AAR680 External Crit 2 by Azhan Abdul Aziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2 Post a session photo AND Share comments by the group panel, according to the following categories: 1) site planning, 2) internal space planning, 3) others (services/ massing/ drawing etc). Thank you. en-us 2014-12-13 15:31:53 UTC 2026-02-11 21:46:25 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/smiley.jpg Wan Muhammad Ammar bin Azman (Luxury Collectible Piano) wanammar235 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926547482 Panel comments:
1) Site Planning
- Consider on bus park, pathway cover.
- Don't forget to double check on grid and columns later on.

2) Internal Space Planning
- Define paid(private) and free(public) area, make the Terrace (open corridor) as public exhibition so that people can interact with surrounding landscaping.
- Shifting Surau with Gallery Store, utilize Surau, design the surau well and special.
- Revise more on Cafe, blend and interact with Plaza, design it like a boutique cafe.
- Check and revise on double and 3-volume impact, make it function more.
- Move Control Room to Ground Floor.
- Switch position of Meeting Room with Curator's Room, and revise the Offices' natural lighting and ventilation.
- Make the Hotel Rooms in linear flow, and revise the linkage area of Accomodation to the right-wing building (Gallery, a sneak-peek to the Exhibition).

3) Others
- Explore more on wrapping space, skin, based on the terrace(open corridor), playing with the lines, make it elegance.
- Can proceed with details on door and window.
- Think about borrowed landscape and view.
- Play around with extruded space from both wings along the Lobby, act as rhythm.
- Massing of Interior space 3D view-in & view-out.
- Define material use later on, try super-impose with surrounding.]]> 2021-12-03 03:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926547482 Group 3 wanammar235 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926550459 2021-12-03 03:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926550459 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926588550 NORIZAN NOH
(Antique Clock & Watches)
1. SITE PLANNING
    - To allocate Refuse chamber  and pick up flow
    - To relocate motorcycle parking near to building
2. INTERNAL SPACE PLANNING
   - To enhance ventilation and lighting for surau
   - Just 1 ramp for loading bay share by gallery store and restaurant
3. OTHERS
   - To discuss bomba requirement
   - Identify how to enhance facade treatment]]> 2021-12-03 03:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926588550 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926589884 2021-12-03 03:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926589884 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926981731 2021-12-03 09:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926981731 Muhamad Firdaus Shafiq (Scaled ship models) firdausshafiq06 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926983996 External area
- Design better Softscapes and hardscapes and connect with the central area
Internal spaces
- Check spaces size by drawing tables, sofas, etc. into the spaces
- Reconsider void area to functioning area
- escape fire staircase placement for the auditorium (major amendments)
- design hotel room layout with ventilation (openings)
Massing
- Either to blend roof design or contrast roof design
Others
- Featured a 'crows nest' (featured element) for 360 views of the central area ]]> 2021-12-03 09:22:14 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1926983996 Abdul Rahim Bin Ni'Matullah (2017655132) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927001056 Graphic arts (Posters)
1. Site Planning
- Repair arrangement of drop off area, bus parking
2. Internal Space Planning
-Use simpler sequence
-Repair positioning of spaces
3.Massing
-Generate a new one
4. Others
-ready facade design/treatment
-provide sectional drawings]]> 2021-12-03 09:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927001056 MUHAMMAD AIMAN BIN SHAHARUDDIN (2017174279) - Vintage Film Projector https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927018889 1. Site Planning
     - to decorate the promenade with landscape features to attract crowd
     - to reconsider primary, secondary and tertiary access for public

2. Internal Space Planning
     - mini exhibition placement on first floor vs ground floor; prime location due to visitors access and ceiling height
     - no special space/area on ground floor; free, paid and private zoning by floor to be reconsidered
     - max travel distance and dead end in auditorium; to allocate fire exit door in the front and back
     - hotel lobby placement; to reconsider on natural wayfinding without reception area
     - service lift size to accommodate for display item dimensions

3. Massing Studies
     - "A-frame" structure; must relate back to concept and reconsidered
     - spiral staircase to reflects on film reels shape and movement

4. Others
     - using components, movements or mechanism as metaphor to building forms to reflect the chosen items

]]> 2021-12-03 09:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927018889 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927047797 2021-12-03 10:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927047797 Muhammad Shahrol Azimie Bin Ismail (Typewriter) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927072132 1. Site planning
-to consider on drop off(roof) and front landscape.
2. Internal space planning
-Consider auditorium to located at the ground floor
-add exit staircase
-reconsider the placement of reception area
so that not block the view from the atrium
-move surau to 1st floor
-the placement of comercial area must be seen
-combine exhibition(collabs) with exhibition 2 as one space.
3. others
-use componets or mechanism as a facade or building form to reflect the items.

