11/4 (2A) DO NOW: What I've Completed, Still Need to Do, and Today's Writing Goal by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks Review your progress on your draft so far and compare it to the Checklist Questions in front of you. Then make a post with the following: 1) A summary of what you've drafted so far, 2) A list of tasks you still need to do, and 3) The writing goal/s you plan to complete during this class (must be measurable and can reasonably be accomplished in a full class block). 4) If you feel that you're finished with your Rough Draft then your goal should be "I need a peer workshop conference" en-us 2024-11-04 13:12:30 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:32 UTC hello@padlet.com David Rivetta https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200584880 I’ve done my intro my summary and my intro to my rhetorical analysis. I need to work on my first and second body paragraphs and start on my third

]]> 2024-11-04 14:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200584880 Brenda https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200588686 I’ve done my rough draft of 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit it and add a bit more .

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  • I drafted my introduction, summary, intro of rhetorical analysis and two body paragraphs.

  • I still need to finish my third body paragraph

  • My writing goal is to finish my third body paragraph during this class

    • ]]>     2024-11-04 14:17:41 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200590126     Inigo Gonzales https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591167 I have written my six paragraphs, but I want to edit a portion of my summary and rhetorical analysis paragraphs.


    Done today: With Julian, we workshopped our essays, I explained and wrote down some of the critiques I had with his writing. I almost read through his draft twice, and gave possible ways to rewrite some of his paragraphs. Also gave feedback on how to redo his intro, to perform more. He gave me some critiques on how to fix my choppy writing.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591167     Unique. T 1135042 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591462 Ive done my summary, intro to rhetorical analysis and my first body paragraph. I still need to finish my last two body paragraphs and my intro. My writing goal today is to finish my last to body paragraph in one class period to leave more time to focus on my intro

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591462     Keylly Vinan https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591784 I've done my rough draft of the 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit it.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200591784     Nylah Tirado https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200592279 I've done my intro and my 1st body paragraph I'm working on my other body paragraphs now. I plan to at least finish my second body paragraph and hopefully get started on my third one.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:18:51 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200592279     Jaidyn https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200594480 I have drafted all of my introduction, summary and beginning of my rhetorical analysis. My goal this class is to finish the rest of my essay today.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200594480     Bella Gomez-stafford 1085785 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200595730 I have done my Intro and my summary of my film, also my intro to my rhetorical analysis. I still need to finish my body paragraphs. My goal is to finish at least the main ideas of my body paragraphs.


    At the end class I have finished with getting my main ideas for each paragraphs to finish faster when working on it at home for the Rhetorical Analysis part of the rough draft also finished 1 more paragraph.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200595730     Julian https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200596439 I'm done with the rough draft, just going to look over it as I haven't yet

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:20:58 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200596439     ANASTASIA 2139586 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200596915

  • i completed my introduction, summary of the text, and the introduction to my rhetorical analysis.

  • i need to finish my body paragraphs.

  • today i will jot down all of the info i want to include in my body paragraphs and then add in more emotion to make it sound better.



    • ]]>     2024-11-04 14:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200596915     Charly https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200597086 I have completed all of my 6 paragraphs. I just need to edit both my introductions. my goal for this class period is to finish editing my introductions.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:21:22 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200597086     lia a https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200598721 I have my basic rough draft done with minimal edits in an outline. I need to transfer my work into an essay template and I hope to complete more edits and finalize my rough draft throughout this period.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200598721     Kennedy https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200600098 I have finished my Rhetorical Analysis intro and summary, and i want to start on my body paragraphs

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200600098     Bryan Lopez https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200601027 I have done my introduction. I need to finish my intro of rhetorical analysis and start my body paragraphs.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 14:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200601027     Zulaikha https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200726014 I came to class with my draft finished, but I knew I had to make a lot of edits for it to make sense. So I did a workshop with Brenda and she gave me a new perspective on my essay and where I need improvement. As well as the parts that don't make sense coming from somebody that didn't watch the same movie as me.

    ]]>     2024-11-04 15:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200726014     Daylin https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/sjtoowlevt1z4lks/wish/3200920671 So far I've completed my introduction, summary, intro of rhetorical analysis, 1st body paragraph and 2nd body paragraph. I am currently working on my 3rd body paragraph. My goal is to finish the last paragraph, read over what I have so far and make some changes.

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