1st period Peer Feedback by Maria Pena https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le Give your peers feedback using Paper 1 rubric descriptors. en-us 2021-03-02 18:35:14 UTC 2025-11-11 19:08:04 UTC hello@padlet.com Bryan Otero https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430497 Understanding and interpretation was definitely a 25.I clearly understand what the point you were trying to get across.
Lanauge was a 20 I would go into more detail
The rest was spectular

]]> 2021-03-03 12:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430497 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430635 Understanding and Interpretation- 25, thorough and complete understanding of the text with great references
Analysis and Evaluation-25,  Analysis of textual features is sufficient with great evaluation of features
Focus and Organization- 20, Well organized and focused on the text 
Language- 25, formal language with carefully chosen wording and great vocabulary]]> 2021-03-03 12:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430635 Elle Eric Rachel Kevin https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430831 2021-03-03 12:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263430831 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263431056 The details and knowledge]]> 2021-03-03 12:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263431056 Elle, Eric, Rachel, Kevin lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263431708 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 20
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 25
C - Focus and Organization: 20
D - Language: 25

]]> 2021-03-03 12:53:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263431708 rachel, elle, eric, kevin https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263432286 2021-03-03 12:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263432286 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263434224 I like how you connected Rikki-Tikki-Tavi to the history between two human groups despite the story using animals. This interpretation allowed for a better understanding of the story and why the characters acted how they did. Additionally the connection to disney movies stood out to me because there are often underlying messages and themes that cover dark topics. However, by using family friendly characters, they can cover these topics and keep it appropriate. ]]> 2021-03-03 12:53:53 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263434224 nick waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263434688 Great facts and interpretations of the text, especially when yall said: Mongoose fighting snake is good vs evil, and the mongoose are the Indians fighting the snake British.
Nice clear presentation of facts with good understanding of the text



]]> 2021-03-03 12:54:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263434688 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263435923 Good understanding of literal meaning and the implications of the meaning
strong understanding of the meaning of literary features and how it works in the text and uses great details and examples to explain this
Organized and coherent 
Language is clear and effective :) 
]]> 2021-03-03 12:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263435923 serenity https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263436842 Very thorough and detailed presentation, I like the daily question they really assist in helping listeners understand the significance of the literary features 

]]> 2021-03-03 12:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263436842 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263437727 This presentation was very descriptive and included a lot of information, which caused it to go above and beyond. It talked about setting, themes, and two alternate meanings, which gave two different perspectives of the short story.]]> 2021-03-03 12:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263437727 Grant https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263438380 Organizing ]]> 2021-03-03 12:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263438380 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263438968 Good explanation of the fable, and it had a good explantion of the factos in the short story. Includes multiple themes and literary elements to help support the meaning of the text. It has a little bit of repetition, but besides that, itwas a pretty good presentation.]]> 2021-03-03 12:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263438968 Rikki Tikki Tavi Analysis! alondra_carlos2542 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263440890 Criterion A: 25, I love the way that they took historical context for an interpretation, as well as creating their own when they discussed the names of the animals.
Criterion B: 25, They had a whole slide and Daily Questions dedicated to textual features with meaning and intent described.
Criterion C: 25, the slides were arranged in a way that made sense, going from a summary, to the context, to a deeper analysis on its features/
Criterion D: 25, They maintain a formal tone when speaking on historical issues, and remain this way until the end.]]> 2021-03-03 12:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263440890 Jonathan Le Feedback https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263443577 2021-03-03 12:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263443577 Nick Waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263448659 Good literary elements and explanation of authors purposes and how that impacted the story.
could use a little bit more deeper interpretation as to why the author chose to make the tortoise win and the hare lose. ]]> 2021-03-03 12:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263448659 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263448716 Criterion A: 20 (good interpretation and deeper meaning achieved from the text)
Criterion B: 25 (very good analysis of literary features, especially of why the text is a certain genre)
Criterion C: 25 (well organized presentation, idea flow in a logical manner)
Criterion D: 25 (good language usage)
]]> 2021-03-03 12:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263448716 Elle Dougherty Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263459968 a - The response demonstrates a thorough understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing interpretation of many implications of the text. References to the text are relevant and support the candidate’s ideas 20
b - The response demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 20
c - The presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent. The analysis is adequately focused. 20
d - Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are consistently appropriate to the task. 20
 ]]> 2021-03-03 13:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263459968 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263472996 Crit A: 20- good understanding of the literal meaning of the text, insightful interpretation
Crit B: 20- some analysis of textual features
Crit C: 20- maintains focus through most of presentation, well organized
Crit D: 20- precise use of language, overall solid grammar/sentence construction]]> 2021-03-03 13:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263472996 Bryan Otero https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263474520 Focus and organization

