https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69 Let's take some time to honor our work and celebrate our writers! We will be hearing clssmates arguments and will be spending some time together in class to notice and note what AMAZED you and what you think could be done better as we continue to write our arguments! en-us 2021-05-10 15:45:04 UTC 2023-06-23 11:25:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f973.png https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875584 I think you did an amazing job Hazel! I love how you brought up some background knowledge of your own.  ]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875584 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875621 I liked how she used knowledge from her head and from the text]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875621 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875884 I 100% appreciated your willingness to share! Your essay was strong in many ways. In class I mentioned that you supported your points with text evidence and your own background knowledge. I also thought it was great that you never used the word "I".]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509875884 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876218 I like that you explained everything in a matter that it is specific.]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876218 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876248 The text evidence and background information was good]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876248 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876518 it's fine video games are a sport]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:26 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876518 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876599 I love the details you putted in there and i loved how you the text from the background ]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509876599 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509877008 Love the details and you make a point on The NBA 2k 20 XD]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509877008 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509877450 I like how you brought up your own background Knowledge. ]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509877450 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509878388 I do like how you have color in your paragraph, and how you used text evidences, and I just loved it:) ]]> 2021-05-10 16:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509878388 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509879937 i love all of the details good job hazel you did awesome.]]> 2021-05-10 16:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509879937 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509886996 I like your reasons but i still think its a sport]]> 2021-05-10 16:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509886996 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509893795 I like how you gave lot's of details to go along with your reasons.]]> 2021-05-10 16:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509893795 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897040  i like  reasons they where good but i still think its should still be a sport

]]> 2021-05-10 16:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897040 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897326 i love the details!]]> 2021-05-10 16:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897326 gc5000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897676 it was ok]]> 2021-05-10 16:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509897676 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509901884 NICE JOB ]]> 2021-05-10 16:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509901884 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509907554 wait your alive]]> 2021-05-10 16:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509907554 hc3400 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910350 I really liked your details, and the font it was really good.]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910350 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910368 i liked the transitions very eye catching essay ]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910368 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910680 sick but i think video games are a sport]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910680 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910739 how you guys talking you guys died]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910739 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910861 i love the deatalis ]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:20 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910861 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910930 OMG I LOVE IT!!! it was so convincing I really think you did it good i love how you used text evidences and a link:)]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509910930 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509911196 I love everything about it! so much details and information and also the link was very helpful!]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509911196 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509911866 It sounded very professional and the font was very nice to look at.]]> 2021-05-10 16:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509911866 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509915608 2021-05-10 16:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509915608 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509916320 I loved it because it sounded professional and i think video games should be a sport]]> 2021-05-10 16:19:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509916320 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509922543  I really like your reasoning and points they were really strong.]]> 2021-05-10 16:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509922543 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509931997 I like how you put in the link to the article. Also I liked your strong reasoning.]]> 2021-05-10 16:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509931997 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933005 It was really good yet I can't decide what to congratulate from it.]]> 2021-05-10 16:22:42 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933005 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933333 Iris,
I so appreciated your willingness to share your essay. It was a great example. Two of my favorite things were your smooth and sophisticated transitions and your strong final sentence. Well Done!]]> 2021-05-10 16:22:46 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933333 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933695 i like how your points were strong]]> 2021-05-10 16:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509933695 gc5000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935000 good job]]> 2021-05-10 16:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935094 i liked the details ]]> 2021-05-10 16:23:05 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935094 js1600 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935773 i loved how you phrased thing and your transition words

]]> 2021-05-10 16:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509935773 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509936271 i like your reasons