]]> 2021-12-03 10:29:46 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927072132 Muhammad Imran Daud Bin Mohamad Zamani (Swiss Timepieces) mmimrandd https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927566788 Site planning
- To consider single lane for vehicle circulation and include softscape to soften the landscape.
- Drop-off to show steps and ramp.

Internal space planning
- To swap position of retail and wc to maximize activity at ground level.
- To consider fire door at Gallery.
- Security and privacy of accommodation.
- Revise cafe + kitchen layout.
- emphasize linear circulation.

Others
- Do section cut at special space.
- Research of space frame roof.
- To provide interior view to feel quality of space.
- try superimpose our building into the site.
- To provide a human perspective of the massing model.]]> 2021-12-03 15:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1927566788 Nurul Izzaty bt Zulkipli (Antique Fan) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928598759 1. Site Planning
-relocate bus parking by considering building security
-highlight service and visitors' pathway

2. Internal space planning
-reconsider the placement of gallery's workshop, separate room types
-consider correct firefighting by laws  
-increase tropical regionalism strategy into building

3. Massing
-provide more massing studies related with concept

Others
-identify ways to put metaphor into building so it helps to attract people 

]]> 2021-12-04 09:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928598759 MOHD NASIRUDDIN BIN MOHD MANSOR (Vintage Sewing Machine) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928638673  Internal Space Planning
     - reduce space on open area on 1st floor
     - make the gallery bigger
     - provide good view for user when enter into the building
     - hotel ventilation and lighting
     - 1st floor services circulation
-divide circulation for toilet and gallery
- service integrate with main building



]]> 2021-12-04 10:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928638673 NASHARUDDIN BIN KAMARUDDIN (VINTAGE BRASS MUSICAL INSTRUMENT) nasharuddin1999 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928795291 1) Site Planning
- placement of the fountain need to be put near the crowd.

2)Internal Space Planning
-relocate the auditorium at the ground floor instead of the first floor
- the placement of the commercial area must be seen from the main entrance to attract crowd.
-the placement of the reception area for security.
- the space for more than 6 people need to have 2 exit door.

3)Others
-explore more on the roof design to make it more attractive]]> 2021-12-04 14:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1928795291 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929185683 Muhammad Fahim Bin Ramle
(Vintage Supercar Engine)

Site Planning
-To consider connection from drop off to the main entrance.
-consider pathway from buses lay by to the entrance
-insert more detail on landscaping

Internal Space Planning
-consider lift access to auditorium. connecting auditorium n offices with vertical access.
-revise kitchen n cafe layout.
Revise the services connection to other spaces]]> 2021-12-05 03:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929185683 MUHAMMAD ROSHAIDI BIN RAMLY (MALAY TRADITIONAL WEAPON) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929189031 External
- improve site planning
-change road direction

Internal
-make a simple layout
-make a close building
-building security
-change indoor dining
-separate retail with dining
-special staircase inside gallery
-conducive and convenience viewing angle for auditorium
-improve accommodation layout


]]> 2021-12-05 03:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929189031 MOHAMMAD SYAZWAN SHAH BIN ROSALI (2019290238) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929198998 Circulation
1. Add 1 more Disable parking (at least 2 disable parking)
2. Indicate the vehicle arrow for site circulation

Planning
1. Add 1 more staircase for accomodation to fulfill BOMBA requirements that need at least 2 staircases for accomodation
2. Relocate the disposal house in the setback line.

Building design
1. Treat the facade design (view from Jalan Seri Ahmad Said)
2. Roof design for accomodation need to be the same & not to contra to the main building]]> 2021-12-05 04:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929198998 Muhammad Luqman Hakimi bin Roslan (Gramophone/Record Player) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929226254 Site Planning
-To reduce junction of ingress/egress at east of site
-To change egress of services road
-To provide drop off for hotel
-To provide walkway for bus passengers
-Courtyard needs to blend in more with building

First Floor
-To provide adequate fire escape door for indoor spaces 
-To provide sitting area at walkways

Second floor 
-To provide balcony for workshop area for more opening
-To relate all floors with water features or landscaping

Section
-To provide rainwater collection at central of circular plan block
-To explore more on roof layers/staggered style]]> 2021-12-05 05:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929226254 Ahmad Haridz Bin Hasan (Gunpla and figurines) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929248278 Site Planning
-to move middle parking so that middle road align with drop off road
-to change pedestrian entrance straight to plaza
-to change from 1 statue to 2
Ground Floor
-to adapt current plan according to the optional plan made
-staircase gallery to the mezzanine floor of the gallery
First Floor
-to propose linkage/bridge from main block to accommodation block
-to change access to auditorium and seminar room
-to flip auditorium planning inside
Section
-to make the facade longer and reach the ground
-rc flat roof make gutter