15 - I felt that it was all over the place while I was able to follow along at some part I didn't receive the point you wanted to get across.
Lanuage 
20- couldve used more lanuage in order to sell it more
 Understanding and interpretation
20- You clearly understood what you were talking about. Just need a better interpretation
Analysis and evaluation
20 - Do a better analysis and go into deeper detail
]]> 2021-03-03 13:04:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263474520 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263478526 Criterion A: 20 (decent interpretation of the text, could be deeper)
Criterion B: 20 (analysis of striking features is good and overall well done)
Criterion C: 20 (organization is good for the most part, logical flow of the presentation)
Criterion D: 20 (language is good and although not always appropriate, the message is clear and understandable)


]]> 2021-03-03 13:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263478526 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263483088 You did a good job explaining how the theme made the text easier for kids to connect with. The use of a race resonates with children because they often participate in competitions. Additionally, the explanation of each character and the message they represent made it clear that this story wanted to teach a lesson that would connect with all kinds of children. ]]> 2021-03-03 13:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263483088 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263488160 Understanding and Interpretation- Proficient understanding of the text with interpretations of the characters
Analysis and Evaluation- Great analysis with textual features of the short story
Focus and Organization- Could've been a bit more organized, but great focus and presentation
Language- Great language with effective word choice and accurate grammar.

]]> 2021-03-03 13:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263488160 rachel https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263489318 understanding and interpretation-20- there's deep understanding of its literal meaning and figurative meaning
Analysis and evaluation-15- general analysis of text features
Focus-20- ideas are organized and analysis is relatively focused
language-20- language has a good degree of accuracy]]> 2021-03-03 13:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263489318 Maria Morales mariamorales4077 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263489674 Criterion A: 25 (great Interpretation. I love the way they explained historical context and connected it to the short story. It flowed nicely and helped the audience understand the meaning beyond just the text.)
Criterion B: 25 (super good analysis of of the literary features and how it mixed in with the short story.) 
Criterion C: (25 (presentation was organized super well. The slides were arranged in a way that made everything make sense.)
Criterion D: 25 (formal tone used throughout all of the presentation).]]> 2021-03-03 13:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263489674 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263491201 Criteria A: understanding of literal meaning and some implications of the meaning and connections to real world experiences  (15)
Criteria B: generally appropriate analysis of literary elements and features (15)
Criteria C: adequately organized but could focus more on analysis (15)
Criteria D: language is clear and carefully chosen (20)


]]> 2021-03-03 13:08:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263491201 Justin https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263491437 I got a good understanding of this text and actually learned some things about the text that I never knew.]]> 2021-03-03 13:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263491437 Michael Anthony Newman https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263494900 A-25 the group understood their task well and did a good job portraying their interpretation to us.
B-20 Group did a good job of finding themes and some global issues from such a short children's story.
C-20 The presentation's organization was effective in getting their points across to the audience.
D-25 Effective language allowed for audience to grasp the points the group looked to get across]]> 2021-03-03 13:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263494900 Lauren Chavac https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263500476 Presentation was well developed and carried many ideas. They also did a great job in explaining the text by providing many information. Everything was detailed and understandable.]]> 2021-03-03 13:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263500476 Jonathan Le https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263515234 I think you guys understood the work well and communicated well, however I think with the level of understanding you could have also brought more analysis to the work, especially highlighting some tools or more striking features used. 
A - Understanding and Interpretation: 25
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 15
C - Focus and Organization: 20
D - Language: 20


