AES Development Day 20.09.24 by

CW1 Sample 1

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 13:55:25 UTC

CW2 Sample 2

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 13:57:02 UTC

CW1 Sample 3

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 13:57:21 UTC

CW1 Rubric

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 13:58:14 UTC

Writing Exam Sample 1

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 14:00:47 UTC

Writing Exam Sample 2

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 14:01:01 UTC

Writing Exam Sample 3

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 14:01:12 UTC

Writing Exam Rubric

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-19 14:01:27 UTC

Dave

2024-09-20 11:27:58 UTC

Task achievement

a) 4-5

b) 2-3

c) Total = 4

Organisation

a) 4-5

b) 4-5

Total = 5

Grammar

a) 4-5

b) 2-3

Total = 4

Lexis

a) 6-7

b) 6-7

Total = 7

Academic conventions

a) 6-7

b) 4-5

Total = 6

Overall = 26

Jon

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 11:33:14 UTC

Sample 1:

TA: (a)4-5, (b) 2-3 = 4

Org: (a) 4-5, (b) 4-5 = 5

Gr: (a) 4-5, (b) 2-3 = 4

Lexis: (a) 4-5, (b) 4-5 = 5

Academic Conventions: (a) 4-5 (b) 6-7 = 6

Total = 24

48%

Allison

allisonng281 — 2024-09-20 11:33:33 UTC

Task achievement - 5

a) 4-5

b) 4-5 (no signs of synthesis but some evaluation, mainly descriptive and relying on sources)

Organisation - 5

a) 4-5

b) 4-5

Grammar - 3

a)2-3

b)2-3 (lots of punctuation errors and run-on sentences, basic verb conjugation errors)

Lexis - 4

a) 4-5

b) 2-3

Academic Conventions - 6

a) 6-7

b) 4-5

overall: 23 = 46%

Shahrzad

2024-09-20 11:33:47 UTC

Criterion

Student 1:

Task achievement

a)4-5

Overall: 4

b)2-3

Organisation

a)4-5

Overall:5

b)4-5

Grammar

a)4-5

Overall: 4

b)2-3

Lexis

a)6-7

Overall: 6

b)4-5

Academic Conventions

a)6-7

Overall:6

b)4-5

Total

%50

Mahmoud

2024-09-20 11:34:19 UTC

TA 4

O 5

G 5

L 5

AC 5

48%

Leah

ngocnguyen48 — 2024-09-20 11:35:45 UTC

Sample 1:

TA: (a) 4 - 5, (b) 4 - 5 => 5

Org: (a) 4 - 5, (b) 4 - 5 => 5

Gr: (a) 4 - 5, (b) 4 - 5 => 5

L: (a) 4 - 5, (b) 4 - 5 => 5

AC: (a) 4 - 5, (b) 4 - 5 => 5

Total = 25

50%

Dave SAMPLE 1

2024-09-20 11:55:28 UTC

Source selection 5/5

Research skills 2/5

Source evaluation 3.5/5

Processing text 1 0/5

Processing text 2 2/5

Use of sources 2/5

Jon Sample 1

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 11:58:54 UTC

Source Sel: 5

Res Skills: 2

Source Eval: 2

Key points: 0

Support: 1

Use of Source: 3.5

Total 13.5 (45%)

Allison

allisonng281 — 2024-09-20 12:01:35 UTC

Student 1

Source selection: 5

Research skills: 2 (3 different websites/different keywords). Lack details

Source evaluation: 3.5 (needs more detail in currency)

Processing text: 1 (ideas in source 1 is good

source 2 and 3 seem to be copied and not paraphrased well.)

Processing text: 1

Use of sources: 2 (mainly descriptive)

Mahmoud_CW1_Sample 2

2024-09-20 12:05:45 UTC

Source selection: 3.5

Research skills: 2

Source evaluation: 2

Processing text 1: 1

Processing text 2: 2

Use of sources: 2

12.5

Nathan Sample 1

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:08:36 UTC

Source Selection: 5

Research Skills: 2

Source Evaluation: 2

Processing text: 0/1

Processing text: 1

Use of Sources: 2

Shahrzad

2024-09-20 12:11:43 UTC

CW1: Source selection 5

Research skills. 2

Source evaluation:3.5

Processing text: 1 or 2

Processing text: 2

Use of sources: 2

Total: 15.5

sample 1

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:12:36 UTC

Dave sample 2

2024-09-20 12:13:42 UTC

Source selection

5/5

Research skills

1/5

Source evaluation

2/5

Processing text 1

2/5

Processing text 2

2/5

Use of sources

2/5

Shahrzad-Sample 2

2024-09-20 12:14:34 UTC

Source selection: 5

Research skill: 1

Source evaluation: 2

Processing text: 3.5

UoS: 2

Total: 17

Allison - Sample 2

allisonng281 — 2024-09-20 12:14:54 UTC

SS: 5

RS: 1

SE: 2 quite repetitive and needs more details

PT: 1

PT: 2

US: 5

tota: 16

Jon Sample 2

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:15:19 UTC

Source Sel: 3.5

Res Skills: 2

Source Eval: 2

Key points: 1

Support: 2

Use of Source: 2

Total 12.5 (42%)

Jon Sample 3

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:17:02 UTC

Source Sel: 5

Res Skills: 3.5

Source Eval: 3.5

Key points: 2

Support: 2

Use of Source: 2

Total 18 (60%)

Nathan Sample 2

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:22:24 UTC

Source Selection: 5

Research Skills: 1

Source Evaluation: 2

Processing text: 3.5

Use of Sources: 2

Dave sample 3

2024-09-20 12:23:59 UTC

Source selection

5/5

Research skills

2/5

Source evaluation

5/5

Processing text 1

2/5

Processing text 2

3.5/5

Use of sources

3.5/5

Allison - SAMPLE 3

allisonng281 — 2024-09-20 12:24:32 UTC

SS: 5

RS: 5

SE: 2

PT: 3.5 (source 2 points didn’t give clear relation of robots to additive manu...)

PT: 5

US: 3.5

Total: 24

Shahrzad-Sample 3

2024-09-20 12:24:46 UTC

Source selection: 5

Research skill: 3.5

SE: 5

PT: The first key point is not clear3.5

PT: 3.5

UoS:3.5

Total: 24

Nathan 3

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 12:28:27 UTC

Source Selection: 5

Research Skills: 3.5

Source Evaluation: 5

Processing text: 5

Use of Sources: 3.5

Leah - sample 3

ngocnguyen48 — 2024-09-20 12:28:57 UTC

Source selection: 5

Research skill: 2

Source evaluation: 3.5

Processing text: 3.5

Use of source: 5

sample 2

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 13:16:24 UTC

sample 3

LeedsStudyGroup — 2024-09-20 13:17:09 UTC