https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800 Claims transitions and support en-us 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC 2025-09-28 16:12:27 UTC hello@padlet.com tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981349 At this point you can pull more material from your sources if you need further proof to back up your claim. You can return to the same secondary source multiple times, or you can have a back and forth between two sources with complimentary or contrasting information/arguments.]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981349 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981351

Use the closing sentence to show how this fits into the larger argument (the thesis) or to call attention to what needs to be further addressed (setting up the next claim).

]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981351 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981352 The ‘So what?’ should be at least as long as the quoted material.
If you need to build a relationship or connection (is it part of a strand, repetition, binary; is it an exception to a larger pattern)  to the next piece of evidence, do so.  ]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981352 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981354

1) If you started with the Primary Source:
Introduce a Secondary Source (Follow the pattern for the Secondary Source)
2) If you started with a Secondary Source:
  | Introduce the Primary Source (Follow the pattern for the Primary Source) OR
  | Introduce another Secondary Source

]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981354 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981355 If you start with the secondary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the complaint or moment rather than the pitch of the primary source.
1) to introduce the quote with a signal phrase:a. “In the words of; According to; As X notes, etc.
2) Put quotes around language directly from the text,
AND/OR
3) Paraphrase longer passages.
4) cite your information using MLA format (Tidwell 16).

]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981355 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981356 If you start with the primary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the specifics of that particular source (the pitch), rather than the complaint or moment  You should expand or adapt this material in ways that will lead to your secondary source material. Use the 10 on 1 exercise, saying more about less in a way that sets up your secondary source information. ]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981356 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981357 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981357 tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981358 State your claim (what part of the thesis you are trying to prove/explore):]]> 2020-03-05 12:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/454981358 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455013456 I am trying to prove how social media lowers self-esteem. 

]]> 2020-03-05 13:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455013456 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455013864 It is clear to see there is a common theme of xenophobic tropes post Pearl Harbor. Americans were put in a vulnerable state and prejudice developed towards Japanese citizens, they were dehumanized by how they were depicted and treated, proving America was no longer the land of the free.]]> 2020-03-05 13:22:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455013864 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455014030 War propaganda often downplays the true reality of war. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:22:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455014030 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455014365 There needs to be more reform when it comes to underage kids and teens using JUUL.]]> 2020-03-05 13:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455014365 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015455 The upcoming are sources of access and a study has shown that someone bought it for them, someone offered it to them, they bought it themselves, asked someone to give them some, bought it from another person, got access to JUUL some other way, none of the above and they stole it from a store or other person.]]> 2020-03-05 13:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015455 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015634 People need to become more aware about the risks of cigarettes before they even think about starting smoking]]> 2020-03-05 13:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015634 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015777 After looking at two examples of war propaganda cartoons forms two different times of war. Both cartoons have a comedic take on their subjects, one being the military draft during the Korean War and the other what the people must do during WWII. For both cartoons they used comedy as a way to represent their topics but neither of them truly talk or even mention the grime costs war can have. These truths being the violence and the high chance one has on losing their life when fighting a war. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455015777 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455016215 "An estimated 79.6% of self-reported past 30-day JUUL users in the study had obtained the product from at least one social source"(“I had someone else buy them for me” or “someone offered it to me”) and "77.5% had obtained the products exclusively from a social source."]]> 2020-03-05 13:25:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455016215 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455016256 Money doesn’t have a impact on campaign]]> 2020-03-05 13:25:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455016256 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018053 Through the examples they show how youth can easily get access to nicotine and the JUUL device. Patterns portray the different ways to get a hold of a JUUL along with the risk of addiction afterwards.]]> 2020-03-05 13:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018053 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018260 People don’t know what goes on behind close door of these animals testing facilities. The scientist should show the people the methods and results]]> 2020-03-05 13:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018260 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018317 Most of the time when people start smoking its because they know little to nothing about it, studies showed that big tobacco companies have sponsored research in attempt to show the positive aspects of cigarettes.]]> 2020-03-05 13:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455018317 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455019859 The size of a nicotine pod may not seem intimidating but in the long run there are effects that should be taken into consideration.]]> 2020-03-05 13:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455019859 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455019990 How immigrants are more beneficial to Americas society then detrimental, and that the stereotype views towards them are myths.]]> 2020-03-05 13:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455019990 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020162 women are being exposed to an image of an ideal and are being mentally harmed by this idea.]]> 2020-03-05 13:31:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020162 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020258 A peer reviewed study from the University of Stanford elaborates on the addiction risk. It is best when you are not addicted so that you can stop while you have the chance because the study mentions "The earlier you’re exposed to nicotine, the higher the likelihood that you’ll be addicted throughout your life.”]]> 2020-03-05 13:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020258 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020550 They’re several examples of dehumanization through my sources. All of the Dr.Seuss images depict Japanese people as literal animals and drawn with all the racist stereotypes emphasized. The history sources also show direct dehumanization with showing the internment camps.]]> 2020-03-05 13:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020550 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020800 “Then one day your suddenly gonna realize that you’re beginning to look like and act like a solider; or a man” 
“The rest of your army career is supposed be spent doing anything your most unfit for.”