]]> 2021-05-10 16:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509936271 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509936512 i liked all the deatails and then u where vary smooth at writting]]> 2021-05-10 16:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1509936512 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081072 i think your reasons are valid ]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081072 cw1600 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081073 Knowledge was in that Argument Essay.]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081073 ig3000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081122 Good job,
you did a amazing job i love you did details ]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081122 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081156 i love your reasons and how you made it clear with the other side and i felt that you were confident]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081156 ny2000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081263 You did an amazing job listing your reasons]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:31 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081263 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081370 I like the body paragraphs and they really had good detail in them so you did a good job ]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081370 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081524 Good job i like how you gave reasons and how you worded]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:33 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081524 dr1300 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081808 Grace,
You made sure your reasons were clear and made sense. You didn't read to fast which made it easier to hear what you were saying. Over all your essay was very neat and clear.]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514081808 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514082319 𝕀 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕒𝕪 𝕨𝕒𝕤 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕕𝕖𝕥𝕒𝕚𝕝𝕖𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕦𝕤𝕖𝕕  𝕘𝕠𝕠𝕕 𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕟𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕨𝕠𝕣𝕕𝕤.]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514082319 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514082551 I like your text evidence and how you transitioned from reason to reason was good.]]> 2021-05-11 16:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514082551 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514086000 gooooooooood]]> 2021-05-11 16:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514086000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514086997 Good job u put a lot of details ]]> 2021-05-11 16:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514086997 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094027 Grace,
You did an excellent job with text evidences supporting your position. It is clear that you don't just think video should be a sport. You also think kids should not spend so much time playing them.]]> 2021-05-11 16:12:54 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094027 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094293 I like your reasons why video games shoulld not be a sport]]> 2021-05-11 16:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094293 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094693 good details and information i give it a 12345654/10]]> 2021-05-11 16:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514094693 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514097986 2021-05-11 16:13:45 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514097986 ts1020 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514106588 1,000,000,000 \10]]> 2021-05-11 16:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514106588 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514108019 you have really good details and amazing transitions]]> 2021-05-11 16:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514108019 ig3000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514109539 Good job,
i think you did a wonder full job you did details really good ones ]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:09 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514109539 ny2000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514109717 you did great, I think you listed great reasons, but I think you should have presented your essay]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514109717 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514110126 you did a nice job I like the reasoning ]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514110126 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112429 𝓘 𝓵𝓲𝓴𝓮𝓭 𝓽𝓱𝓪𝓽 𝔂𝓸𝓾  𝓹𝓾𝓽 𝓭𝓮𝓽𝓪𝓲𝓵𝓼 𝓯𝓸𝓻 𝓫𝓸𝓽𝓱 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭 𝓪𝓷𝓭 𝓼𝓱𝓸𝓾𝓵𝓭𝓷'𝓽.

]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112429 dr1300 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112667 Trevon,
Your reading was fluent and you didn't try to rush through, you made sure your argument on the debate was heard. You used nice describing words as well. ]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112667 cw1600 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112926 You told us why and it should be with details.]]> 2021-05-11 16:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514112926 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514113901 Nice job with your reasons ]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514113901 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514115616 i think you did a good job on saying why you dont think that video games should be a sport.]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514115616 ts1020 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514117852 explained why or why not.]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514117852 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118052 #1 YOU DID IT! Do you realize that many students are not yet done!
#2 Your point about needing hydration and good nutrition was unique.]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118052 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118366 I like your reasons ]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118366 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118483 Good job, i really like the reasons and i like how you said it should and should not be a sport Great Job!]]> 2021-05-11 16:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514118483 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514119121 I like each of your reasons for each side. Good Job!]]> 2021-05-11 16:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514119121 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514121749 a thing i would like to point out, is that everyone who said games shouldnt be a sport aren't acknowledging the fact that there are VR games, Games with motion controls and exercising games]]> 2021-05-11 16:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514121749 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514123367 Good job I think you had good reasons]]> 2021-05-11 16:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514123367 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514124121 good job]]> 2021-05-11 16:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514124121 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129545 Good job]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129545 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129588 Good job i really like your details and i like your reasons ]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129588 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129608 nice job it was a long detailed story]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129608 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129644 Good Job! i love your reasons and that you used evidence in your writing about the author and you got it done and i am happy for you and It sounds really grown up.]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129644 ny2000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129677 Good job, I think you wrote a really good job and I think you listed plenty of reasons and text evidence, Good job]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514129677 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514130029 I liked how you used good strong words and evidence to state your opinion. ]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514130029 ig3000 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514130309 Good job,
you did a wonder full job you gave good reason and details i love how you said everything correct  you did a really good job 🎊

