Are the ‘results’ sensible -  am I over-using quotes? Should this section be more succinct?

The discussion is not completed but do you think the key issues for discussion are the right ones

What do you think of the title?

How should I conclude?

Journal of Agricultural Education and Extension
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Sample paper from JAEE
Pant, L.P., 2012. Learning and innovation competence in agricultural and rural development. The Journal of agricultural education and extension, 18(3), pp.205-230

Does it present okay as a 'case study'?

Will the 'results' be adequate in terms of student quotes about their learning?

What key issues would you like to see emphasised in the discussion?

Does the paper flow?

How can I make the paper flow better? 

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from a colleague

5 recent articles on professional development and ag extension - part of its core focus.
It is the 'key' journal for my discipline and I need to build a reputation in it.

2nd choice is 'Reflective practice' as related article from UCC - Halton et al (2007) Reflective learning in social work education: researching student experiences 

Two sample papers from JAEE
Pant, L.P., 2012. Learning and innovation competence in agricultural and rural development. The Journal of agricultural education and extension, 18(3), pp.205-230
Kelly, N., Bennett, J.M. and Starasts, A., 2017. Networked learning for agricultural extension: a framework for analysis and two cases. The Journal of Agricultural Education and Extension, 23(5), pp.399-414.

My Guidelines
1.6000 wds
2. Structured abstract 270 words
3.Make structure flow from purpose - Introduction, rationale & literature, methodology; results, discussion and conclusions
4. Write clearly and succinctly for the reader
5.Keep the hypothesis central - no divergences
6. Welcome feedback and act on it
7. Use JAEE templates for doc and figures/tables

Theoretical Framework
Educational concepts and definitions
Literature Review