]]> 2021-03-03 13:14:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263515234 Yazmin Munoz https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263636410 Criterion A: 20 - good interpretation goes really in depth when trying to explain the meaning of the text deeper meaning of the text. Would possibly  include some personal interpretation
Criterion B: 25 - excellent analysis of literary feature. Explains and provides examples of the literary elements used and how they contribute to the story.
Criterion C: 25 - well organized, presentation flows nicely and does not seem out of order
Criterion D: 25 - Language is detailed and goes with the presentation
]]> 2021-03-03 13:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263636410 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263705151 I loved your explanation and analysis because it was well though out and deep. You also explained the context and tied everything together well.]]> 2021-03-03 13:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263705151 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263714250 Everything was well organized and your analysis was insightful. You covered both the literal and figurative meanings well, and I could easily connect it with real life. ]]> 2021-03-03 13:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1263714250 kevin kevinli5376 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1265149572 a - The response demonstrates a thorough understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing interpretation of many implications of the text. References to the text are relevant and support the candidate’s ideas 20
b - The response demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 20
c - maintains focus throughout presentation, well organized. 25
d - Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are consistently appropriate to the task. 20]]> 2021-03-03 17:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1265149572 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268574147 I liked the context and that you included history of the author, it gave the audience a new perspective. Explaining the diction really helped me understand the text more as well. The understanding and interpretation of this short story is very good, and so was the language.]]> 2021-03-04 12:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268574147 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268575483 Sufficient information in relation to the text, the theme and moral compass is great analysis of the text as well as the literary features, language is formal with accurate grammar, organized presentation]]> 2021-03-04 12:24:17 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268575483 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268581100 a -  The response demonstrates a thorough understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing interpretation of many implications of the text. References to the text are relevant and support the candidate’s ideas. 20
b - The response demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 20
c - The presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent. The analysis is adequately focused. 20
d - Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are consistently appropriate to the task. 20]]> 2021-03-04 12:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268581100 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268582030 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 20
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 15
C - Focus and Organization: 15
D - Language: 20

]]> 2021-03-04 12:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268582030 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268585186 Crit A: 25- very solid interpretation and understanding of text and implications, and solidly chosen textual features
Crit B: 20- solid explanation of textual features, and good evaluation of those features
Crit C: 20- well-organized and focused throughout
Crit D: 20- clear language, good sentence construction and grammar

]]> 2021-03-04 12:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268585186 grant https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268586324 very good in depth analysis with lots of information. Organized well and the slides looked nice]]> 2021-03-04 12:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268586324 Bailey Campbell https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268593622 First off I really enjoyed yall's ]]> 2021-03-04 12:29:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268593622 Bailey Campbell https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268596308 I really enjoyed the short story your group selected. The literary analysis was very thorough and was excellent for someone who has never read rikki tikki tavi. Included different thematic statements, literary elements and was an excellent presentation.]]> 2021-03-04 12:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268596308 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268598232 I liked the interpretation of the heart as a symbol of his guilt. The man’s guilt grew more and more the longer he remained unsuspected. You also mentioned how he talked to himself during and after the crime indicating a strong need for reassurance. The guilt and need for self reassurance are key components of the main character. ]]> 2021-03-04 12:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268598232 Bailey Campbell https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268605780 Good detailed analysis of the short story. It was great at explaining the thematic ideas and all the literary features that made the short story so unique. It was good at informing me on a text I've never read and an over all good presentation.

]]> 2021-03-04 12:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268605780 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268606088 Strong understanding of the literal meaning and the other implications and interpretations. Very organized and focused. Language is clear and well chosen. Insightful analysis of literary elements :) ]]> 2021-03-04 12:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268606088 Jack Nick Kedzie Savannah https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607044 2021-03-04 12:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607044 Jonathan and Michael-Anthony https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607335 2021-03-04 12:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607335 kevin kevinli5376 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607459 The response exhibited a strong understanding of the literal meaning and analysis of the text (esp. the use of diction). The slides where very well organized and easy to follow, and didn't affect the responses message. ]]> 2021-03-04 12:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268607459 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609024 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 20
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 20
C - Focus and Organization: 20
D - Language: 20

]]> 2021-03-04 12:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609024 Lauren Chavac https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609105 Very detailed and well presented, especially the context and striking features. The explanation of the author's intent helped me understand the short story more.]]> 2021-03-04 12:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609105 Justin justinisaacson4803 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609268 I like the organization and the history tied into it because I didn't know that.