]]> 2021-12-05 06:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929248278 Nur Iffah Bt Ismadi (2019290342) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929254273 1) SITE PLANNING
-recheck bus circulation 
-added more tree on outdoor landscape 
-allocate refuse chamber and providing layby  
- extend diorama area to avoid visitor directly to exhibition area (according to exhibition flow)
- use bubble lift 
- providing TNB layby 
- indoor cafe counters to design properly
- OKU toilet 
   -allocate OKU entrance
   -1 OKU toilet is enough
- rearrange circulation to toilet and  kitchen area 
- providing control room 
2) 1ST FLOOR PLAN
- recheck running distance for emergency staircase
3) SECTION 
- redesign roof 
- detail drawing 
- technical study on roof]]> 2021-12-05 06:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929254273 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929254935 2021-12-05 06:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929254935 Nurul Fatiha Rusli (Board Games) tearusli19 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929256594 External
- improve landscaping and road direction
- add another roundabout to assist visitors  with U-turn 

Internal
- Admin can be placed on 1st floor 
- Place all seminar room on the ground floor
- Draw façade detail on the plans
- Wider spill area 
- Define each spaces on planes by façade, screen or wall edge
- Relocate the staircase placement 
- Enclosed design for stair case 
- Main entrance needs to be inviting and placed at the corner to continue the curvature of the round drop-off
- Design a majestic staircase as a focal interior design


]]> 2021-12-05 06:21:32 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929256594 Muaz Bin Ahmad Marzukhi https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929308630 External
- Parking circulation ok.
- Make use of landmark elements at the frontage of main access to the site.
- Landscape element (Gundam Plaza) well planned.

Internal
- Entrance area need to be improved in celebrating the space elements.
- Entrance image need to be highlighted more. 
- Few replacement of the spaces in lobby need to be done (reception area and etc).
- Implement the uses of grand staircase as a part of the lobby space element.
- Guard room/control room should be replaced with the server room to make it nearer to the service lobby for maximum supervision of the loading bay area.
- Musola need to be made bigger of size.
- The prep area can be relocated nearer to the auditorium.
- Auditorium need to be study again in term of the angle of stairs and the suitable chair seating angle for better viewing experience.
- Hotel floor all okay
- Fire requirement looks well planned.
- Overall comment by panel is that the works is well done and is on the track. Just a few things need to be put together. ]]> 2021-12-05 08:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929308630 MUHAMMAD SHAFIQ BIN MOHD ZAMRI (VINTAGE GUITAR GALLERY) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929404086 SPACE PLANNING
- retail on the outside make sure it is inside of the building. not seperated.
-design a proper busking area. if not  at the outdoor dining, it can be at the courtyard or the courtyard can be the outdoor dining
-simplify the circulation on the hotel and the facilities.
- fit in all the furnitures in all spaces to make sure it is really fit in.

SITE PLANNING
- parking is okay but re check on the dimension especially on the corners.
-simplify the pedestrian walk

OTHERS
- fix the section. detail up.
-do not make the elevation look rigid
-staircase design do not make it cliche.]]> 2021-12-05 10:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929404086 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929507807 2021-12-05 13:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929507807 Amir Afiq Bin Azlin (2017655052) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929542630 -Site plan and ground floor plan 
○ recheck the bus circulation, relocate the bus parking
○ Allocate the refuse chamber facing Perodua and provide layby
○ Switchthe space between the Surau (both male & female), Toilets (Handicap, female & male) and Security + Server Room

-First Floor
○ Adjust Vintage Club Management Office Space. Make it bigger and smoother the circulation flows
○ Widen the corridor infront of Vintage Club Management Office
○ Create a space for slides

-Section
○Design roof (study AirAsiaHQ)]]> 2021-12-05 13:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929542630 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929544852 Mohamad Raihan bin Mohamad Rafi (2017366637)

1. Site Planning
- provide disabled parking
- allocate ramp for disabled
- allocate bus lay-by

2. Space Planning
- relocate position of public toilet
- relocate position of curator room
- too much circulation on 2nd floor
- consider natural ventilation lobby
- design accomodation room layout

]]> 2021-12-05 13:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929544852 Muhammad Aideel Bin Adenan https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929562270 1. Site planning
-to consider the circulation of the site
2. Internal space planning
-Consider retail to put in front of site
-Consider the place of reception area
-Replacing surau and toilet to suitable place
-Main gallery should locate near to attraction space
-Change place of indoor and outdoor dining near to nice view area
3. others
-Massing building need to be related to concept used
-Need to consider column on plan

]]> 2021-12-05 14:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929562270 Engku Nazmi Bin Engku Mat Nasir (Vintage Keris) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929629262 1. Site Planning
- To reallocate only one loading/unloading bay at one point.
- Make it parking at one area only.
- Provide more green at frontage due to restaurant at there.
- Try to create untypical mini amphitheater.

