Writing a Personal Response (1S4) by Miss Yeo https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp A personal response is a type of text used to present a personal opinion about a particular text. Using what we learnt today, let's write a short personal response! en-us 2021-02-03 23:21:23 UTC 2021-02-22 23:03:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d7.png Instructions: yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1161377034 Prompt - Imagine the school intends to cut short your recess to fifteen minutes. 

1. Craft a personal response in pairs using...

- First-person pronouns e.g. I and We
- Simple past tense to describe past events e.g. was, were, had, did, said, made, went, took, saw, came, etc.
- Simple present tense to respond and give a personal opinion e.g. think, feel, wonder, appreciate, believe, etc.
]]> 2021-02-03 23:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1161377034 Write your names here. yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1161377035 Write your paragraph here. ]]> 2021-02-03 23:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1161377035 syura & naurah https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162024990 (P - We think that it isn’t fair to cut the recess sort to 15 minutes as we have to queue for the food .)(E - Therefore , the line may be long . We might not be able to finish the food quickly and we need to take a break from lessons . We also want to spend more time talking to our friends .)(E - Other than that , if the recess break is only for 15 minutes , its hard for
us to focus in class with a hungry stomach .)(L- Therefore , we feel that 15 minutes of recess is too short .)]]> 2021-02-04 05:21:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162024990 Farin:0sha, Hui Xin, Syahira~♥~✨🔪💅😌 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162025760 (P) We think 15min for recess is too short. If the principal still doesn't change the timing, (EL) we will get very restless.  We wont have enough time to eat. We will rush and we might choke on our food. (EX) Some of us needs more time to eat since we are slow eaters 😅. We also believe that students need some free time to calm ourselves down and relax for abit. That's why we need at least 40 min]]> 2021-02-04 05:21:30 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162025760 Durgeswarii n pirithika https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026179
(P) (We feel that 15 mins is not enough).(E1) (As we may not have enough time to queue up n buy the food as it could be very crowded.) (E2) (If we want to go to the library during recess we can't as if we don't have enough time to eat we won't have time to go library.(L) (If after school we cannot go to the library then we won't even have a chance to go to the library to read.))
And reading is what the school ENCOURAGES.]]> 2021-02-04 05:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026179 🤯🤯Anson,Asher and zai fu,🤯🤯 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026255 P (We will not let our recess cut short) because  E (recess is cut short we will have no time to eat).E ( if classmate do something wrong the teachers will make us stay back than no time to eat. And sometime your teacher ask back for 10min than you die die already. ) L ( The Canteen will  have a lot of people than they will get into a  fight and people may  get seriously Injured ) 👍👍👍
👻👻👻 :D]]> 2021-02-04 05:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026255 Bjorn and Danish https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026264 [P] honestly think that cutting down 15 minutes of recess is a bad idea, as if the queue is too long, we might not have enough time to queue or eat, we also want some breaks on our phone, so overall we don’t think it’s enough time. [E] We would even have enough time to eat or drink incase we are slow. [E] We can also take breaks/rest/sleep if we are extremely tired. So if we have more time, we could eat longer, rest more, play more and more. We feel like having a 1 hour or more recess is good for us to get energized. [L] So that we are ready for our lessons after recess and so that we won't fall asleep or feel very tired due to the lack of energy in our bodies. Teachers would be happy with us as would be more attentive in class and maybe even more well behaved. More students would want to answer more when the teacher asks the class a question. We can do alot of stuff with a long recess. Cutting it to 15 mins would give us less time to even eat]]> 2021-02-04 05:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026264 Serena, Sarah and Ulfa’s Personal Opinion 😋💕 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026720 (P)[We think that we should not cut our recess to be cut into 15 minutes because it’s too short.](EL)
[Sometimes teachers will dismiss us at a late timing or maybe the queue may be too long and sometimes people eat slowly.We may need to run some errands with teachers, ](EX)[eg:like carrying books.](L)[And also on certain days we have to change our clothes so we have to rush to the toilet and change. Last but not least we also get stomachaches.]😛🥺🧋]]> 2021-02-04 05:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162026720 Wanrong,Ting Ann, Vernice 😏🤡🤙💩 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162028505 (( point)) I will write a email to Mdm Tan so that we can dont have a 15 minutes recess) or else we wont be able to have enough time to eat and chat with one another and we will be very restless and cannot focus in class properly.  We can share about what happen in class.]]> 2021-02-04 05:23:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162028505 yu chen ,, chloe & gymel 🥺🧸✨🤍 https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162028547 we will be mad 😡  ,, because so many students 👩‍💻need to buy their food 🍱 and the queue will be very long so we would not have enough time ⏰to eat (cri cri)😭🥲🤧🥴 then not enough time to play also SADDDDDDDD. If the principal change the timing to 15mins for recess ,, everyone will be restless 😬 and hungry 🤤 during lesson ( cri cri ) . sometimes ,, we may choke onto our food as we are hurrying to finish our food 🥘🍜🧇🍔🧋🥤🧃🍵. sometimes students may cut queue because there’s not enough time for us to have our lunch (nom nom) 🥸😋🥺🤣]]> 2021-02-04 05:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1162028547 Divyaa , Min Zhi and Jaya https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1163127703 [P]We feel that if they cut our recess timing to 15 mins will be a bit rushing for everyone. [E]Our class is further away from the canteen and we need almost 5 mins to walk from our class to the canteen. Then we will be left with only 10 mins to eat our food. [E]Plus we also have to queue up to buy food and if there is a long queue it be 3 mins to wait.[L]By the time we want to have a sit it will be 2 mins already then we are left with 5 mins to eat our food and put it back to the store. So we  feel that our recess should be 30 mins more. 

]]> 2021-02-04 11:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1163127703 terii and christine https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1163172267 (terii’s response) Honestly I won’t complain about having 15 minutes of recess time. {40 minutes is too much for me. I don’t really do much during recess}. {So I feel like it’s just a waste of time for me.} I don’t get restless easily, I’m also not attached to my phone. (christine’s response)_]]> 2021-02-04 11:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1163172267 Xing yi, Hannah, rindianie ✨ https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1175127539 I think that its not fair to have our recess cut down to 15 minutes. As sometimes the queue for food and drinks can be long. If the queue is long we dont have enough time to eat. Also sometimes we get held back by our teachers which takes up time in our recess resulting in not enough recess timing. So i dont think it is fair for out recess to be cut down to 15 minutes.]]> 2021-02-08 05:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yeo_xin_ying_vanessa2/stgwmqud9n3473cp/wish/1175127539