]]> 2021-03-04 12:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268609268 Rachel Wilcher https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268610822 There was a good job of explaining the techniques and literary elements, but maybe needs a bit more insight on how it all shapes the meaning, besides just being guilty. The presentation is wee focused and the language used was effective and precise. 
understanding and interpretation- 20
analysis- 20
focus and org- 25
lang- 25]]> 2021-03-04 12:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268610822 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268613772 Criterion A: 25 (excellent interpretation of the text and deep meaning is derived)
Criterion B: 20 (very good analysis of the work and understanding is derived from the literary features)
Criterion C: 25 (very good, easy to follow organization of the presentation and information)
Criterion D: 25 (language was high level and appropriate for IB)
]]> 2021-03-04 12:36:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268613772 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614139 Criterion A: 20 - good interpretation goes really in depth when trying to explain the meaning of the text deeper meaning of the text. Would possibly  include some personal interpretation
Criterion B: 25 - excellent analysis of literary feature. Explains and provides examples of the literary elements used and how they contribute to the story.
Criterion C: 25 - well organized, presentation flows nicely and does not seem out of order
Criterion D: 25 - Language is detailed and goes with the presentation
]]> 2021-03-04 12:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614139 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614484 Crit A: 25- solid literal understanding and choice of supplemental textual references
Crit B: 25- insightful and thorough explanations of textual references and analysis of literary features
Crit C: 25- very neatly organized, presentation stayed focused
Crit D: 20- overall clear language, grammar, and sentence construction

]]> 2021-03-04 12:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614484 Michael Anthony Newman and Jonathan Le https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614783 Group 3]]> 2021-03-04 12:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268614783 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268616438 Criterion A: 20 - goes really in depth when explaining the meaning of the text deeper meaning of the text. 
Criterion B: 15 - inlcudes examples of literary elements, but intergration and how it fits into the story wouldve made it stronger.
Criterion C: 15 -  presenation was orgnaized, but could’ve used a better flow of how the presentation went.
Criterion D: 20 - Included some language that went with presntation. However, couldve had mucy more clear presentation and flow.
]]> 2021-03-04 12:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268616438 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268618349 a - The response demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text. References to the text are well chosen and effectively support the candidate’s ideas. 25
b - The response demonstrates an insightful and convincing analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a very good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 25
c - The presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent. The analysis is adequately focused. 20
d - Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise, with a high degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are effective and appropriate to the task. 25]]> 2021-03-04 12:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268618349 Justin justinisaacson4803 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268619836 I like how you went deeper into the context to give me a deeper understanding of the text and its meaning]]> 2021-03-04 12:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268619836 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268633281 Criterion A: 25 - good interpretation group does a good jon with going depth when trying to explain the meaning of the text. Provides alot of personal insight with interpretation, and what group though of.
Criterion B: 20 - included analysis of literary feature, but there could have been further analysis od literary elements in the text. did a good job showing how elements went into the story.
Criterion C: 25 - well organized, it flows nicely and does not seem out of order or messy.
Criterion D: 20 - Language is detailed and goes with the presentation, however couldve used more language that fit into the text.
]]> 2021-03-04 12:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268633281 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268640938 Great analysis of the text and the literary connections make sense. The theme is morally correct with sufficient information. Presentation is organized with cute images and the language is formal and distinct.]]> 2021-03-04 12:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268640938 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268652957 Criterion A: 25 (very good interpretation of the text, goes deep beyond the written words)
Criterion B: 20 (good analysis of the literary features, connects beyond the text)
Criterion C: 20 (good organization, honestly format is hard to follow but the spoken presentation was very well organized)
Criterion D: 25 (language is high level and appropriate for IB, the message is clear)
]]> 2021-03-04 12:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268652957 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268662897 The understanding and analysis of this presentation was very good. The presentation included lots of context, literary elements, connections, and themes. These made your presentation easy to understand and follow along with. The only thing is that during the presentation, I could not always hear what you all were saying just because it was quiet, but very good besides that.]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268662897 rachel https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663132 really deep and through explanation of the story and its analysis and what it means literally, and even in todays society. very good literary features with larger implications
understanding-25
analysis- 25
focus-25
language-20]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663132 Bailey Campbell https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663234 The detailed analysis and comparison to real world context was well done. Easy to follow along with a thorough analysis to back it up. I really enjoyed the text and was a great analysis.

