https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w en-us 2022-03-22 16:37:33 UTC 2022-03-24 13:46:48 UTC hello@padlet.com vkosmickigutierrez https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2107979182 Example: I think that the author makes the choice to.... because......]]> 2022-03-22 16:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2107979182 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111869822 Frantically use indents all throughout the passage more than necessary to break up the passage]]> 2022-03-24 13:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111869822 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111879767 The author only uses end punctuation and doesn’t use quotations to initiate dialogue between characters.]]> 2022-03-24 13:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111879767 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111883762 It doesn’t really have an pauses to show different times in the passage & they don’t use quotations when looking at dialogue ]]> 2022-03-24 13:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111883762 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111886200 The author doesn’t put any pauses in the passage because I believe they want their story to flow from each point very quickly and suddenly without anything bogging it down.]]> 2022-03-24 13:44:23 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111886200 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111886547 The author used indentation to show dialogue and short sentences ]]> 2022-03-24 13:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111886547 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111887509 She uses a lot of shorter sentences and longer sentences mixed together. Incorporates commas into a lot of sentences. She uses very descriptive words that help the reader kind of imagine what the characters are doing. ]]> 2022-03-24 13:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111887509 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111887945 The author made this type of choice to show that he didn’t have to have the quotations on who is talking. more wanted the reader to just read the scenery and feels as they are a 3rd person viewer. ]]> 2022-03-24 13:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111887945 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111888061 throughout the passage the author doesn’t use quotation marks when the characters are talking. he just uses punctuation at the end of the sentences. ]]> 2022-03-24 13:45:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111888061 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111889860 There aren't quotes in the dialogue, they are all sort of shoved together showing no break in time or change in scene. Everything is in order but it's hard to know when a scene changes. The indents are like quotes for the dialogue. ]]> 2022-03-24 13:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111889860 https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111891466 The author doesn’t use quotations to show dialogue but instead uses indents. The author does this because this isn’t supposed to feel like a novel but instead like a conversation that you’re watching/in ]]> 2022-03-24 13:46:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vkosmickigutierrez/sk55599t7wfcs81w/wish/2111891466