https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021 Feedback about domestic violence en-us 2021-11-14 22:32:03 UTC 2025-11-09 02:46:55 UTC hello@padlet.com gkahlon https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1889729369
Give some feedback!]]> 2021-11-14 22:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1889729369 choward109 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1904091552 Hi Gurnaaz, I know you have been away so you've missed some time and feedback that has been for the whole class.

Home Page: You need your photo on that page. Also think about changing the background image as I'm not sure what a mountain has to do with domestic violence. Also a large title with your topic would be a better home page. Think about it. This it the home page! People need to know what your topic is at a glance. Think of the websites you visit.

The first three paragraphs/statistics on your home page are great. I think they would work better as a mini infographic that sits to the side. Use the column feature to have the introduction of yourself on the left and then that info on the right.

Photo essay: Where's your infographic? Also your photo essay needs to tall more of a story. It's almost there. What images could depict what positive outcome you want. Perhaps it's a family and/or women getting help, attending therapy or even a happy family shot.

Information: Still missing one question and paragraph. Also put some more images throughout the website! It will make it more visually appealing.

Call to Action: There is nothing!!!!!!

Bibliography: This is just links. It needs to be using the proper reference style. Cite this For Me

You have three more days. It is doable, but you need to get a wriggle on!

]]> 2021-11-21 06:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1904091552 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1905241624 It was amazing but when u are presenting on Wednesday that u make sure to go into more depth and detail but otherwise it was great.😀]]> 2021-11-22 04:06:58 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1905241624 jfalls3 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907515904 Apart from raising awareness what else can be done to help?]]> 2021-11-23 03:47:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907515904 jfalls3 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907517657 Lots of sad facts - If drugs and alcohol is to blame in many cases. What else can be done to take these problems out of the equations.]]> 2021-11-23 03:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907517657 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907520601 What interested you to do this topic on domestic violence?]]> 2021-11-23 03:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907520601 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907526915 2021-11-23 03:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907526915 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907529466 I really like the photo essay and how you made it into a story to represent domestic violence.]]> 2021-11-23 03:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907529466 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907532452 Are there any other ways that you can help women that are experiencing domestic violence?]]> 2021-11-23 03:59:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907532452 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907537420 You described that drugs and alcohol are some of the causes of domestic violence, so, what can be done to get rid of drugs and alcohol to decrease the amount of domestic violence happening?]]> 2021-11-23 04:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1907537420 https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1909535055 This site looks fantastic.]]> 2021-11-24 01:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/gkahlon/showcase2021/wish/1909535055