]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663234 grant https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663315 great commentary and could tell all group member had good knowledge of the short story]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663315 Eva, Bryan, Lidia evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663486 2021-03-04 12:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663486 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663920 Good understanding of the literal meaning and insightful interpretation :) Good organization and clear language. Good evaluation of the literary elements ]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268663920 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268664998 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 25
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 20
C - Focus and Organization: 20
D - Language: 20


]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268664998 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268665190 Criterion A: 25 - goes ri-depth when trying to explain the meaning of the text as well as the deeper meaning of the text. provides alot of specific  
Criterion B: 25 - excellent analysis of literary feature. provides examples of the literary elements used and how they contribute to the story.
Criterion C: 20 - well organized, presentation flows nicely.
Criterion D: 25 - Language is detailed and goes with the presentation, goes in-depth when trying to explain using precise details.
]]> 2021-03-04 12:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268665190 Bryan, Eva, Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268665471 2021-03-04 12:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268665471 Joe Amelia and Serenity ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668404 2021-03-04 12:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668404 Yazmin, Larissa, and Mallory https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668411 2021-03-04 12:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668411 Lauren, Maria and Alondra https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668650 2021-03-04 12:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268668650 nick waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268669034 great presentation and clear information]]> 2021-03-04 12:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268669034 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268673608 Crit A: 20- good literal understanding and solid choice of textual references
Crit B: 25- very thorough analysis of textual features
Crit C: 20- focused and neat presentation
Crit D: 20- overall clear language, grammar, and sentence construction

]]> 2021-03-04 12:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268673608 Maria Morales mariamorales4077 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268675277 Criterion A: 15 (decent literal understanding)
Criterion B: 15 (general explanation of literary features)
Criterion C: 15 (appropriate presentation, organized decently)
Criterion D: 20 (clear and good use of langauge and grammar.]]> 2021-03-04 12:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268675277 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268682030 a - The response demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text. References to the text are well chosen and effectively support the candidate’s ideas. 25
b - The response demonstrates an insightful and convincing analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a very good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 25
c - The presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent. The analysis is adequately focused. 20
d - Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise, with a high degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are effective and appropriate to the task. 25]]> 2021-03-04 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268682030 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268682159 Criterion A: 25 (very good interpretation of the text, goes beyond the literal meaning of the text)
Criterion B: 20 (good interpretation using literary elements, very well done analysis)
Criterion C: 25 (organization was very clear and easy to follow)
Criterion D: 25 (language was high level)
]]> 2021-03-04 12:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268682159 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268694966 You all did a good job connecting the author’s use of symbolism in the story to the overall message. There were many symbols such as the white stones and the birds that all represented a path home. These constant reminders of the path home represents hope and how everyone needs to hold onto the positive outcome that can come from fighting through challenges. ]]> 2021-03-04 12:58:32 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268694966 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268706867 The theme of Appearances can be Deceiving makes complete sense and the literary analysis was good, the organization was sufficient, the language was formal and accurate.]]> 2021-03-04 13:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268706867 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268946986 A: 20 - I thought your story was fascinating and I love how you tied the time period in with the author's own life and your ideas demonstrated an understanding of the text.
B: 20 Your textual features were also well thought out 
C: 25 it was well organized and understandable
D: 25 you used a high level language and overall enhanced the presentation.]]> 2021-03-04 13:51:15 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268946986 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268977866 A: 25 - you had an awesome literal and figurative analysis.
B: 25 Your textual features were also well thought out 
C: 25 it was well organized and understandable
D: 25 you used a high level language and overall enhanced the presentation.]]> 2021-03-04 13:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1268977866 Serenity Owens https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273301322 I feel the interpretation could have been a little more detailed but the analysis of literary features and the author's purpose is pretty strong]]> 2021-03-05 12:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273301322 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273311942 The context was very helpful. The understanding and and mentioning of the third person point of view were both good, but I think that there should be a couple more literary elements in the presentation. It is very organized and had clear language and grammar.]]> 2021-03-05 12:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273311942 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273325956 Crit A: 20- solid literal understanding and choice of textual references (took off for formal aspects)
Crit B: 20- again insightful, thorough explanations of textual references and features, just off for formal aspects
Crit C: 25- neatly organized, focused stayed on presentation throughout
Crit D: 25- clear language, grammar, and sentence construction which furthers communication]]> 2021-03-05 12:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273325956 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335424 Criterion A: 25 (excellent understanding of text and deeper meaning achieved) 
Criterion B: 25 (excellent interpretation of the text using literary elements, multiple interpretations, all well done)
Criterion C: 20 (good organization for oral presentation, visual presentation is slightly difficult to follow)
Criterion D: 25 (very good, high level vocabulary that is appropriate for IB
]]> 2021-03-05 12:35:15 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335424 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335545 a - The response demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text. References to the text are well chosen and effectively support the candidate’s ideas. 25
b - The response demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 20
c - The presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent. The analysis is adequately focused. 20
d - Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are consistently appropriate to the task. 20]]> 2021-03-05 12:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335545 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335670 You did a good job comparing different perspectives between the characters that allowed us to understand why they acted the way they did. Additionally this helped us uncover the author’s intended message to control your pride and not let jealousy control you. ]]> 2021-03-05 12:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273335670 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339027 Good understanding of the literal meaning and insightful analysis of the text. Organized and focused with clear language. Strong analysis on the literary elements and how it affects the text :)]]> 2021-03-05 12:36:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339027 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339207 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 25 - seemed like they really went into detail with their presentation and the context
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 20 - managed to explain the authorial choices and their importance
C - Focus and Organization:20 - clear and concise, understandable. Kind of small text
D - Language: 25 - grammar was concise