]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514130309 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514131348 i like that your reasons are not all just from the article .]]> 2021-05-11 16:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514131348 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514137931 Nice job with your reasons. You made the essay sound very sophisticated. I also like that it was so long]]> 2021-05-11 16:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514137931 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514143178 good job I like how you gave good reasons and its long ]]> 2021-05-11 16:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514143178 cw1600 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514155336 That had me in tears it was so amazing.]]> 2021-05-11 16:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514155336 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514155732 Thank you for volunteering to share your essay with the class.
You did an excellent job presenting evidence from the article and your own supporting details. Your conclusion was very respectful, pointing out that everyone can have their own opinion. You gave strong support or your opinion.]]> 2021-05-11 16:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514155732 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514157582 nice details]]> 2021-05-11 16:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514157582 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514166128 I like how your essay was so long, Good job]]> 2021-05-11 16:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514166128 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514169351 You gave really good details, good job]]> 2021-05-11 16:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1514169351 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521661286 Janaya,
It was clear what your position was! You presented it with strong facts with good text evidence. 
Also, I am so pleased that you offered to let me show it in class! How could I teach with out you!]]> 2021-05-13 16:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521661286 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521664024 I really love how you really felt very strong about your feelings and had amazing detail. Also it was very informative but entertaining i loved it! ]]> 2021-05-13 16:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521664024 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521666366 i like all of the details and your explanation and i also like the font blue is one of my favorate colors strong conculsion]]> 2021-05-13 16:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521666366 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521681977 it was nice you pit so much detail in to it. ]]> 2021-05-13 16:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521681977 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521682371 I like how you included text evidence and "non" boring words.]]> 2021-05-13 16:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521682371 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521693410 hank you for doing main idea those beautiful story was nice.]]> 2021-05-13 16:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521693410 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521695917 I love it . you have good detail]]> 2021-05-13 16:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521695917 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521712633 I thought your essay was well written. I thought referring to video games as a hobby was a very good way to think about them. All hobbies are not sports.]]> 2021-05-13 16:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521712633 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521716886 I love how You stuck with your idea and gave very valid reasoning and evidence that video games should not be considered a sport.]]> 2021-05-13 16:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521716886 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521717524 i love the word choice and details and your explanation ]]> 2021-05-13 16:26:52 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521717524 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521720689 wow that was a clear as glass report you made it very easy to understandind it was very informational and amazing ]]> 2021-05-13 16:27:35 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521720689 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521721074 it was amazing really detailed]]> 2021-05-13 16:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521721074 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521725064 good job the detail in a main idea]]> 2021-05-13 16:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1521725064 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216147 I so enjoyed hearing your essay. One of my favorite parts was when you gave the definition for a sport. ]]> 2021-05-14 16:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216147 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216358 I like how you tried your best to say some of the words.you did not give up on pronouncing the words.good work.]]> 2021-05-14 16:09:23 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216358 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216927 that was really good I like how you wrote it.]]> 2021-05-14 16:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525216927 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525217125 You provided a lot of text evidence]]> 2021-05-14 16:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525217125 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525218889 Your flipgrid was very well done and was creative.]]> 2021-05-14 16:09:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525218889 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525222219 I really like the wording and how you added the fact that kids need exercise. ]]> 2021-05-14 16:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525222219 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525234451 I like how she took her time to read the words and she took the time to write it and read it to the class and how video games should not be a sport.]]> 2021-05-14 16:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525234451 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525237046 i love all the reasons you had in your essay ]]> 2021-05-14 16:14:03 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525237046 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525237208 I love the information you used to prove your point.]]> 2021-05-14 16:14:05 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525237208 skramer21 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241301 Thank you for sharing your essay. It was a good example of an argument essay. It was interesting to me that you switched the words video games with sitting. It was very powerful. ]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241301 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241636 I like how you wrote what you thought about it, and how you know it is not a sport.]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241636 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241668 I like how he explained how video games are not good for your health or your body and that you need to move around and run and have more activity than you would in video games.]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241668 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241747 I like how you provided many strong reasons]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525241747 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525242028 The details that you put in there was good and I like your facts.]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:18 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525242028 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525242298 I like the word choices you used and it was very easy to listen to]]> 2021-05-14 16:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525242298 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525244149 2021-05-14 16:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525244149 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525246233 2021-05-14 16:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525246233 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525253646 2021-05-14 16:18:05 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525253646 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525264007 2021-05-14 16:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1525264007 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1531897691 2021-05-17 15:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1531897691 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1531911356 2021-05-17 15:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1531911356 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1535659776 2021-05-18 13:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1535659776 https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1535712326 2021-05-18 14:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/skramer21/sfvyjxnw46c1sh69/wish/1535712326