https://padlet.com/27arajadhyx/ssralzbwrjl2oc0t Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-04 14:10:53 UTC 2021-06-18 17:33:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60e.png 27cbirck https://padlet.com/27arajadhyx/ssralzbwrjl2oc0t/wish/1514764939 I loved your essay, and the amount of detail that you put into it.  Here’s a detailed sentence, “All of a sudden a figure eliminates him in the game.  His arm goes up and thrashes his controller down to the floor like Zeus throwing lightning.”  I really did like that metaphor too, those couple sentences were AWESOME!  My only wish is some capitalization.  Other than that Great Work!
-Caitlin :)  ]]> 2021-05-11 18:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/27arajadhyx/ssralzbwrjl2oc0t/wish/1514764939 https://padlet.com/27arajadhyx/ssralzbwrjl2oc0t/wish/1614728233 I like your word choice you used. There were some good examples of alliteration. But there were some spelling and capitalization errors, other than that your story was good.

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