Colin M. Peer Feedback 2022 - 2023 by Colin https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2022-10-24 18:13:26 UTC 2023-06-14 18:59:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f629.png Colin i strongley dislike you 29abodner https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2355999225 2022-10-25 18:38:22 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2355999225 Evan Keane https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2486448969 One star of you essay was the description, through out the whole piece you showed how you felt and I never got board. Another star was your descriptions your anecdotes were extremely detailed and made me feel like I was really live in the moment throughout your whole piece. One wish is maybe a little more transition words, but that’s it.

Also you need to get a life

Stop trying to impress me I know I'm the best]]> 2023-02-17 15:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2486448969 Chanman 29achan1 https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2493009267 Dear Colin McCall or CMC, a strength I have found in your on demand timed essay is that the introduction was so good it almost made me switch sides. Another strength is your lacking of spelling errors it helped make make me not confused. In addition you had no personal pronouns which made it seem like a fact.]]> 2023-02-23 18:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2493009267 I completely agree with the idea that it's okay to be different and that we should love ourselves no matter what. It's unfortunate that the lamb in the Pixar short felt ashamed of his new appearance and allowed the opinions of others to bring him down. It's essential that we learn to embrace and celebrate our uniqueness, rather than letting it be a source of shame or embarrassment.I love the message that the jackalope conveyed to the lamb about the importance of self-acceptance and not letting the opinions of others dictate how we feel about ourselves. It's crucial to focus on the positive aspects of ourselves, rather than dwelling on the negative.Additionally, I believe that diversity and inclusivity are essential in our society. We should celebrate our differences and learn to appreciate the unique perspectives and experiences that each individual brings to the table. By accepting ourselves and others, we can create a more compassionate and understanding world.Overall, I think the Pixar short conveyed an important message about self-acceptance and the importance of embracing diversity. It's a message that we should all take to heart and strive to live by. https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2523640104 2023-03-20 14:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2523640104 Evan Keaneđź’€ 29ekeane https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2523670630  One star of your piece “bound is him”👹 is the description this is shown by the way really prove what your claim is starting throughout your entire piece in your evidence this is shown by how much you evendece supports it. A second star is that you constituently show that the story is really inportent to your claim. Maybe ]]> 2023-03-20 14:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2523670630 Chase Gechtman https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2533513825 Hi, Colin! First off, your on demand story was excellent! I really liked how you used different transition words. For example, when you said “undoubtedly,” “to conclude,” and “certainly.” This shows how you didn’t repeat the same word choice over and over again. In addition , you used extremely strong word choice. For example, when you said “demonstrating,” “compelling,” and “overarching.” These strong word choices made your story even better. For example, if you just kept repeating undoubtedly over and over again the reader would be bored listening to it. Although, one wish I can offer for improvement is italicizing the titling of the Pixar short you should do this because it helps Mrs. Whichard  understand what your title is. However, other than that great job!]]> 2023-03-27 17:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2533513825 Frankie https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2623706406 Hey Colin! The strength of your presentation is your Titles. It stuck out to me how you used the TikTok letter. In addition, I enjoyed the number of bullet points there. This means that you show much info about your topic. However, I see there is no animation. If there was animation it would’ve been better]]> 2023-06-14 18:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/29cmccall/sq78agakcfrwjejm/wish/2623706406