External Crit 01 by Azhan Abdul Aziz

External Crit 01 by Azhan Abdul Aziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01 Kindly share your external crit comments here. Thank you. en-us 2015-12-28 03:27:30 UTC 2023-06-12 05:55:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/35371680/04cc417f834961b99d2cb17adc05794750180e3a/005059f518803f3bd89c88c397d4285b.jpg HARNASYWA ASYIQIN BINTI HAKIMI 2017654982 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530281859 1. design landscape parking instead of normal parking space to refine the concept
2. separate service from the main building
3. design ingress terus boleh drop off instead of kena round parking dulu
4. try to expand the idea on ramp connecting the split levels around the building instead of at the atrium only
5. further study on the atrium whether its going to be enclosed or natural ventilated
6. design accommodation area - avoid users from feeling confined
7. place boat facilities room near the path to marina

]]> 2021-05-17 07:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530281859 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530282641 Nur Adriana Binti Sulaiman
2017655108]]> 2021-05-17 07:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530282641 KHAIREEN ADILAH ABDUL KARIM 2017655018 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530424335 - bentuk building berterabur
- tukar parking kepada 60/30 deg / besarkan jalan 1 way > 3.5m
- ubah saiz bilik
- taambah tangga
- entrance odd
- elak irregular geometrical untuk spaces
- kurangkan retail]]> 2021-05-17 08:38:53 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530424335 Muhammad Afiq Adlan bin Abdul Haris Nasution https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530479487 2017654794]]> 2021-05-17 09:01:32 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530479487 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530541248 Haris Danial bin Mohd Makhzan
2017654942]]> 2021-05-17 09:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530541248 Muhammad Danial bin Mohd Fadhli mdmfrad https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530841289 2017654856
dari jamboard
- decide mana frontage
- entrance yg mana paling elok
- pedestrian walkway from palace
- redundant space
- placement of space
- site plan in a larger picture
- reserve land can & can't do
- arus air di jeti utk berth]]> 2021-05-17 12:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1530841289 Mohamad Ilyasa Bin Shafie https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1531002611 2017655128
comment from panel
- buat entrance lagi grand, buat macam porte cochere
- tak setuju dengan idea untuk bawa public masuk ke dalam melalui atas.
-concept implementation kurang di dalam design
- kalau nak bawa public masuk ke dalam pastikan user ada tujuan, reward masuk dalam macam makan di restaurant
-pengunaan geometry terlalu banyak, kurangkan pengunaan axis, buat axis yang bold supaya space organization nampak jelas
- space planning ok
- ]]> 2021-05-17 12:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1531002611 Aiman Haziq Hashimi https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539408141 1.waterfront-neighbouring context,jarak ke air
2.programs- T20 darat, T20 from water, recreational or leisure
3.lobby in the middle-can access from drop off and marina
4.berth- current sungai
5.client- staff,management,corporations
6.precedent studies- pilih yacth club
7.entrance- must be grand
8.marina-arah bot berthing, jalan to slipway
9.SOA- kena letak dalam setiap presentation.
10.narrative- storyline of the building
11.focus on one primary programs- water sports or etc
12.berth- long or short term]]> 2021-05-19 13:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539408141 NOR AISYAH BINTI MUSA noraisyahmusa99 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539497764 2017654908
- Enhance more the concept on site planning and activities for the non-memberships
- Use pilotis for the building (save energy/not blocking the view to the river)
- Maximise the green ideas on site]]> 2021-05-19 13:32:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539497764 HANA KAMALIAH MOHD HAZLAN https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539562826 . great idea and concept tapi implementation dalam design tu kurang/ takut2/ terikat sangat dgn soa
. size untuk the staggered multipurpose hall should vary to fit into multiple needs, bukan seragam
. baik segregate je terus block (plaza) untuk multi purpose areas (halls, green area, lounge, decking) dari satu lagi block (other facilities)
. utilise penggunaan bridging untuk sambung kan plaza tersebut ke other areas
. kawasan services banyak negative space
. jarak parking dari ke entrance jauh, sedikit berbahaya untuk pejalan kaki untuk lalu]]> 2021-05-19 13:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539562826 SITI MAISARAH JAMIL https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539571531 2017654876
Comments from External Panel:
1. Restaurant - open to public not limited the access to members only
2. Retails placement - put somewhere that more visible from the entrance.
3. Add exit staircase for fire escape.
4. Change the swimming pool to landscape pool which more suitable with the accommodation capacity.
5. Stress more on longitudinal sections. Always start with sections.
6. Modify the first floor and second floor.
7. Marina part - refer to Perancang Bandar untuk pesisir pantai tengok setback (air pasang per bani)
8. Marina arrangement near to riverside not floating at the central of river.]]> 2021-05-19 13:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539571531 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539574076 FATIN ZULAIKA BINTI ZAMAWI ]]> 2021-05-19 13:47:54 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539574076 NUR ARYNA ISHAK https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539601858 Comments:
-Justify why part of the form tilted that way
-suggest double volume lobby and shift the multipurpose hall
-no meeting room/spaces near waterside of the lobby
-coffee shop+kitchen+ places for users to enjoy the view
-calm = horizontal element]]> 2021-05-19 13:53:45 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539601858 SHYELANIE ADENAN shyelanie211 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539655736 Comments :
i. FOR ZONING - Zoning of spaces can be seen clearly & exclusivity of the yacht club members can be seen clearly.
ii. FOR ZONING - differentiate the zoning based on 3d form, how to show zoning in massing form.
iIi. FOR MASSING - how to make the 3d form recognizable for people who are not familiar with the existence of the yacht club there. (noticeable)
iv. FOR IDEA CONCEPT - Good explanation & implementation of concept (aquatecture) study more and research case study - define the pros and cons of the concept & idea.]]> 2021-05-19 14:04:43 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539655736 Adzim Hadi Zaharin siradzim https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539696747 Comments:
1. how yacht club members that are coming form the river "see" the yacht club.
2. good concept but the implementation is tilted towards the public and not the exclusivity of the yacht club members.
3. Position of the core is located on the public area and public can go circulate the building.
4. Position of ingress and egress shows towards parking.
5. Needs a form or planning that shows the users to the local context and a landmark to show the location of the building.]]> 2021-05-19 14:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539696747 NURSYAHIRAH BALQIS BINTI MAZLAN https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539782143 2017654764]]> 2021-05-19 14:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1539782143 NUR ILYANA ABDUL RAHMAN https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1540294319 1. parking and vehicular access is ok and suitable.
2. try drawing on cad to see the scale and sizes better
3. consider more open on higher level because the building might be too dark indoor
4. be careful of extra spaces (check soa again and try designing less walkway to avaiod waste space)
5. try compacting the spaces ]]> 2021-05-19 16:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1540294319 Nur Aqilah Humaira Binti Mohd Hazmi https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1540341669 1. Distance from entrance to parking quite far
2. Consider walkable area for user from parking lot to building
3. Start to design landscape
4. Consider shape of multipurpose hall
5. Tunjuk bedroom layout
6. Draw on cad to see the scale]]> 2021-05-19 16:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1540341669 ILYA AMIRAH ISMAIL ALJUHARI https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1541143099 Space planning:
1. Emit three parking space at the main entrance to expand the drop off area.
2. Change the road lane for the service road (avoid creating junction).
3. Good parking circulation.
4. Add a drop off area for the multipurpose hall.
5. Add another staircase near the accommodation.
6. Multipurpose hall should be two-storey height/8metre height.
7. Nice space planning shape complementing the river line.
Design:
1. Comprehensive concept study and implementation in design.
2. Strong core and axis.
3. Adviced to approach modern building form and facade despite traditional style.]]> 2021-05-19 19:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1541143099 NUR SILMI ADILAH BINTI MUSSALLIM https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1541977054 1. Show more of the concept (interconnection) in plan
2. use the setback area infront of the river (connect with the concept)
3. Berth design must follow the river current ( air pasang surut)
4. Multipurpose hall on 1st floor- need to consider the visitors movement and services
5. Rethink on the "river restaurant" idea due to different condition of river
6. Add on a tower for visibility
7. Connect building with existing walkway, create a river walkway]]> 2021-05-20 01:37:27 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1541977054 RUSYAIDA HANNAN HASBULLAH https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542165385 · Good design guidelines for yin yang concept