2. Internal Space Planning
- Make it 3 an axis line as point where people can stand and see something else in building.
- Organize retail and make it accessible.
- Make it surau more interactive.
- Create center space as open event space to be use for seminar, auditorium event.
- Rearrange gallery store not at frontage.

3. Others
- Recheck MSB size according to the project.
- Rearrange genset beside the TNB.
- High up the water tank not at the same level with room hotel.
- Recheck Bomba requirement.
- Double check grid and column.
- Study more on roof design.
- Massing try to understand the impact of solid surface(how people react, see, feel and use that spaces).]]> 2021-12-05 15:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929629262 MUHAMMAD SYAKIR IMAN BIN YAMAN - vintage camera https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929637209 1. site planning -
-reconsider primary, secondary and tertiary access for public

2. internal space planning
- control the hotel guest by providing other lobby and entrance
- or make compartment on lobby  - roller shutter
-relocated the shop nearer to the entrance
- simplify circulation


3. other
using camera as metaphor to building forms/design to reflect the chosen items






]]> 2021-12-05 15:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1929637209 NUR AINA FIKRIYAH BINTI MOHD ARIFFIN (Handbags) 2017655138 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930138950 1. site planning
- Parking circulation ok.

2. internal space planning
- Consider fire staircase. Change spiral staircase to bounded fire staircase.
- Hotel security at midnight. Designated entrance for hotel only without maneuvering around the gallery
- Separate hotel and gallery reception for security at night
- Reconsider location of workshop and retail at the front.
- Reconsider location of lift and escalator. Design the escalator at the center of courtyard. Lift locate beside the staircase. 


3. others
- Explore entrance statement. Incorporate the metaphor 'bags' into the building]]> 2021-12-06 01:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930138950 DIYANAH BT ISA MIKAIL AMIN SULAIMAAN 2019359045 (VINTAGE GUITARS) diyanahisa https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930161189 SITE PLANNING
- To adjust entrance ingress egress on the east side aligned with the road below
- To design main drop off & all secondary entry to building (welcoming)
- To design amphitheatre space's landscape a bit more freely
- Suggestion to design amphitheatre space as a guitar shape

INTERNAL SPACE PLANNING
GROUND FLOOR
- Adjust zoning, consider reception lobby for accomodations

FIRST FLOOR & SECOND FLOOR
- Lift lobby & prefunction area too big (adjust the size)
- Adjust size of hotel lounge

SECTION
- To play around with roof using wire rod ( reflecting the elements of the guitar)
- To detail up section ground

OTHERS
- Play around more with massing. Idea of horizontal & vertical fins reflecting the concept is good but need to explore more of the idea
- Using materials that reflect the guitar (aluminium/copper etc)
]]> 2021-12-06 02:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930161189 Nur Dayana Basirah Binti Rudy Shahriman 2017513099 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930180469 1. Site Planning
  • Recheck the access into building for bikes display at galleries and plaza & bike access into garage
  • Reconsider to not design an island plaza, the plaza should be free to connect with parkings

2. Internal Space Planning
  • Recheck on services spaces position, TNB should be located near to loading bay
  • Consider increased headroom of spiral ramp on lobby and hotel lobby area
  • Straighten the corner of standard room
  • WC should be move to back, allowing other public spaces to be access at front 
  • Consider on the ceiling height for spaces to be connected with shell roof

3. Others
  • Improve on the technicality, more studies on resolving the building to work
  • The roof at main gallery or centre should be the highest compared to other wings 
 

]]> 2021-12-06 02:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930180469 Muhammad Nafiz bin Majdan (2017333639) (Star wars) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930309676 1. Site Planning
- Detail up the hardscape and softscape of the public green area
- reconsider the placement of staff parking
2. Internal spaces
-  Redesign the main grand spiral staircase
- Lobby can be reorganized more properly to the get the feeling of the items
- Too much circulation that can be used as functional spaces in the building
- Placement of the fire exit staircase should be reconsidered
- detail up the plan with the furniture to see how the space worked properly
- reconsidered the circulation to the lobby hotel
- Detail up the layout of the hotel room
- The bridge can be span throughout the building to create the vibes of the movie itself

3. Massing
- Massing try to replicated the precedent study for the roof design
- the space can be extruded to create certain roof design


]]> 2021-12-06 03:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930309676 Muhamed izzmil bukhary bin izat bukhary https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930321784 site planning 

ground floor

- propose second drop off for lobby hotel 

- enhance lobby entrance (more welcoming) 

- use more glass panel so that people can see through

First floor

-  Gallery size need to consider (too big)
-   To provide bench/ green area at walkways

]]> 2021-12-06 03:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680ExternalCrit2/wish/1930321784