PQS for Discoverer Articles by Emily R. Butterworth https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n Made with mirth en-us 2018-08-13 14:15:53 UTC 2018-08-13 17:16:30 UTC hello@padlet.com Daniel Zuloaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901517 New ISP methods implemented this year.
It was a very interesting article and I could relate to it as I went to that presentation during the ISPs.]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901517 Catalina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901544 Servi Express Unexpected Bidding
It was pretty interesting knowing that the school actually counts on us to make a decision, I didnt know that.]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901544 Pedro Pablo Uribe https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901556 Lights on
I really liked how this article was written. It included different quotes for supporting different points of view.]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901556 Luciano Fernandez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901558 New ISP methods implemented this year

It was a very complete topic and a new thing that I’ve never heard or noticed about at school. Good grammar and punctuation.

]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901558 Catalina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901559 Class
Are all the articles published, or only the best?

]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901559 Juan Felipe Gaviria https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901563 TCS Elections 2018

The article did not only go far in looking for different political point of views, but it even did a poll to help us visualize where the Columbus School and its students distribute themselves on the political spectrum. It also maintained a neutral tone despite it talking about a topic as controversial as politics is.

]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901563 Catalina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901564 Servi Express Unexpected Bidding
There were some quotation grammar errors, so maybe re revise to check everything is correct before publishing. ]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901564 Sofia Nuñez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901571 Lights on, lights off
It was all complete and included everything that actually happened in the event becuase I was there and I experience it. ]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901571 Samuel Susaeta https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901585 An Expensive and Uncomfortable Battery Pack

The most useless and expensive battery pack with four wheels that you could ever buy in your lifetime. (Great intro)

]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901585 Juan Camilo Salazar https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901599 Finally! Sports day for Middle School
I liked how the author stated the topic and explained all its components]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901599 Valentina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901630 Sofia sells cookies...
The article was very well written and the choice of words was amazing. The format was impecable it was very enjoyable to read. ]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901630 Pedro Echeverri https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901637 Lights on
It had a good variety of quotes and they were explained very good.]]> 2018-08-13 17:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901637 Pedro Juan Henao https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901661 Lights On, Lights Off
This articles is an outstanding example as to how a well written articles looks like. Grammar, word choice, LQTQ, you name it, this has it.]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901661 Jose Correa https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901672

The “Unfair” Experience at Marymount Cup

It was very interesting to read about something as unfair as what took place in the Marymount Cup.

]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901672 Daniel Guarin https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901678 TCS Binationals 2018
Good background info and explains the different parts that take to make this event. The most reliable people to talk about the topic give opinion]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901678 David Valencia https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901686 BRINGING SOCCER TO IT’S OLD DAYS
The article is great by the way it starts now that it tells about one of the games as the class of 98' was about to win and the TCS students tied up

]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901686 Jose Correa https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901756 If some of the directors doesn't agree with the information shared on one article will it still be published?]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901756 Manuela Saldarriaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901765 Chanel fashion cruise..

te article was very complete and well written, she seemed very passionate about the topic so the article was great.]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901765 Pedro Pablo Uribe https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901814 Class
Are we having a lot of time for doing this articles?]]> 2018-08-13 17:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901814 Sofia Nuñez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901875 Serviexpress renews contract
What options did the school have in mind, if they choose to break the contract with serviexpress]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901875 Valentina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901883 Class
How can one become an edditor?]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901883 Luciano Fernandez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901948 For a beat article should we have strictly 400 words ?

]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901948 Samuel Susaeta https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901965 An Expensive and Uncomfortable Battery Pack

How did you gather all that specific information?

]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901965 Daniel Zuloaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901981 When are we going to start writing our first articles?]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901981 Pedro Echeverri https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901992 Lights on
Do you think it will happen again]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272901992 Maria Jose Puerta https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902006 Light on, music off
I really liked the way the article was written and the quotes she used to really make a point.

]]> 2018-08-13 17:10:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902006 Manuela Saldarriaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902007 How did she get so much information about it?]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902007 Juan Camilo Salazar https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902010 Finally! Sports day for Middle School
Will sports day happen in High School?]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902010 Sofia Nuñez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902025 Lights on, lights off
Include more opinions of people that were just attending the prom, not just the committee members ]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902025 Daniel Guarin https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902046 TCS Binationals 2018
How are they going to improve from the last time they did binationals]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902046 David Valencia https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902077 what will the first article we write be about]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902077 Pedro Pablo Uribe https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902092 from a hobby to a job
I suggest for this articles to be smaller, is more pleasant for the reader a more short article.]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902092 Manuela Saldarriaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902113 maybe some spelling mistakes ]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902113 Daniel Zuloaga https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902132 Sofia Niño Cookie article could use more quotes.]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902132 Pedro Juan Henao https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902158 Can two people help find information about the same idea and write two articles based on it? Different points of view?]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902158 Valentina Velez https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902178 12th graders going...
The article could have a stronger choice of words to make a bigger impact on the readers.]]> 2018-08-13 17:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902178 Juan Camilo Salazar https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902218 Finally! Sports day for Middle School
I think it should make a summary of how the decision of making sports day in middle school started. For example, did they have meetings, or were there problems. Practically the process.]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902218 Simón Correa https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902246 An Unfair experience at Marymount cup.

I really liked The article because the story was very interesting

]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902246 Pedro Echeverri https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902280 Lights on

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I recommend her to frame her quotes to show her opinion, instead of being so impartial.

]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902287 Samuel Susaeta https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902304 Lights on, Lights off
Maybe don't use that much quotes.]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902304 Juan Felipe Gaviria https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902357 Can we develop our own distinct writing styles for the types of articles?]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902357 Maria Jose Puerta https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902373 Can we decide if our article is published?]]> 2018-08-13 17:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902373 Pedro Juan Henao https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902420 Sofia sells Cookies
I think that she could have used LQTQ more in order to guide herself as a writer]]> 2018-08-13 17:13:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902420 Jose Correa https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902424 The marymount unfairness would be more interesting if we could have quotes from people of other schools.]]> 2018-08-13 17:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902424 Simón Correa https://padlet.com/ebutterworth2/smnh4t67tf0n/wish/272902949 An Unfair experience at Marymount cup.

I think they should've tried and get a quote from a Marymount student that did perceive the bad refereeing

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