https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo You can make any kind of comment en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:41 UTC 2025-11-17 11:40:00 UTC hello@padlet.com 23lcerchio https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/236894941 Hello Dj, I just read your essay and I loved it! you did a amazing job on your intro it really got me hooked into the story. I wish you would look your puncuaction over because i found some errors overall amazing job!.]]> 2018-03-01 13:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/236894941 23khaggerty https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/237401296 Hey DJ, I read your persuasive editorial and I totally agree that we should definitely add a community center. I like how you explained everything so well throughout your whole piece.I also thought that your facts were very good and you got right to the point. Maybe next time you could add stronger word choice. Overall great job!

]]> 2018-03-02 14:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/237401296 23nashie https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/237526936 Hi, I really liked how your writing was straight to the point and you did not sugar coat anything. In addition to that, I liked how you added and gave a future plan for the downtown instead of just say over and over again we can fix it. In the future I would suggest you expand you word choice, and vary you sentences. This will make readers feel entertained constantly. Overall good job!
-Naa Dei A.  ]]> 2018-03-02 17:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/237526936 23sbaumgartner https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/246858808 Hey DJ, I just read your Magazine Article and it was phoenomanal! I loved how I felt like the narrator wasn't actually in the story, he was writing about "Life Central Station." To add you had a great voice and a great hook as well. One Wish for next time is maybe to edit grammar like, "they're" and change it towards there or their. Anyways amazing and great story! ]]> 2018-03-28 12:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/246858808 23rbaumgartner https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/246882469 Hi DJ, your article was amazing. I really liked how it was well described and how it worked. Next time try to fix your spelling and don repeat the same thing everytime. Overall amazing job!]]> 2018-03-28 13:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/23dreyes/sowtdmnxtspo/wish/246882469