Reviews for "My Time" by Cole Scopetto by Kelsey Peterson https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364 en-us 2021-11-17 18:55:43 UTC 2021-11-18 18:55:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900332864 2/4 Stars

Strengths:
- It's entertaining and relatable
- Uses quotes 

Weaknesses:
- There's no clear purpose, the author just rambles (the narrative is all over the place)
- Not descriptive enough
- Very little dialogue (dialogue is engaging)
- No fluidity (very choppy story, structure is weak)
- Language is very basic/casual

Would you recommend it to a friend? Why?
- No, because of all the weaknesses. There's nothing the audience would get out of reading this narrative.]]> 2021-11-18 18:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900332864 https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900335432 ⭐️/4 
We thought his strengths were his humor, it was a relatable topic, and we could imagine walking down the dorm hallway with him in his story. It was easy to follow.
The weaknesses are that the purpose and focus are lost. The description is poor and there wasn’t much significance. 
No, we would not recommend it to a friend because it didn’t follow much of a plot and he didn’t follow the prompt of a memoir. The story was all over the place and they didn’t really connect. ]]> 2021-11-18 18:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900335432 https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900336558 1. 2.5/4
2. The narratives strengths 
  • relatable (lots of common ground)
  • good voice/tone
3. The narratives weakness
  • he did a lot of telling and not showing
  • blatantly tells us his message instead of implying it
4. No, because the message was significant but the mode of delivery was not powerful enough
]]> 2021-11-18 18:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900336558 "My Time" https://padlet.com/kelseypeterson313/stjbmjf90sygz364/wish/1900336941 3/4 stars
strengths: emphasizing words, language, syntax, message
weaknesses: more showing less telling, dialogue
recommend it to a friend: yes, only if the friend would relate to it

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