idea 1:

Young people ARE INCREASINGLY SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING (E48) from shopping center

=> going to shopping malls are considered  SIMPLY AS A FORM OF ENJOYMENT (E7) because they want to own these things to STAY UP TO DATE WITH THE LATEST
FASHIONS (E48) or OWN THE NEWEST
HIGH-STATUS DEVICE (E48)

=> this helps relieve stress and chill-out
-> ......

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Version 2:
The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

idea 1:

 In the recent time, there are many  advertisements, therefore, more and more people want to own these products in their home

=> The young people going to shopping malls are considered  SIMPLY AS A FORM OF ENJOYMENT (E7) because they want to fulfillment their request

=> this helps relieve stress and chill-out releive streess and chillout

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

IDEA1: Economic impact

......-> With the development of tRADE, the labour market is becoming more and more increasing due to appearing many shopping malls-->provide employment opportunities for young people who can adapt to change in the new vogue.
-> Young people tend to have BETTER SALARIES [EO4] and are more likely to spend money on a variety of goods and services → create tax revenue for the local government→ FOSTER ECONOMIC GROWTH and GREATER FUTURE PROSPERITY[E04]

With the rapid urban development ,Shopping malls usually recruit high number of employees -> More job opportunities ->Young people tend to have BETTER SALARIES [EO4] and are more likely to spend money on a variety of goods and services
BỔ SUNG "SHOPPING MALLS"

IDEA2: Social Interaction

HAVE A WIDER ROLE TO PLAY IN SOCIETY and MAKE A POSITIVE CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY [E10] BECAUSE Shopping malls serve as social centers where young people can gather and interact with their peer (FOR EXAMPLE)   concerts, workshops,...which attract young people and encourage community engagement → ENHANCE social skills such as: communicating, interacting  with others 

IDEA3: Entertainment

Many shopping malls offer entertainment facilities and recreational activities that appeal to young people, such as movie theaters, indoor playgrounds, or sports areas → provide entertaining environment for young people to have fun, refresh their mind→ boost academic and work productivity

Idea 1: De-stress

In this day and age, people are under a range of pressure--> ...... -> People can de-stress/ RELIEVE STRESS after a hard working day-->people can get a high productivity at work -->people can get a CAREER PROGRESSION ( E04).

Idea 2: Improved social life (OFF-TOPIC)

The demand of people are increasing because younger want to follow trends--> Lead to more job opportunity for people who work in survice industry.....
-> IMPROVED QUALITY OF social LIFE (E04)  --> GREATER FUTURE PROSPERITY (E04)

YOUNG PEOPLE = YOUNGSTERS

Located in a prime location .....-> It creates an ideal (n) for young people to enjoy THE COMFORTABLE ENVIRONMENT, THE VARIETY OF GOODS AND ATTRACTIONS [E028]  such as: clothes, café and arcade -> SIMPLY AS A FORM OF  ENJOYMENT [E07] .......

PHYSICAL PREMISES : MẶT BẰNG

VỊ TRÍ ĐẮC ĐỊA 

FROM AN ECONOMIC PERSPECTIVE, Shopping malls are trying to make A NEW TREND COMES ALONG [E40] with FASHION [E40] -> young people will JOIN IN WITH THE LATEST CRAZE [E40] -> response BASIC SURVIVAL NEEDS [E026] NHIỀU NGƯỜI MUA -> (V)  ECONOMICS PROCESS states [E09]  (NATIONAL ECONOMIC PROGRESS)

Shopping malls can be able to offer an interesting,enjoyable experience-> Going shopping malls is SIMPLY AS A FORM OF ENJOYMENT [E07] 

--> young people CAN go to shopping malls so as to  FACILITATE A HEALTHY DEVELOPMENT MENTALLY [ E06 ] and ENHANCE THEIR QUALITY OF LIFE [ E48 ]--> this may help young people PRODUCE WORK OF OUTSTANDING QUALITY [E45]

IDEA 2: EFFORT TO EARN MONEY