What do we keep in mind to write powerful narratives? by Clemencia Acevedo https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38 What dialogue isn’t moving the story along? How do you know? What edits have been made? What would you do differently? Why? What does this dialogue reveal about these characters? en-us 2016-09-23 09:24:46 UTC 2016-09-23 22:45:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126016260 The first 3 lines should cut because it does lead the story. 
finess]]> 2016-09-23 14:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126016260 jameik  https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126017442
the first 3 lines should go because  that has nothing to do with the topic abouit how he forgot his birthday and how  he lost his charger

]]> 2016-09-23 14:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126017442 Melanie & Jazmin <3 https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126017884 The lines that me and Jazmin chose was the first 3 lines because it just doesn't make sense ,its just not related to what their talking about. 

]]> 2016-09-23 14:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126017884 The first three lines should be cut out because it wouldn't make sense if a conversation would start like that   https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018062 Anidaliz ]]> 2016-09-23 14:07:10 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018062 https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018160 The conversation about shoud be cut the homework does not keep going with the story
Karla]]> 2016-09-23 14:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018160 ruben https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018297 when the two boys are yelling about each other by  the phone charger which is not making any sense.
Ruben and Guissell]]> 2016-09-23 14:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126018297 melady santiago Anthony Pena https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126019416 the line that says well youre a bad friend, He looked like he was about to cry we should keep because it expresses the characters feelings]]> 2016-09-23 14:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126019416 chris.p https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126019846 i think that  the line were it says "well ur a bad freind"
telks me thst this is improtant because thats part of the plot














]]> 2016-09-23 14:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126019846 fuseini https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020123
the first line to the 5th line should be cancel because it does not make sens.]]> 2016-09-23 14:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020123 https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020246 The birthday conversation is important because is the plot.
Karla]]> 2016-09-23 14:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020246 finess, davianny https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020473 the first 3 lines should be cut be cuase its not important

]]> 2016-09-23 14:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020473 Emmanuel Appiah https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020598 The line about the phone charger just doesnt spice the story up it makes it kinda trash

]]> 2016-09-23 14:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126020598 qwam https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126021191 we should takeout the first line]]> 2016-09-23 14:14:48 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126021191 Karla https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126021566 The last line is important because it shows you that he feels sorry]]> 2016-09-23 14:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/msacevedo23/sphvwurm3p38/wish/126021566