]]> 2020-03-05 13:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455020800 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455021472 There are several examples of money making and not making a campaign successful ]]> 2020-03-05 13:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455021472 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022251 the image of this ‘ideal’ has always been out there for women from the moment they are born to the moment they die. The image of how to be perfect or how you should look has always been there since the beginning. This idea of how a women should look has various affects in women like it was described in one of D, Heidi piece that stated- ]]> 2020-03-05 13:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022251 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022600 2020-03-05 13:34:59 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022600 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022822 Mike bloomberg spent 500 million dollars on the campaign as a whole and spent the most out of every candidate running this year and is now out of the race]]> 2020-03-05 13:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455022822 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455023057 Overall by the use of my primary source and multiple secondary sources, first talked about the explicit and how they had a positive impact on the adult community. However with the use of secondary sources, it shows early ads of teens with JUUL'S hence the bandwagon propaganda and the website may seem positive in terms of helping adult lives but they are also putting the youth at a risk of addiction. Which will ultimately impact their lives negatively because they are unaware of the long term effects which includes Brain Damage, Narrow Arteries & Serious Lung Damage.]]> 2020-03-05 13:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455023057 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455023697 These are only two examples of what is talked about in the cartoon but from the examples there is not any that mention the dangers of war. From these quotes the cartoon is again only mention the good the draft and being in the military can do for you. We can see that the the government is trying to paint the draft in a good light when it has often be viewed as unnecessary and unfair. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455023697 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455024003 So this is one of the examples of that money not making a campaign successful ]]> 2020-03-05 13:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455024003 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025176 “-body image disturbance include lowered self-esteem and elevated depression. In addition, body image disturbance may be a causal factor in the development of eating disorders” (D Heidi)]]> 2020-03-05 13:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025176 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025266 2020-03-05 13:38:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025266 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025489 Animal testing tortures and kills animals. It’s also bad that these and have to taken out of their nature environment to be tested on and that can destroy an ecosystem. People don’t know what goes on behind closed doors of these testing facilities, if the scientists showed people the method they use on animals people’s opinion would changes.]]> 2020-03-05 13:38:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455025489 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455026232 Hilary Clinton got a lot of money going into the presidential race and yet lost ]]> 2020-03-05 13:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455026232 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455026429 Similarly to the draft cartoon my first cartoon shows us a sort of timeline of the United States before joining WWII. Again we can see war being depicted with comedy, in this case with the axis leaders and the U.S. represented by ugly ducks and a dove. Underlying the ducks is the actions the people must do if they want to win the war. What these things are are shown to us throughout the carton, we must stop asking for peace and begin to fight and lastly the people must buy war bonds to continue the war effort. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455026429 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455029421 Basically connecting the views of both sides- immigrants side and Americans side. Also connecting back to the political cartoon on how Uncle Sam is giving America’s views and the Jewish immigrants giving immigrant views.]]> 2020-03-05 13:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455029421 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455029717 The ad campaigns that needed to start up so they can teach the public and the affected about the health risks of smoking. Aiming at the people that have the physical addiction causing them to keep going back for more]]> 2020-03-05 13:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455029717 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455033575 “In 2010, undocumented individuals paid $13 billion into retirement accounts and only received $1 billion in return. Indeed, over the years, immigrants have contributed up to $300 billion to the Social Security Trust Fund.”]]> 2020-03-05 13:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455033575 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455033768 Through history propaganda during times of war has become a major weapon in the arsenal of a government and military. By using propaganda in a variety of forms a government can rally its people to join the war effort and win. Because a government wants to get a backing for a war they will use propaganda but will not show the true realities of war and the dangers it brings. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455033768 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455034868 While the use of propaganda has grown and evolved overtime and through different times of war, the true depiction of war is not shown in propaganda. Most propaganda attempts to use patriotism and the idea of gaining glory to try and get people to back a war effort. ]]> 2020-03-05 13:50:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455034868 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455038199 “ about sex roles and work during a period described by many historians as both intensely paradoxical for American women and a low point for feminism.” ]]> 2020-03-05 13:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455038199 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455038297  V]]> 2020-03-05 13:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/body_paragraphs_800/wish/455038297