]]> 2021-03-05 12:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339207 rachel Wilcher https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339617 a-25 thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text and has a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications 
b-20 demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features 
c-20 presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent
d-25 Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise]]> 2021-03-05 12:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273339617 nick waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273340772 great connections with Don quijote. I loved the analysis of your story, and I like the analysis of how the authors hispanic background impacted the text.

]]> 2021-03-05 12:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273340772 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273361586 Criterion A: 20 - good interpretation goes in depth when trying to explain the meaning of the text 
Criterion B: 25 - good analysis of literary feature. Explains and provides examples of the literary elements used 
Criterion C: 25 - well organized, presentation flows nicely and does not seem out of order
Criterion D: 25 - Language is detailed and goes with the presentation
]]> 2021-03-05 12:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273361586 Mallory Lane https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273362381 Criterion A: 20 (good understanding of the text, some deeper meaning seems to be achieved) 
Criterion B: 25 (good job analyzing the text, goes beyond the literary features)
Criterion C: 20 (presentation is slightly difficult to follow, doesn’t detract from the overall message)
Criterion D: 25 (language is high level and appropriate for IB)
]]> 2021-03-05 12:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273362381 nick waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273366043 great analysis and connections to other texts. I love how you related AM to what we see in today's society and how our world would be if we were going through a similar scenario.]]> 2021-03-05 12:47:28 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273366043 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273369558 The author’s constant use of metaphors throughout the story is significant, and you all did a good job connecting this to the concept of Technology vs. The Natural World. By making indirect comparisons the author was able to clearly convey his connection to the real world. ]]> 2021-03-05 12:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273369558 Yazmin Munoz yazminmunoz7130 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273371596 2021-03-05 12:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273371596 rachel rachelwilcher6678 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273372688 a-25 thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text with convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications
b-25 response demonstrates an insightful and convincing analysis of textual features and authorial choices
c-20  presentation of ideas is well organized and mostly coherent
d-25 Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise]]> 2021-03-05 12:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273372688 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273375169 Great analysis of the text with sufficient information and great theme and interpretation. Language is great and the organization of the presentation was outstanding.]]> 2021-03-05 12:50:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273375169 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378626 Good analysis of literal meaning and deeper interpretation of the short story. Clear and strong language. Organized and focused presentation. Good analysis of the literary elements and how it affects the text and readers perspective :) ]]> 2021-03-05 12:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378626 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378767 Crit A: 25- quite solid literal understanding, good choices for textual references
Crit B: 20- detailed and insightful analysis of literary features
Crit C: 25- maintained focus on presentation throughout, neatly organized
Crit D: 25- very clear language, grammar, and sentence construction]]> 2021-03-05 12:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378767 Jack Stephenson https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378779 Had very good understanding and analysis of the short story. Icluded good language and literary elements, which were well explained. Also included multiple well thought out literary comparisons.]]> 2021-03-05 12:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273378779 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273380550 a - The response demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text. References to the text are well chosen and effectively support the candidate’s ideas. 25
b - The response demonstrates an appropriate and at times insightful analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 20
c - The presentation of ideas is effectively organized and coherent. The analysis is well focused. 25
d - Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are consistently appropriate to the task. 20]]> 2021-03-05 12:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273380550 grant https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273382284 deep understanding of the text and really great commentary.]]> 2021-03-05 12:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273382284 rachel rachelwilcher6678 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273385518 a-25 thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text and has a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications
b-25 insightful and convincing analysis of textual features
c-25 presentation of ideas is effectively organized and coherent
d-20 Language is clear and carefully chosen, with a good degree of accuracy in grammar]]> 2021-03-05 12:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273385518 Serenity Owens https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273388466 You did a great description of the striking features that really help the teaching and allows us to understand more about the story as a whole]]> 2021-03-05 12:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273388466 rachel rachelwilcher6678 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273390875 a-20 thorough understanding of the literal meaning of the text and has a convincing interpretation of many implications of the text
b-20 appropriate and insightful analysis of textual features
c-25 effectively organized and coherent
d-25 Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise]]> 2021-03-05 12:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273390875 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273393433 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 25 - really went into detail about their short story and easy to follow along
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 20 - authorial choices were present, but would like to see a few more
C - Focus and Organization:25 - organization was coherent and focused
D - Language: 25 - clear and appropriate to their analysis

