝒾𝒹𝑒𝒶𝓈.
-𝐼𝒹𝑒𝒶𝓈 𝒶𝓇𝑒 𝒸𝓁𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓁𝓎 𝓊𝓃𝒹𝑒𝓇𝓈𝓉𝑜𝑜𝒹 𝒷𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹𝑒𝓇.
-𝒰𝓈𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝓈𝒾𝓂𝒾𝓁𝒶𝓇 𝑔𝓇𝒶𝓂𝓂𝒶𝓉𝒾𝒸𝒶𝓁 𝓈𝓉𝓇𝓊𝒸𝓉𝓊𝓇𝑒𝓈. 𝐸.𝑔. 𝒯𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝒶𝓂𝑒 𝓉𝑒𝓃𝓈𝑒 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓋𝑒𝓇𝒷𝓈 𝓊𝓈𝑒𝒹.
-𝑅𝑒𝓅𝑒𝓉𝒾𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃 𝑜𝒻 𝒦𝑒𝓎 𝒲𝑜𝓇𝒹𝓈 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒫𝒽𝓇𝒶𝓈𝑒𝓈 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽𝑜𝓊𝓉 𝓇𝑒𝒹𝓊𝓃𝒹𝒶𝓃𝒸𝓎.
-𝒰𝓈𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝒸𝑜𝒽𝑒𝓇𝑒𝓃𝒸𝑒 𝒹𝑒𝓋𝒾𝒸𝑒𝓈.

The example was taken from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ne7uJy_CAY (Sebastián Serna M.)



]]> 2021-10-16 02:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820656804 What do you understand by Cohesion in academic writing? juangranadahi https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820660004 Cohesion is an important feature of academic writing, it refers to the way how I can use the correct grammar to connect words, sentences within a  paragraph or text.

Good cohesion needs the following five methods: 
- Reference words: refer to something else in the text. (this - these - that - those - it - they - them - she - he - which)

- Repeated words/ideas

- Transition signals: words/phrases which signal a relationship between ideas. (cause transitions - effect transitions - comparison transitions - contrast transitions) 

- Substitution: replaces words with another word.

- Ellipsis: leaving out words because the meaning is clear. 


Juan Granada

]]> 2021-10-16 02:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820660004 COHESION sebastiansernamo https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820661331 𝗖𝗼𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗶𝘀 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲𝘀 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗿𝗲𝗰𝘁𝗹𝘆 𝗷𝗼𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝗻 𝗮𝗻 𝗲𝗳𝗳𝗲𝗰𝘁𝗶𝘃𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝗻𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝘁 𝗮 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 𝗹𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗹 𝘁𝗼 𝗴𝗶𝘃𝗲 𝗮 𝘀𝗲𝗻𝘀𝗲 𝗮𝘀 𝗮 𝘄𝗵𝗼𝗹𝗲 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁. 𝗧𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗵𝗲𝗹𝗽: 𝗙𝗶𝗿𝘀𝘁, 𝗶𝗻 𝗼𝗿𝗱𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗼 𝗳𝗮𝗰𝗶𝗹𝗶𝘁𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗶𝗳𝗶𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗼𝗳 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝗶𝗻 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮𝘀, 𝘀𝗲𝗰𝗼𝗻𝗱, 𝗶𝘁 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗮𝘃𝗼𝗶𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘂𝘀𝗲 𝗼𝗳 𝗿𝗲𝗽𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱𝘀/𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮𝘀 𝘀𝗼 𝗶𝘁 𝗰𝗮𝗻 𝗯𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝗰𝗶𝘀𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝗮𝘀𝘆 𝘁𝗼 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆, 𝗶𝘁 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗽𝗿𝗼𝘃𝗶𝗱𝗲 𝗮 𝘀𝗺𝗼𝗼𝘁𝗵 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗻𝘀𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗯𝗲𝘁𝘄𝗲𝗲𝗻 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮𝘀.


We can give cohesion with...

-𝓡𝓮𝓯𝓮𝓻𝓮𝓷𝓬𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓭𝓼 𝓲𝓷 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓽𝓮𝔁𝓽 𝔀𝓲𝓽𝓱 𝓬𝓸𝓱𝓮𝓼𝓲𝓿𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓿𝓲𝓬𝓮𝓼 𝓽𝓸 𝓪𝓿𝓸𝓲𝓭 𝓻𝓮𝓹𝓮𝓪𝓽𝓮𝓭 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓭𝓼 𝓫𝔂 𝓾𝓼𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝓻𝓮𝓯𝓮𝓻𝓮𝓷𝓬𝓮 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓭𝓼. 𝓔.𝓰. 𝓘𝓽, 𝔀𝓱𝓲𝓬𝓱, 𝓼𝓱𝓮, 𝓱𝓮, 𝓽𝓱𝓮𝓶.
-𝓛𝓲𝓷𝓴𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝓲𝓭𝓮𝓪𝓼 𝔀𝓲𝓽𝓱 𝓽𝓻𝓪𝓷𝓼𝓲𝓽𝓲𝓸𝓷 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓭𝓼: 𝓔.𝓰. 𝓗𝓸𝔀𝓮𝓿𝓮𝓻, 𝔀𝓱𝓮𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓼, 𝓯𝓲𝓻𝓼𝓽, 𝓼𝓮𝓬𝓸𝓷𝓭, 𝓯𝓲𝓷𝓪𝓵𝓵𝔂.
-𝓤𝓼𝓮 𝓸𝓯 𝓼𝔂𝓷𝓸𝓷𝔂𝓶𝓼.

Example was taken from https://slidetodoc.com/presentation_image_h2/40c85397a743007e25ef9e73dc17a55c/image-6.jpg
(Sebastián Serna M.)]]> 2021-10-16 02:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820661331 COHESION AND COHERENCE DEVICES sebastiansernamo https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820661964 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JEAB6gmfhU&feature=emb_title

(Sebastián Serna M.)]]> 2021-10-16 02:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jenifercanose/stteey2xs6fl8u47/wish/1820661964