· Add spaces which are in public category in bubble diagram

· Images of dry berth and wet berth to give clients better picture

· Tropical regionalism includes passive design strategies

· Efficient arrangements of spaces allowing circulation of public vs members

· Consider the swimming pool above the multipurpose hall

· Design the multipurpose hall layout if columns are to be inserted in the interior

· Suggests pocket parking

· More design concepts can be enhanced

]]> 2021-05-20 02:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542165385 ZULYCA BINTI ABIDIN zulycabintiabidin https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542289210 As'saalam, based on the comments.
- Explain more about concept "sense of place"
- OKU parking must near to the lobby.
-Simply shape of drop off area(floor plan)
- Decide the lobby want open or closed (aircond)
-Internal circulation must related to other spaces.
- Add on lift core and staircase.
-Exchanged the spaces such as gym kena berhampiran changing room.
-Linen and laundry jgn dekat dengan lift.
- Retails area "ceriakan" lagi

]]> 2021-05-20 03:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542289210 NADIA UMAIRAH HELLMY https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542362446 Comments on sticky note inside jamboard]]> 2021-05-20 04:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1542362446 MIRZA AMANI ZAHARI https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1550239001 - services should not be placed at a prominent place as architect strongly disagreed that view facing bridge is a negative view but actually a good view or perspective from the road of the bridge to the site.
- services should be placed behind shop lots especially refuse house because it is going to be a very dirty area, why mind showing them to the bridge...
- entrance doesnt work because it will cause traffic jam, get it to be direct with entrance and parking to create "plaza"
- work on the roof to enhance the dynamic shape of the building
- that is not radial organisation, that is more to trilinear shape
- good placement of retails
- have potential but might easily flop
- spaces other than that is ok]]> 2021-05-22 16:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/aar680Bexternalcrti01/wish/1550239001