]]> 2021-03-05 12:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273393433 Eric https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273404902 Crit A: 25- displayed solid literal understanding of text throughout presentation, with well chosen textual references
Crit B: 25- thorough analysis of textual and literary features
Crit C: 25- maintained focus on presentation throughout, neatly organized
Crit D: 25- consistent style, clear language, grammar, and sentence construction aids in understanding of presentation]]> 2021-03-05 13:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273404902 Kedzie Howe kedzie_howe3331 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273410276 I like how you all connected the message within the text to a real world issue and the author. Mental illness is a prominent issue in today’s society and this story speaks to how controlling it can be. Your interpretation made it clear that this was the main lesson through: the context given about Poe, the explanation of the story, and the direct connection to alcoholism. ]]> 2021-03-05 13:02:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273410276 Amelia Hawkins ameliahawkins7300 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273414571 Great amount of information to analyze the text with understanding and interpretation. The connection of the text to other literary texts was profound and made sense, and the language was formal with accurate grammar. The theme fit with the text and I understood.]]> 2021-03-05 13:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273414571 Serenity Owens https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273415592 I like how you all included the analysis of the narrator along with the analysis of the text.]]> 2021-03-05 13:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273415592 nick waid https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273422608 great theme of justice and truth and a great connection between the literary text and the world today. I would recommend talking a little louder and clearer, but overall the literary elements and context was very relevant and helpful towards yalls presentation.]]> 2021-03-05 13:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273422608 Eva Safaie evasafaie https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437523 Good understanding of the literal meaning and really good analysis and interpretation of theme and literary elements. Advanced and clear language and you stayed focused on the task :) ]]> 2021-03-05 13:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437523 Elle Dougherty - Feedback eleanordougherty4762 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437769 a - The response demonstrates a thorough and perceptive understanding of the literal meaning of the text. There is a convincing and insightful interpretation of larger implications and subtleties of the text. References to the text are well chosen and effectively support the candidate’s ideas. 25
b - The response demonstrates an insightful and convincing analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices. There is a very good evaluation of how such features and/or choices shape meaning. 25
c - The presentation of ideas is effectively organized and coherent. The analysis is well focused. 25
d - Language is very clear, effective, carefully chosen and precise, with a high degree of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary and sentence construction; register and style are effective and appropriate to the task.
25
]]> 2021-03-05 13:11:51 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437769 Lidia lidia_gutierrez_lopez7553 https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437797 A - Understanding and Interpretation: 25 
B - Analysis and Evaluation: 25
C - Focus and Organization:25
D - Language: 25
Overall they had really detailed presentation and great analysis on authorial choices and context

]]> 2021-03-05 13:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273437797 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273816869 A: 25 - you had an awesome literal analysis.
B: 25 Your textual features were also well thought out 
C: 25 it was well organized and understandable
D: 25 you used a high level language and overall enhanced the presentation.]]> 2021-03-05 14:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273816869 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273823774 A: 20 - good understanding of text.
B: 15 - I was a little confused with the analysis and the context surrounding it 
C: 20 it was organized and understandable
D: 25 you used a high level language and overall enhanced the presentation.]]> 2021-03-05 14:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273823774 Heather Flanagan https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273838134 A: 25 - you had an awesome literal and figurative analysis
B: 25 Your textual features were also well thought out 
C: 25 it was well organized and understandable
D: 25 you used a high level language and overall enhanced the presentation.]]> 2021-03-05 14:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/maria_m_pena/snjy720xfx8qa7le/wish/1273838134