https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v Carlota Costa Andrade en-us 2018-05-24 12:59:31 UTC 2018-06-22 14:03:11 UTC hello@padlet.com balbonid https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263341255 What went well is that in the Visual Poem the first sentence was the same color,and for the other sentences some of the words are becoming in a different colour.]]> 2018-05-24 13:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263341255 balbonid https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263343829  Maybe in the Ballad in the there were some blue kind of circles and there was also that blue line next to the blue kind of circles so I think it would be more clear if the line would be another colour]]> 2018-05-24 13:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263343829 marquesd2_2 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979217 Good choice of poems ]]> 2018-05-28 08:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979217 marquesd2_2 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979321 Could be more creative]]> 2018-05-28 08:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979321 costafs1_1 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979560 Your poems were very creative]]> 2018-05-28 08:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263979560 piresfc1_1 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263981774 Maybe you could change the style of poem you write from free verse and rhyming poem.]]> 2018-05-28 09:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263981774 piresfc1_1 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263981990 I liked the homework poem I totally agree]]> 2018-05-28 09:05:38 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/263981990 sweeniee https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264493347 I like the choice of poems and probably the ballad might be my favorite.]]> 2018-05-30 11:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264493347 sweeniee https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264493429 I didn’t really understand the concrete/visual poem.]]> 2018-05-30 11:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264493429 decoenen https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264494888 I’m not that sure how to read the Free Verse. I think that some commas would help to be able to read it better.]]> 2018-05-30 11:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264494888 decoenen https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264495259 All of her poems are really creative and varied but I especially like the limerick because it is really funny and makes me laugh as it makes complete sense. Another thing I liked were the ‘big questions’]]> 2018-05-30 11:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/264495259 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/268231027 Like Noor, I also really liked some of your responses to the 'big questions'. I thought you'd designed the backgrounds of each of your poems with the tone of each one clearly in mind. ]]> 2018-06-22 14:01:37 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/268231027 https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/268231116 Challenge yourself to use more ambitious vocabulary in your own poetry!]]> 2018-06-22 14:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/andradear1_1/smikw5ern50v/wish/268231116